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By : ArchangelM127
  • From ANON - OREZ on July 01, 2009
    I love your story, I hope that Leluch still alive and that Kallen join Lelouch.
    I think that Lelouch should stoped the requiem if he learns that he is the father.
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  • From ANON - All That Is Left Unsaid on June 18, 2009
    I vote female for the gender of their child, if for no other reason than Lelouch is completely whipped by all the girls in his life. If you intend to give the child Lelouch's eyes, then I'd suggest Kallen's hair color, given that it probably won't look Japanese since it would be 3/4 Britannian.

    In regards to the opening of chapter 10. Kallen should not be 'bouncing' or anything at this point in the story. She knows that Nunally was to Lelouch what Naoto was to her, so she should be rushing to him in a semi-panicked concern for his sanity, not giddyness to see him again.

    That being said, it was a good chapter, and I totally agree with your notes on crying things out. If only someone had gotten the chance to say this to Lelouch in canon...
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  • From ANON - Analulu on June 14, 2009
    A girl ! And she has to have Lelouch's hair and Kallen's eyes ! Blue eyes Luluko
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  • From Platinumsabr on June 12, 2009
    A bit on the short side, which to be perfectly honest is a bit annoying after the wait for this chapter to come out. Seriously, this section needs a lot more M/F, especially ones as well-written as yours. Still, you managed to cram a lot of emotion and a rather nice plot-device into the small amount of space, so I commend you on that. I can't say I saw the pregnancy coming, but it wasn't really that much of a surprise either. It fit in really well.

    Well, now I'm off to go brood about having to wait for the next chapter of this artfully crafted work to come out.
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  • From ANON - tenohikari on May 02, 2009
    Awesome story so far. Lelouch/Kallen have to be my favorite het pairing of the series. I love how Lulu dubbed her his knight and got Kallen's mother out of jail for her. Can't wait for more - hope we can see scenes of the Chinese Federation pre-wedding scenes.
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  • From ANON - malulu on April 12, 2009
    ...Hot.
    Need more :333
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  • From ANON - Hands of stone on March 29, 2009
    wow, didn't see that coming.
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  • From Platinumsabr on March 11, 2009
    Since I too know that feedback is a fanfiction writer's only reward, I just had to commend you on an amazing job, and of course the necessary 'please continue' inherent of all good works of writing. Your vision is amazing, preferable even, though admittedly I was one of those who had downloaded and watched the entire two seasons long before it was ever out in English.

    I sincerely hope you continue! Your universe in enrapturing, and I hope you've been equally drawn into your vision as to continue until your decided end. So many possibilities...
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  • From ANON - Sakura_youki on February 23, 2009
    I just got to read your updates. I too have suffered prolonging fanfic updates due to school or sickness, and I thank you for dedicating a chapter to me.

    Awesome story!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2009
    cmon hurry up or i will track you down and force you to write at gunpoint!!!!!!!!!!! jk but do hurry plz
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  • From on January 19, 2009
    hiyas jsut to let you know you might wana change my anme when you dedicate the alpha readers i changed it myself tis nolonger animefreak859 that sounded a bit to obsesive for my taste so now its just mikey and btw love the story cant get nuf of it jsut thought it leave a post on here for once
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  • From ANON - hilde on January 19, 2009
    Nice! I don't usually read het fics but this one is worth reading!

    Very good in my opinion!

    *raises hand about the chicken beatings*
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  • From ANON - Farsight on January 15, 2009
    My god, thank you, a writer who listens to reviewers! I really am happy you changed it, I understand that Kallen being in such an environment would lead to some problems, hopefully not as far as it was as I hoped kallen would defend herself, but in a story that has built up a lot of fluff between the characters and has a great rhythm going, the idea of her being raped really did leave an awful taste in my mouth and seemed to lessen the strength of what you had built between the characters.

    And I do have to applaud you an skillfully navigating Code Geass thus far and keeping the characters as they are (the changes in the story and such)

    Keep up the good work and try not to keep us waiting to long (slight encouragement, not a reader bitching, just to clarify, lol)

    BTW, if you ever need another beta reader I would be happy to volunteer

    Email at Ezra_il@linuxmail.org
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  • From animefan29 on January 10, 2009
    So that's how you changed the Black Rebellion. I like how Kallen doesn't blame Lelouch and understands him.
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  • From ANON - Farsight on January 10, 2009
    *Raising hand*

    ...Wait...you mean we aren't going to assault him with faux poultry?

    Since this is unedited, could you do me a teansy weansy favor and NOT rape kallen?

    I'm sorry but that all just left a bitter taste in my mouth to be honest, I mean, I can understand that naturally there would be issues with kallen in a bunny suit and all, but don't RAPE her!

    Please, this is coming from somebody who checks your page on a semi-daily basis just for updates, don't do that to your fans!

    If you are going to edit this, please please please make just a minor change!
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