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By : ArchangelM127
  • From ANON - x to the z on January 10, 2009
    nice chapter.
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  • From Sakurayoukai on January 04, 2009
    Please update soon. There's not enough Lulu/Kallen fics!!!!
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  • From animefan29 on November 26, 2008
    Hmm. Odd, I would have thought that you would have gone with the Kamiya island episode. There was a lot of potential for you to work with there, and I personally would have been interested in seeing how the now love-struck Black Knights interacting with Euphi and Suzaku. As for how this chapter went, well personally it wasn't my favorite and in fact somewhat worries me about what you have planned.
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  • From ANON - mplantz on November 24, 2008
    hey whats up? this is pretty good, and i would like to see more.
    and even if you don't feel like posting it online just send me it in a e-mail or something.
    hey check out a couple of my stories on my profile. my name is mplantz so go read acouple of my stories.

    m.plantz@yahoo.com
    MPlantz
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  • From Xagzan on October 28, 2008
    You are doing a wonderful job at character portrayal, particularly Zero/Lulu. You absolutely must continue.

    Oh, and the second scene of the first chapter, yep, I always draw parallels between this and V for Vendetta too. Good thinking.
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  • From animefan29 on October 26, 2008
    This is an incredible sweet fic. Personally I think Lelouch needed something to ground him. I think a few screws might have been coming loose near the end from how he must always seperate himself from others.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 19, 2008
    This is pretty cute so far. Interesting alternate universe scenario you're starting, and I'm interested to see where you go with it.

    "Sore wa himitsu desu"? Am I sensing a Slayers fan here? :P

    My one recommendation is that you do something to set apart thoughts from the prose. It's just a little confusing as it is. Most people, in my experience with fanfiction, do so by either using italics or single-quotes.
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  • From ANON - jack johnson on October 17, 2008
    I really like this idea that you are going with right now.
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  • From ANON - Big Ralf on October 09, 2008
    really cool idea.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on October 08, 2008
    Awww thank you for the shout out.

    I think its so cute that Kallen likes his hair. I do like that you're not making Lulu too soft, because he's not. And I like the intelengence and cold caculating of Lelouch.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on October 06, 2008
    I really liked the way you ended this. Good job not making either of them too sappy, they are both very ferice warriors and I like the you handle them.
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