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By : Savaial

From Savaial on October 18, 2009
Thanks, readers and reviewers. Yes, I'm still working on this. It's just become a slower work. At least I haven't had to stop writing on it entirely. I appreciate all your commentary and feedback; it helps a lot. Angel Reaper, you're a very astute judge of where my mind goes with this fic, and I wonder if you aren't remoting-in...
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From LunarAtNight on October 17, 2009
whee this story is pretty much everything I've been hankering after for an Alucard x Seras story, and there's even double-love for keeping Walter on the side of the Hellsings and even for Father Anderson's plot both of which made me grin hugely. I really hope you keep this up as I am definitely flagging it for 'check back often to see if there are updates). And I give you many kudos for keeping the plot rolling so smoothly despite the number of chapters! Marvelous!
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From ANON - Angel Reaper on October 17, 2009
I'm not sure if you're one of those authors who cares, but congratulations on over 10,000 hits! I'm sure many of them were from me obsessively rereading the chapters though...

Ah, so much happened in one chapter! It's been a while since there was a good fight, it was fun to see Alucard in action again. But it is curious how Neo-Thelema is trying so hard to kill Seras with the serum. I'm sure the reason will become more apparent later.

Seras had quite a revelation about her master; I'm not even sure I fully comprehend it, other than if Alucard keeps staying with Hellsing, it will eventually do more harm than good. Hopefully this will be expanded upon further in future chapters. Or maybe I just have to reread it a few more times to process it.

I wonder if Seras can actually be bound. After all, Alucard's binding never worked (according to him), so how can Hellsing be sure that it will work with Seras?

Well, thank you for the update, despite the fact that your real life sounds busy right now. Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Dirkha on October 16, 2009
this rocks! just finished this last chapter.. wow.

Have you thought of writing professionally? I was one of he most enjoyable reads ive had in a long time.
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From ANON - Missy on October 14, 2009
Well I can put this fairly simply. I love this. I loved it enough to stay up 6 hours past my bedtime. I love that the characters in this tale of yours are much more like the hellsing ultimate OVA's Seras and Alucard then the ones you see in the anime series. Seras actually has a spine in the OVA's.
Please add some more soonest *hugs* ^_^
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From ANON - Goddess of the Bishounen on October 12, 2009
I started reading this story a few days ago and its been so hard for me to put it down. I truly hope its not finished yet. I'm looking forward to more interactions between Alucard and Seras. Keep up the good work!
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From OmegaX on October 09, 2009
Once again, I apologize for the lack of reviews lately. I tend to get swamped with family matters just as I'm about to sit down and read, and by the time I usually get to, I never get the chance to review afterwards.

Anyway.... This, is going to be interesting. Seras is now a No Life Queen, yet she's still absolutely obsessed with Alucard. Something tells me that things are going to heat up just a bit further with these two now that she's on a somewhat equal playing field.

Anderson is coming around slowly, but he seems to be accepting his lot rather well as of late. I think we all know who's to 'blame', heheh.

Lastly, promises of a messy fight abound. If there is serum to be had, is Anderson willing to take the shot to protect Seras?
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From Savaial on October 08, 2009
Chapter edited. Thank you all for telling me I'd left spelling errors. My spellcheck function quit working because of the html coding in the document. I have no idea what to do about it, either.
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From ANON - Angel Reaper on October 08, 2009
I understand and appreciate you hurrying to finish and post chapters, but please try to take the time to glance over for typos and such. Usually you are careful about spelling, so it's a little worrying when there are small mistakes. It's such a wonderfully written story, and your correctness makes it better because so many stories nowadays are littered with errors that make me cringe.

Anyway, on to the latest chapter. I'm sort of amused that Seras is becoming as possessive of her master as he is of her. It's almost cute, it's like she's becoming more like him (without the bad qualities of his personality). Ah, so Seras did become a queen; the way you described the biting last chapter definitely made it feel different... I guess we'll see in upcoming chapters how much of a change there will be in Seras's character, and maybe her relationship to Alucard.

Please continue, you're doing a wonderful job.
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From darkness100 on October 07, 2009
num num num!!!!! i really liked this chapter for some reason... not sure why though.
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From ANON - Nefertari on October 07, 2009
I love Sera as a No-Life-Queen. Thank you so much for this new chapter. The Interaction with Anderson is downright fantastic, and his comment about Stokers Book, made me laugh. I will be away till sunday (Larp in Germany, yes), so i wont get to read your new chapters. Thats the only dramatic about it. T_T I really hope, Sunday comes soon so i will get to read your new chapters. *happy*

Byby Nefertari
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From Savaial on October 07, 2009
Angel Reaper, yeah, you were on the right track. Anderson isn't totally wrong, however. There's a wee bit of truth in what he says. And, I like Seras dominant, too. ;-)
I will get to the sex, I promise. I just feel like they're complicated characters and that I'd do them an injustice if I didn't make their unusual courtship slow.
No, this is not a 'furry' fic.
In summation, thanks to all of you for reading and reviewing. Due to a larger workload I'm slowing down, but I'm not stopping this time. I appreciate all your comments, I really do.
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From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2009
So i've read all the latest chapters, and they're awesome!! Like seriously you've managed to capture this completely different side to both Alucard and Seras, without annoying me with oocness, so major props to you =) Oh and one more thing, have they had sex yet?? And if they haven't....pray tell why?? lol sorry it's just the perviness inside me =D
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From ANON - Angel Reaper on October 05, 2009
Ah, so I was sort of right about Seras's heart, not Anderson... Seras is a bit more compliant with her Master; in chapter 34 (such a long time ago, huh?) she had that fight with Alucard that broke all the furniture. But there has been hardly any back talk or anything. But I do like them better when they're in sync... maybe that's the point of Seras's evolution, to make her stronger and closer to Alucard.

The biting scene was fantastic, Seras hardly ever gets to be dominant. The last time she bit him (not on the plane, the time in the bath), there wasn't much difference in the master-servant relationship. I wonder if it's different this time around though; it felt a little different...

Thank you for being a wonderful author, keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Mr mister on October 05, 2009
Cool seeing Seras gain new powers.
An animal form is cool, but let's not make this into a furry fic.

Favorite fic ever.
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