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By : Savaial

From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2009
Another great chapter!

I love it when Seras embraces her true self!
Alucard is great!

The character development of the Judas Priest is also very interesting.
Do not care that much about the impending death/betrayal of our dear butler though.
I'd rather see more of the dark youth emerge there.
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From darkness100 on October 05, 2009
so smexy!!!!! i love how you wrote this chapter!!!!
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From Savaial on October 05, 2009
Finally got another one up. Got busy these last few days. Thanks for all the reads and reviews. Everyone's comments made me think carefully about where I was going with this. To address a specific issue; Alucard is not going to wallow in the "She's too good for me" stuff. Not going there. Hope you all like my latest. Thanks again.
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From ANON - Amelia on October 04, 2009
Sorry..couldn't reach you on the website provided, but I do want to say that this story has kept me captivated..I've never seen alucard in such a sexual..yet powerful way..i hope to get to someday complete the story and see how our beloved vampires do...take care!!

Sincerely,

Amelia.....
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From ANON - shadow on October 04, 2009
this chapter is awesome, i really really liked it. Seras is a liones, bigger than normal. i didn't see that coming.
hope you have more soon.
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From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2009
Very good story, keep up the good work
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From ANON - LeAnne on October 03, 2009
I don't know that I can give you any advice on bettering your writing, because I find yours to be much superior then anything I have ever attempted. I would just like to say, however, that I am enjoying reading your story and watching the many relationships develop. I love the way you portray all of your characters, and the depth that you give to them! Thank you!
LeAnne
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From ANON - Sabaku no Kyuubi on October 03, 2009
Ah, a new chapter. Such a wonderful thing to see. Now, to start let me say that I thought Seras' attitude for the beginning of this Chapter was rather fitting. I for one feel the same anytime I get on a train. As for seeing Alucard stuffed into what can be described as a sardine can full of tasty little morsel made me laugh. A true test of his patience indeed. I also thought that his reaction to Seras' animal form were rather fitting as well. Enough of the little things though. Onto the true meat of the Chapter.

The thing that had me on edge with this Chapter and really gripping my seat was the conversation between Alucard and Anderson. It was also very refreshing to read. Anderson truly understands how much Seras feels about her master and by expressing it shows Alucard just how much it hurts her as it does helps her. It's also good to actually see the emotional side of Alucard. He knows very well that he doesn't deserve Seras, and I think it hurts him a little to know that despite everything that he is, he will never be good enough for her.

What's more, he understands that he's the reason her heart stopped beating, and that fact hurt him even more. He actually feels remorse over the fact that she may very well lose herself because of him, something that he hasn't felt in... ever, I think. That fact alone shows that he cares far more for her than he lets on. It's a good thing to see in him. And now I have to go. My own Bleach story is calling my name. Oh, and I do hope that Seras' heart starts again soon. Bye for now! SnK.
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From ANON - Lian on October 03, 2009
You have me seriously hooked. How can I have not noticed this story sooner? I read it all in one day. I love how the plot progresses and how the characters are developing. I particularly liked the way you don't rush things between Seas and Alucard. I can't wait to read more about what you have in store for them.

Total rating: 10/10, A++++
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From ANON - ChaoticReverie on October 02, 2009
Aweee, he does care...

Every chapter leaves me with a thirst for more, and I will be very sad, I think, when this is finally over. However, the great thing about a good story is that one can read it over and over again, any time they feel like indulging.

As usual, your style is superb, and I thoroughly enjoyed Seras' animal form. I think a feline suits her phenomenally. I anxious to see how she reacts when she comes back to herself.
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From ANON - Angel Reaper on October 02, 2009
Hooray, the honeymoon has started! I bet that Alucard, Seras, and Anderson will get into a lot of trouble while Integra and Walter are preoccupied... ^^

Now onto the latest chapter. I like that Seras's animal form is a lioness; it compliments the fact that she's a strong hunter. How interesting and sort of sneaky that she fully understood Anderson and Alucard's conversation, although she's too feline at the moment to comprehend the issues. I hope Anderson wasn't serious about challenging Alucard for Seras; the idea of him with her makes me queasy...

It's quite a revelation that Seras's heart stopped beating because her free will died, but I suppose it makes sense. I'm hoping that her heart will start beating again even more; I'd hate for her to become like those other brides...

I would like to draw fanart for this story in my limited free time; the image of lioness Seras being petted by Alucard is too good to resist. Keep updating!
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From OmegaX on October 02, 2009
Gahhh, I hate being out all day, wasn't able to review 52 at all...

Anyway, I'll review that later, on to 53

Bit of a strange chapter, Anderson hints at something that I'm not to keen on following, the idea of Alucard forcing Seras to act as she is. While it may seem that way to the Paladin, Alucard has always been about choice, and I don't believe he'd take it away just for his own amusement, it doesn't fit him at all.

Also, Alucard shows us some of the remorse and psudo-guilt he feels over his actions towards Seras, I just hope he doesn't go off into the cliche "I'm too dark for her, she should belong in the light" drivel we see from so much horrible mockeries of "vampire fiction"

Always wanting and loving each new chapter, GV!
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From Savaial on October 02, 2009
Hello, readers and reviewers. I want to thank you all for the regular contact; I was nervous about some of the stuff I put up.
Apparently most of you enjoyed Seras' animal form. I thought it fitting, too. Maybe she'll learn some grace now? Lol.
I couldn't see Integra taking being treated like a commoner very well, so that went off okay.
The vampires are getting closer to intimacy, yes. Some of you may be irritated with my lack of taking them 'all the way', but I feel this is going at a pace suitable for a virgin draculina and an emotional virgin like Alucard.
And no, I'm not good with Romanian at all, and thank you, Shadow, for the correction. I use three different free translators to try and hammer out something, and no matter how many times I cross-reference, it comes out like garbage.
Angel Reaper, you're usually dead-on with where I'm taking these characters, but don't give up on Vlad yet. Of all that he is, I believe 'adaptable' is the key definition.
A lot of you might think I'm making Anderson too soft, but this IS an alternate reality. This isn't about being utterly true to the current work, and thank god, because I couldn't do it. The Midians are evolving...
Lady Goddess Sephiroth, that was probably the most detailed review I've gotten yet. And, it was the equivalent of a warm fuzzy hug. Thanks for taking the time to pound all that out. I cherish it.
I love all my reviews and readers, though. I'll hopefully get a chapter up today. Thank you, everyone.
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From ANON - shadow on October 02, 2009
a very nice chapter, but your jut a small tip, romanian is a bit off( Voi intotdeauna te iubesc, Maestru ) shold be (Te voi iubi intotdeauna, maestrul meu).
the rest though was excellent, they finally confessed and she's even forgiven.
please update more as soon as you can.
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From ANON - Mae on October 02, 2009
I'd read the first 42 chapters so many times, waiting for the continuation, never imagining that it could possibly be any better than that - but oh how wrong I was!! I love the new dimension that's been opened through all the interactions with Alexander - what great character development that has given Seras ^_^ And of course, the increasingly steamy tension between our two favorite vampires, I adored the idea that they were giving off such strong sexual vibes that everyone on the plane was affected too, that was absolutely delightful!! Ah, and she confessed - though I don't think Alucard found it to be anything other than the usual Master/Servant love he's seen before. Oh when that comes out, it's either going to get really violent or really hot... or maybe both ;) So glad to see you're continuing!
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