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By : Savaial

From Savaial on November 07, 2009
Thanks, readers and reviewers. Several of you expressed an interest in the playing card fortune telling. The modern playing card does come from tarot cards, and there IS a system by which you can read your fortune with ordinary cards. Here is but one of the many resources you can use to learn more.- http://www.tarotteachings.com/playing-cards-for-tarot-reading.html
Lara, you are so sweet. Thanks for that support.
Angel Reaper, Catholics aren't nearly as uptight about gambling (gross generalization here) as Protestants. To go by the teachings of Christianity, no one is supposed to make bets or gamble, but as usual, people pick and choose what they like and don't like about their religion. I sell too many Powerball and scratch-offs during my work shifts to come to any other conclusion, lol.
I don't think it unbelievable that Anderson would know the cards. He's a Biblical scholar and I imagine he would "Know thine enemy". I'm giving him a little flexibility here, too, because he's a fallen priest. The knowledge he had stored away just came in handy. Notice he didn't handle the cards when using them for tarot, only during simple gaming.
Anderson violates Christian law a lot in the real storyline. Thou Shalt Not Kill comes to mind, lol.
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From ANON - Angel Reaper on November 06, 2009
Ah, I do think I'm becoming more tolerant of Anderson and Seras moments. It's kinda amusing how they're getting drunk together. Still, I can't wait until they return back to headquarters so Alucard and Seras can have quality time together.

Hm, an interesting chapter, especially with the fortune telling. Did you research all that information, or do you practice it yourself? Personally, I'm not sure how believable it is that Anderson knows how to fortune tell; my mom is a strict Christian, and she always freaked out about Tarot cards and Ouija boards and the like. I would imagine that Catholics would freak out even further. But I suppose you could argue that Anderson has to have a thorough knowledge of the occult to fight against it, so fortune telling isn't out of the question.

I can't wait for the next chapter, please continue!

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From ANON - Rijichou on November 06, 2009
I would like to commend your excellent writing skills. I have never watched or read Hellsing, and my purely random chancing upon your fic really opened me up to an awesome story.

I love the instances of dark humour, and especially the extensive character development you have here for all of the main characters. I also appreciate the development of the storyline as well as the absence of meaningless graphic sexual details present in so many other fics. In fact, I've read the entire 63 chapters in under a day because it was pure bliss doing so. I ache to read more of this, but I also do understand that quality work requires time and effort. I really enjoy this and you're doing a real good job with the story. I'll be checking for updates every night ;)
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From lara5170 on November 06, 2009
Every single time I read more of what you write it touches me so deeply that your characters are so real, I finish reading and then panic that there won't be more to read as soon as possible.
I hate to think of going a day ...............make that a few hours without more of your writing. I have read & reread so much of this story that I'm waiting, hoping, expecting,wondering & wishing,constantly thinking about the story. I have to force myself not to check for updates on your story 20 times a day.
Your writing is a gift & I'm just extremely grateful that you share it & that I found it.
You have an amazing mind

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From ANON - mosh on November 05, 2009
I loved this fanfic for many reason 1. the relationship and bonding between anderson and seras. It's so cute :) 2. Seras finally getting that Alucard can love (eventhough with hard work) and that he will be able to love her (probably already does without knowing it) therefor she stands a chance. Judging by how strong of a Median she is i think it's going to be interesting to see how she's going to concur Alucards heart. She's strong and has alot of influence on him I think there's going to be alot of plotting,magic and seduction going on. I loved the reading cards part how creative :) I didn't know you could read fortune with normal playing cards (or did you just make that up?). Loved it and will always be waiting for your next chappie

succes!
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From QueenMystic on November 04, 2009
i love love love this story!!!!1 i think its my favorite Hellsing story ever! you are a great writer! i love the interaction between seras and alucard!!! you are totally awesome
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From ANON - regios4ever@hotmail.com on November 04, 2009
I seriously check everyday, to see if you update and get so giddy when you do. lol. Loved this chapter, Anderson and Seras are so friendly with each other, it suits them.
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From lara5170 on November 04, 2009
I just wrote a long review & then the screen flashed & all my writing was gone.
I'll send you an email
I love this & I have been so looking forward to more of the progress between S & A , I'm looking forward for more
& now I'm horrified about Walter,I hope it's not too late & we haven't lost him for good.

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From ANON - Lian on November 04, 2009
Ah, Seras, never say never. There are things called unplanned pregnancies and it can happen no matter the birth control method one might use. After all, God(Voltaire) works in mysterious ways. (giggle)

Excellent chapter, as usual, but should she have shared the secret of Quincy's true parentage? I don't want another misunderstanding between those two silly vampires.
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From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2009
Another wonderful chapter. Glad that Seras and Anderson are getting confortable with each other
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From ANON - Mosh on November 04, 2009
Oh sweet jesus I screamed while reading this chapter it was delicious,disturbing and fascinating. The moment you used the menstrual sexual moment I immediately remembered your other fanfic where he does it to Integra [EVERYBODY READ THE OTHER FANFIC TOO MADE BY THE WRITER OF MIDIAN EVOLUTION IT'S REALLY GOOD] I realised that midian evolution is a sequel of your first fic which is well done you really made a nice process between the two fanfic i loved it. This chapter was intense and judging by your detailed way of writting I can only imagine how brutally cool and morbid your lemon is going to be. This is the first time that i've read a fanfic where the sex isn't human-like or uberromantic. Ofcourse there has to be tender moments and moments where they show their feelings just like what you did at the end of the chapter where Alucard cries with Seras. However they are vampires, creatures of the night,demons on earth,so i think it's kind of unrealistic when writters make them have sex with each other in the missionary position lol I know I'm going far with this but COME ON they're VAMPIRES...I think they (especially Alucard) can do better..literally lol. Oh yeah i also wanted to ask out of curiousity : are you going to make a lemon/lime/love/romantic chapter for walter and integra or are you only going to keep it to this rate? Not asking out of critism i was just wondering about it today. I am very curious with what is going to happen in Instanbul specially because of Walter's situation and Alucard's history with the Turks. Poor Anderson needs his italian woman for support. Keep it up!
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From Algaliarept on November 03, 2009
I must say that every chapter just gets better and better. I also think I speak for everyone when I say I cannot WAIT for them to get back to headquarters either!

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From ANON - Angel Reaper on November 03, 2009
Don't worry, I didn't recoil in horror. I may have made a few faces though. Even if you take the story in a direction that I might not like, it's still so compelling to read.

Wow, I didn't expect Alucard to force Seras into menstruating just by wanting to have sex with her. Then again, he is the most powerful vampire on earth- he can probably do a lot of things we'd never expect. I'm usually skeptical about vampire babies (It's such a paradox, how can two undead create another undead? And if vampires don't age, wouldn't the children stay children forever?) but I'd almost like to see your take on the subject. Also, I wasn't sure before if this story was related to your other story, but now it's clearer with Alucard taking the menstrual blood.

Mm, it's been a while since there was action like that between them... you always seem to carefully pick where and when heated moments happen so that the pace and the plot of the story isn't completely about sex. I like that, because a lot of other fan fics just try to cram in as much citrus material as possible.

Keeep up the good work! I wonder how well Alucard and Seras can cope with staying apart...
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From ANON - regios4ever@hotmail.com on November 03, 2009
Well i'll be damned! Now im not usually into bloodplay, cuz I think it's kinda icky but i'd be lying if I said this wasn't some HOT stuff I just read. You have a way of making things so intense; to the point where you can actually SEE it. Alucard's desire and fire are so desperate in a totally believable way, you just know he really wants Seras. Awesome chapter =)
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From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2009
Fantastic new chapter!! It was very exciting in the beginning and very emotional in the end. I love how you write about Seras and Alucards's "relationship". To me, you describe it perfectly. I can't wait for the next few chapter. Keep up the good work.
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