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Reviews for Darkness Within your Light

By : mayablackwolf
  • From on November 03, 2008
    *jaw drop*

    i can't believe you updated so fast!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

    this was a really touching chappie, i love the ending, it was absolutely perfect!

    keep up the great work and please update soon! XD
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  • From SailorAurora on November 02, 2008
    *puts out birthday cake for L*

    that was such a sweet ending to a chapter! ^^ although of course he has a lot to explain still... ^^;
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  • From greeneyes40988 on November 02, 2008
    That was fraking great... I mean Raito admitted to being Kira and L's ok with it... This is great, so wonderful.... And the whole L being awake when Raito was telling him he loved him and then L telling him back that was just beautiful... but I can't wait for the next chapter so yeah... oh and about the whole lemon no lemon thing, there should difently be Lemon....
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  • From ANON - Draug on November 02, 2008
    Aww sweet zakis back. im glad death gods are so specific i was kinda scared for matsuda there but serves him right for shooting light(hehe that rhymes).Some nice twists n this chapter keep up the good work. Oh and please please please put a lemon in pweety please
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  • From lovelle7 on November 02, 2008
    Aaahww :) I'm so happy right now and I'm going to be happy for the rest of the week to since I'm going to live on this chapter. It was so adorable I almost squealed of my chair :) I'm really greatfull that you posted earlier too, I was so nervous, hehe. And I'm also happy I'm not gonna die anytime soon :D And who wants to wait untill they got married? I certainly don't, I want a lemon! I wote for the lemon since I (like you) have a perverted mind, moahaha. I loved this chapter, cant wait 'till next :)
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  • From ANON - gryphonwills on November 02, 2008
    Nice!!!
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  • From DecadentDreams on November 02, 2008
    I'm so glad you updated so quickly!
    That cliffhanger made me anxious, I don't know if I would've been able to wait much longer.
    And that goal you set for yourself, well... you've gone above and beyond with the unexpected plot-twists.

    And Oooh, this chapter was so warm and fuzzy it made me cuddle up with stuffed animals after reading it.
    Haha...
    I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds. You really know how to get a reader hooked!
    I would've liked to see a little bit of the shooting fiasco from Lawliet's point of view...
    But the story on the whole makes up for that ten times over.
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  • From on October 31, 2008
    this is bound to be THE BEST death note story i have read to date...and there have been many...many many

    i absolutely loooooooove the fluff! ^-^ they're so sweet together
    and the plot line...don't even start with that, it's absolutely fucking amazing!!! @.@ everything just...flows and the story comes together very nicely.

    keep up the great work and please please please update soon!!!! :D

    this is such an awesome story, i love it so much!
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  • From DecadentDreams on October 30, 2008
    Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh, I'm speechless!
    You were right, those plot-twists threw me for a loop! and that cliffhanger...
    Gosh, I don't know if I could wait for the next chapter...
    I mean... wow...
    Totally didn't see any of that coming, I love how unpredictable everything is!
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  • From lovelle7 on October 30, 2008
    How clumsy of me to forget to tell... It's L Lawliets birthday tomorrow so everybody send your thoughts to him :)
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  • From ANON - Draug on October 30, 2008
    Grr i hate you but i love you now. That was one good plot twist and it was a funny chapter in my eyre atleast until you nearly killed watari. Please update soon i can't go on knowing that light may die again.
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  • From lovelle7 on October 30, 2008
    You are making me go crazy!!! Do you want me to die!? That was the most evil cliffhanger I've read in my whole life! I was screaming out load "Neeeeeej!!!" (thats noooo in swedish) My boyfriend even turned around and looked at me like I was som crazy idiot (wich I am somtimes =3). You have to post next chapter NOW or I'm gonna die... I dont wanna die, make Raito write my name in the Life Note :) Well I have to say something about the first part of this chapter too don't I :) I definately turd red from Raitos embarrasment and for trying to get my usual pale skintone back I tried to laugh it off, well not just beause it was embarrasing it was really funny too :) My boyfriend wondered why I was laughing so hysterically so he tried to steal my computer to read the fic, but thats boyfriend taboo! He already knows that it is a yaoi fic, he just want me to blush...dammit. Anyway please please please update soon! If I couldn't wait for you to update earlier it worse now :)
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  • From SailorAurora on October 30, 2008
    you're right, this was really unexpected.

    and yet another cliffhanger.... you really love making your readers squirm, don't you?? :o
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  • From greeneyes40988 on October 29, 2008
    That Was FREAKING GREAT!!!! So much happened OMG!!! I'm like totally flipping right now....WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING... I wanna know so bad.... This chapter was great, I seriously love you like a fat kid loves cake.....Damn....Awesome... I can't wait for the next chapter so please hurry and put out the next chapter cause I love you bunches.....
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  • From ANON - gryphonwills on October 29, 2008
    Nice!!!!
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