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Reviews for Darkness Within your Light

By : mayablackwolf
  • From Linkala on October 29, 2008
    Okay, it's official, I like fluff. I used to hate fluff but now you've made me love it. Let's recap on what this story has made me do since I started reading it ...

    1. You made me post a review on AFF.net
    2. You made me register to AFF.net
    3. You restored my faith in fanfiction and general belief in the existence of good writers
    4. You've made me anticipate an update of this story more-so than my fortnightly paycheck
    5. You've inspired me to draw yaoi again ever since I stopped working for a yaoi website
    6. And now you've made me like fluff (a near impossible feat)

    And good grief, don't I sound like a gushing fangirl? Oh well, lol. The drawings are coming along, very slowly, it's incredibly hard for me to capture L and Light's features properly, the only ones who can really do it are the creators of Death Note, and this doesn't include me unfortunately but I'm trying my hardest.
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  • From greeneyes40988 on October 25, 2008
    Awww.... I love it, Raito telling L he loved him...In French... So Romantic... But anyways can't wait to see if L actually has some use of that bullet proof vest or not...Hehe .. Can't wait to see Raito's dad reaction and such.. But Your great...Awesome... so can't wait for the next the chapter....
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  • From DecadentDreams on October 25, 2008
    I love this latest chapter!
    It gave me the warm 'n fuzzies all over.
    ^ w ^
    I can't wait to see how Soichiro (Raito's father) reacts...
    That and the plot turns...
    plot turns are awesome! Keeps me on my toes!
    Haha...
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  • From ANON - Aurora Moon on October 25, 2008
    of course L would be suspicious. who wouldn't be? even if it was somebody you loved, having them mysteriously heal fast would certainly raise a few eyebrows.

    I'm so looking forward to Mr.Yagami's reactions, heheh.
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  • From ANON - Draug on October 24, 2008
    Hehe yay for fulff. This is getting really good it gets better each chapter and i just want to keep reading. I just know that yagimis rection will be hilarious but im kinda worried for L. Hmm well i hope you don't separate the two
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  • From lovelle7 on October 24, 2008
    Hihi this story makes me feel so many feelings :) I laught at the first sentence, it was really funny written. A moment later I was all 'aww' a bit later than that it was like 'oh shit'. This story makes you emotionally involved and I love that. You descibe it so well so I feel whatever the charactes are feeling. I love hot coco too *drools I wouldn't pass up on that :) Please update soon cause I love your story (you know that :) )
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  • From ANON - gryphonwills on October 24, 2008
    Nice!
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  • From DecadentDreams on October 23, 2008
    Oh my gosh, please please please update!
    Your story's brilliant!
    Really, truly brilliant!

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  • From Linkala on October 20, 2008
    Hehehe... Ryuk in a tutu, as soon as I read that line I got a scrap of paper and roughly drew how I pictured it, the drawing had little JD in hysterics all afternoon (laughing hysterics, not traumatized hysterics) I was going to scan it and email it to you but then my little hell-spawn spilled his Ribena all over it. I shall make it up to you with a few romantic pics of L and Light together, when I get some free time, and if I can capture Light's shinigami form exactly how it is in my imagination. How about L in his chibi strawberry pjs?

    Once again another superb chapter, I find myself hanging out for a new chapter of this story almost as much as I'm hanging out for the release of Fable 2. Honestly, at this rate, if you happened to add a new chapter and at the same time I came home with a copy of Fable 2 I'd probably push the game aside and break out the Pocky and Marshmallows. *Shares large tray of P&M with author and other reviewers*
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  • From ANON - gryphonwills on October 17, 2008
    I like.
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  • From greeneyes40988 on October 16, 2008
    hehe...*Snickers*hehe....Reflexes like a freakin cat....hehe..... Anyways this was a really good chapter, you had everyone in character but was still able to bend them to suite your plot. The whole L faking being sulky and angry with Raito seems like something he would really do. Also it nice to know that Raito has Zaki in his mind to comfort him thoughout this experience. So you made me very happy, I love this story. hehe...Ryuk in a pink tutu...hehe...so funny...
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  • From lovelle7 on October 16, 2008
    Aww haha chibistrawberry pyjamas of doom X3. Haha Raito has a hickey. There were a lot of funny things in this chapter. Life has been a bitch to me too today… My computer has been messing with me and the internet hasn’t been what it usually is. But I reviewed now at last… The end was adorable and I’m worried about what Mr. Yagami’s going to do to Ryuzaki. Poor Ryuzaki hasn’t done anything wrong, he just expressed his feelings a little, tihi. I guess Raito has to save him :3 Anyway great chapter I’m longing for the next :3
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  • From ANON - Draug on October 16, 2008
    How could we forget zaki? Well anyway random chaters of random fluff make the world go round right especial where those two are concernerd. Plot id nice too though just try not to be to mea n to them.Mmm kay. Ciao for now
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  • From SailorAurora on October 16, 2008
    Yet another fluffy chapter which I enjoyed as well... with a bit of plot thickening there and here.

    overrall, a excellent read which took my mind off my current frustation writing my Death Note fanfiction "The rise and fall of kira" on adultfanfiction here. You can find it in the AU section, snice it's an alterate universe fanfiction which combines elements from the manga, anime and live action movies. Yeah, that's basically a shameless plug from me... ^^;;

    Ever had that feeling where you don't know what is about to happen next. you have an vauge idea, but you can't just seem to write it down. And the characters aren't just obeying....
    I hate that. -_- oh well...
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  • From Linkala on October 14, 2008
    *Drools* Oh wow, if that was the lime I can't wait for any lemons you may be thinking of. You're a natural, and believe me I know what I'm talking about, I used to make a living via drawing for a yaoi website ... hehehe, please don't judge me *blushes*

    I'm over the flu now but my son is unfortunately still sick, at the moment he's curled up on the couch hugging his L panda and crying, and I can't do anything else to make him feel better ;_;

    I love this story, I really do, whenever a new chapter is posted I do a little happy dance in my chair and the rest of my day seems really good. Something tells me the story is going to get a bit sad and/or angsty from here, which normally I hate the prospect of, but this time I'm okay with it because I really wanna know what happens next. I may be wrong though, your story has so many delightful twists and turns :)
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