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From Ninelives on November 15, 2008
Matt! go and cuddle with Mello!
LOL i'm very clingy in bed. I mean, i love to cuddle and fall asleep like that, to the point of being annoying XD but it's probably the best thing in life.
You are fucking beautiful, Matty. Especially when you're naked, tied down and bleeding, as opposed to giving me lip.
That was mean, Mello! anyway, Matt with a black eye is damn hot, i missed it too.
Nice chap, very heart-warming.

p.s.: you can't use the "�" letter?
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From DeathNoteFangirl on November 15, 2008
*grin* When I do the author's note at the end, I'll be bigging up a team of MxM Catholic advisors, who are sitting in a LJ community thinking up Mello's take on whatever Matt could throw at him. One of them explained something to me as 'stfu I iz God', so I ran with it. 8D

Yay! You got the 'shiny, pretty' reference!

Ooops, I really ought to look at Matt's grammar, hadn't I? *snigger*

Mmmm... who knows about Ms Bullook? Mmmm...
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From TsukinoMelissa on November 14, 2008
"Look, little Eevee, Squirtle, Munchlax, Mew, Pikachu..."

Off topic, but Eevee, Mew, and Pikachu were my top three favorite Pokemon.

You are the noob and God is the Leet programmer. He has haxored code that you don't even suspect is there. In fact, He doesn't need to haxor it, he wrote the thing. You were all 'stfu I is teh pwnage'. You try going to Heaven and telling God that He's got it wrong allowing people to be in Hell and He'd say, 'stfu I is God.'"

BEST EXPLANATION EVER. Only Matt would need religion explained to him in l33t speak. xD

Mello laughed. "Thank you for taking an interest, Matty. Would you like the shiny, pretty thing back now?" He held it out until Matt took it.

SHINY PRETTY!

"Did I say you wasn't?"

Matt's grammar is astounding. x3 haha

Matt peered warily at him. "Doesn't 'being framed' imply that someone's innocent?" He sighed. "Mello, you have such a fucking blind spot for her. Just because she fancies the arse off you, you think she's a good woman. Look at the evidence! She didn't tell you about Mikami. She told you only what Near fed her to tell you. That says to me that it was less friendship and more a case of Near using her to use you."

Oh Matt, stop being jealous. No, I'm just kidding. Halle Bullock, you better not be framing Mello. But I'm with Mello on this one. *huge blindspot* XDDD
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From DeathNoteFangirl on November 14, 2008
Nine Lives: LOL I hadn't considered it like that, but yes, they do! LOL I've got the giggles now too. I also think it's sweet to see Mello more comfortable in his own skin.

Melissa: Dream on, sweetheart. LOL I've just pictured Mello in a tutu, with daisies, and my mind ran for cover. :p Thanks for the compliments about my story. :D
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From TsukinoMelissa on November 13, 2008
"I'm in a book!" Mello showed him. "I haven't even skim-read it yet, so I don't know precisely how badly they've got it wrong, but I'm in it. Near isn't."

Little does Mello know, the snippet with him in it is actually a bad fanfiction in which he wears a tutu and gives daisies to the people passing by while big bad seme!Matt sneaks up behind him and...

No I'm just kidding. ANYWAYS! I was just thinking how badly I needed some more good fanfiction to read since I finished Watari part 2 AND HERE IT IS. And I can't get enough of it~~~!!
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From Ninelives on November 13, 2008
Aw it's cute that sometimes they act like dad and child. It makes me giggle.

It's nice to see Mello being more confortable with being gay, holding Matt's hand in public and stuff
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From DeathNoteFangirl on November 13, 2008
Melissa:

Yay! Welcome to AFF! *happy dances*

I'm glad it's working for you. :D That last quote was actually Morgie's. I'm writing this one alone, without pinging off things in role-play, but she appeared in chat just as I was writing that scene. I told her that I was struggling getting the precise tone for Mello and pasted in the context. She wrote that out and I nicked it and shoved it into the story. Perfect!

Yeah, they do angst. *grin*

Nine Lives:

Mello kept on that he was just waiting for Matt to heal. After all the gentle!Mello we kept seeing around the place though, I had my doubts. I'm so glad that he was telling the truth after all! Yay!

Yes, the football and badly bruised ribs one was much worse, but it got turned into sex. I still maintain that the beginning of that was domestic violence, however much they both wanted to transmute it into S&M by the finish. There have been a few grey areas throughout the series. Matt's reaction is confusing. He really does need to be consistent and set some boundaries; but he's not consistent and doesn't want to set boundaries.

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From Ninelives on November 12, 2008
OMG
And Mello wanted us to think it was only Matt who wanted to continue with the rough sex during the last fic!
*wipes nosebleed* Great lemon. Oh and sex in the kitchen! I don't know why it's so hot, but it sure is.

And yeah, I guess you're right. It's just that we've seen mello hurting Matt when it was hardly about sex (like that time where he kicked him in the ribs a bit too hard), and i think i can't tell when it's one thing or the other of if Matt really cares, or just complains ecause he's pissed....

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From TsukinoMelissa on November 12, 2008
Holy shit! I made an account here for the first time ever. Huzzah! Um... oh where to start.

"Did you ever stop to think what happened to American junkies after most of the Mafia there were killed by Kira?"

"Can't say it's filled my every waking thought, no."
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I love Matt's sarcasm! XDDD I laughed at it (and Mello's) multiple times throughout this. xD Per usual.
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"Ok, what have the little shits been up to now?"

"It's not the children." Hal sighed.

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This being a perfect example!
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"Ok." Mello lowered his chocolate. "Matt, do you consent to hot, violent sex?"

Matt laughed. "Yes. Every time."

"Hal! I have an idea." Mello sniggered. "I'll switch on the webcam, then fuck his brains out with you watching and you will be able to see his reactions..."

"No, Mello! Please don't kiss me! I don't want you to! Noooo!"

"Yeah you do." Mello kissed him loudly again. "Kiss me, bitch!"
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This WHOLE part had me laughing hysterically! I can just imagine Hal's face! XDDD
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"Right." Mello typed 'Venezuela' underneath 'Peru'. "Talk to Fenian and get him to talk to Lamond. She fancies the arse off him. Next?"
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Noooooo! D: Lamond, he's mine!
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"Matty, I'm sometimes amazed you can dress yourself in the morning. I've seen you trying to push doors that need to be pulled open."
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AHAHAHAHHAHAHA! YES! *has done it before herself* Matt r genius!
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"You'll have to pick it out then. You laughed at me the last time I said something would look great on you. You said it was tacky and I had no style at all."
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He's got a point, Matt. I mean, I love you. But...
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"Get me some cake and lock the door, shut off my phone, disconnect us from the Wammy's network and make sure I don't do anything. Want something I haven't had in 21 years? A bit of fucking peace. That would be absolutely bloody perfect! Think you can arrange that?"
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Poor Mello keeps angsting his cute little ass off. :( He's such a... haha "wanker" for sure. xDDD! I dunno why he gets like this. He's just going to apologize and angst more over it later. -sigh- And just when I thought these two were done angsting! Silly me~ Most angsty couple ever, I swear! XD Well, now that I've fapped my hand off, I shall patiently wait for a new update. :D

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From DeathNoteFangirl on November 12, 2008
Yay! I'm glad. 8D

I'm already happier with this than I ever was with Watari Pt 2. I think it's because, though I know vaguely where this is going, I don't know exactly, so I'm coming on the journey with you. Plus, Mello and Matt are practically writing themselves, which is always good. *happy dance*

Poor Hal indeed, though I can't see her being quite the stooge that Mello and Matt had in mind when they suggested/supported her getting the position. The woman was a bit of a rebel, in following her own moral code, when she was working for Near, so I can't see her changing much now.

As for the domestic violence, that'll be the bit where Mello dragged him out of bed and threw him up the wall. Ok, I know that smells and looks exactly like foreplay for these pair, but sex wasn't on their minds. Funnily enough, Miyamashi also said, 'what domestic violence?' when I spammed her with a snippet of it.

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From Ninelives on November 12, 2008
Waaaa! I've read the four chapters and I'm totally hooked already!

I pity Hal LOL Mello is imposible. i can imagine one of those meetings at Wammy's, everybody discussing if Matt is considered as a "consent adult" LOL it's amusing that everybody's talking about their sex life and they're not embarrased or anything.

So, Mello's pissed cause after all, Near's still number one, getting all the interesting cases for himself? >.< That brat!
But anyway, what's with Matt? why did he said that about domestic violence? it was a little cruel I think.
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From DeathNoteFangirl on November 12, 2008
Thank you very much. 8D
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