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Reviews for The Harem Slave

By : LotornoMiko
  • From Scorpinac on October 21, 2009
    Well, at least they're sort of progressing... And Lotor had a pretty good point about her being a little too overprotected. Now, if they can just make a little, itsy bisty teensy bit more. So what are you going to do about that FF.net nut job? Track her down and send Lotor to assassinate her? Just kidding. Sorta... Well, until 110, then. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on October 16, 2009
    When she compared him to Zarkon, I almost expected Lotor to reply, "I'm not Zarkon." Oh, well, ce la vie. Nice coronation, and I have to say liked how Haggar held her back, and that she closed her eyes when the swords came down, but from the sounds of it those three were literally hacked to pieces! Ouch... And now I take taht newly introduced gal will be taking up residence as top villain? Has to be some kind of conflict to keep this puppy going all the way to chapter 131. Well, until 107, then. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on October 13, 2009
    Hmm, that was an interesting way for Lotor to vent some of his immediate anger, and somehow appropriate, as was Zarkon getting dumped pauper like into the Pit of Skulls. I got to say chapter 104 was exceptionally well written, I was very moved, especially with the twist at the end with the crib, and I liked the juxtaposition of the two funerals. Many kudos! It occurs to me, though, that Cossack could have an illegitimate child or two out there, after all he did say he "got around". It's not like very mother informs the father or bothers to marry him, right? Well, until chapter 105, then. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on October 11, 2009
    Ah, man... At least you gave him a nice send off. Does this make it a Pyrrhic victory, of sorts? And yeah, Lotor probably would have killed him if he'd tried at any other time, huh? Guess I can't blame him for a dying wish. Speaking of, Lotor and his group had a heck of a time getting into the throne room, but hey, at least they managed it. I imagine within the next few chapters we'll find out who tattled on Lotor? Well, until chapter 103. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on October 10, 2009
    Ding dong, the wicked King is dead! Etc. Nice battle, loved every second, well done! One thing, this chapter is marked 101, did you accidentally forget to post 100? Well, until next time, and hopefully saving both Allura and Cossack. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Deenasaur on October 08, 2009
    Unghhhhhhh!!!! I want to badly for Allura just to LOVVVEEEEE HIMMMM!!!! -pulls hair out-
    This story is making my anxiety spiral out of control. Lol
    But it's far too amazing to stop reading.
    -sighs- if she leaves him, I am going to be sorely dissapointed...
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  • From Scorpinac on October 07, 2009
    And the final battle is nigh! Can't wait to see Zarkon's final moments. And I really hope you didn't kill Cossack after all, I actually find myself liking the guy, or at least your characterization of him. And I'm definitely looking forward to seeing who just ran him through, I mean how could Zarkon have sent someone so fast?! If it was even him! Ooh, now I'm in suspense! Until chapter 100, then. Laters! 100...whoa...
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  • From Scorpinac on October 06, 2009
    Well, that was an interesting part of the ride. At least Lotor's starting to realize how bad he's been, that's something, anyway. And just when I thought Zarkon couldn't get any nastier, you go and prove me wrong. Good for you! 131... ooh, that's long. Can't help but wonder what's gonna fill everything after Zarkon's history. Well, until chapter 99, then. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on October 01, 2009
    To be honest, I kept hoping for Lotor to just pass out from being too drunk, but sadly it didn't happen. But at least he snapped to his sense enough to stop in time. And I agree, there'd just be no way Lotor would let Cossack live after such a fiasco! Though maybe later Cossack could admit to having thought about slipping Allura a love potion but changed his mind.

    The play, what little we saw, so to speak, was nice, and sounded suspiciously like an alternate take on "Romeo and Juliet", right down to the name... Oh, well, no matter. Until chapter 96, then. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on September 28, 2009
    Oh, were they the ones who had a meeting with Zarkon and Lotor in the Harem room? Cause I vaguely seem to recall that. Well, the plan has begun, here's hoping it work's out with few problems, but as I believe the saying goes, "The best laid plans of something, something...."

    Sadly, Zarkon's staying true to form, but that's why we hate him, don't we? Well, until chapter 94, then. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on September 27, 2009
    Okay, you're not exactly giving me a warm fuzzy with that commentary...

    So when it said it needed blood, it was only sort of literal. I can almost see the look on Zarkon's face now, in utter dead pan shock! But at least we finally got to see Voltron in this fic, that's something at least. And yet again into AU ville we go, since I can't recall Voltron absolutely needing Allura or someone of her family in a lion in order to assemble it before; in fact I rather vividly remember the five space explorers doing it twice with no problems at all(and would have continued to do so had Haggar not killed Sven!). Oh, well, at least the war's almost over, and I agree at not really wanting to read another one so soon on it's heels. Until chapter 92, then. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on September 24, 2009
    Ah, getting some sweetness in, I see. Kind of figures the trauma would give her a nightmare or two. And I can't say I'm too surprised that Zarkon bolted like a rat. Sorry to hear about your cat, I know how it feels(lost a dog just over a year ago and it still hurts a little to think about her leaving), hope you feel better soon. Well, until chapter 90, then...90...oooh... Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on September 20, 2009
    I thought as much, given all the "children" comments from Haggar. Haggar without her magic, what an odd thought. And Lotor, welcome to the wonderful world of triage - the dying and almost dying get served first, deal with it. I look forward to the twins births and the revelation of the genders; I'll put down $50 on one of each. Until chapter 88, then. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on September 16, 2009
    Ouch, that clearly took a lot out of Haggar. I'm not worried only because you assured me there's brow beating for Lotor and Cossack coming from her. Hasta la vista, Cortona! Almost a pity, for a one chapter appearance only she was actually a rather interesting OC. Oh, well. Now, to off Zarkon and Merla! And possibly to unlock the true secret of forming Voltron. And from the sounds of it, when you get depressed Allura suffers almost excessively, poor girl. I imagine the rest of the V-Team doesn't do too well, either. Well, until chapter 86, then. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on September 13, 2009
    Whoo, about time. Too bad no one thought to try and cancel the viruses after they arrived. And, yeah, a little upsetting about Romelle, but then Lotor was expecting to live long enough to have to explain what actually happened to her, was he? And I see Zarkon took off like a rat, or found a place to hide at least. And what happened to Allura?! She can't be dead, you wouldn't do that...at least, I don't think you would, and you wouldn't get all the way to over a hundred chapters if you did. Though I'm guessing she is trapped somewhere. Oh, well, I guess I'll just have to wait on pins and needles until Chapter 84 for the answers. Until then. Laters.
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