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Reviews for Midian Evolution

By : Savaial

From ANON - Nacreth on October 01, 2009
another excellent chappie! ^_^ I look forward to more whenever you can post such is life that you cannot post as often as you'd like :)
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From ANON - Angel Reaper on October 01, 2009
You always write Alucard-Seras (or I suppose Seras-Alucard for this chapter) biting scenes so well, with enough details to make it sensuous and seductive without being overly graphic...

*cough* Anyway, I can't believe Seras admitted that she loves her master; I suppose she was too preoccupied by his blood. Even so, it doesn't seem like Alucard read deeper into it than a fledgling's love for her master. In a way, that makes me sad, because it's just a confirmation that Alucard will never love her the way she loves him. On an unrelated note, I do like that Seras can now understand Romanian; I won't have to go to Babelfish for translations anymore.

Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Sabaku no Kyuubi on October 01, 2009
Sorry I haven't said anything for the last few Chapters. Unfortunately, college keeps me from enjoying these little pleasures as quickly as I would like to. That being said, I'd just like to say Bravo dear. Very nice work indeed. I must say that you got the emtions for the last few chapters down pat. As for everythig else, very good as usual. Now if you would excuse me, bed has been calling me for the last few days and because of a test earlier, I have been vehemently ignoring it. Time to get reaquainted. Bye for now! SnK.

P.S. I must confess that I am very curious about Walter at the moment. I do hope that he's merely ill. To see him turn traitor would be a horrible thing indeed.
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From gypsygrrl420 on October 01, 2009
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed the previous two or three chapters! (I love your writing and like to take every opportunity to tell you so *grins*) In my own defense I've been stuck in the land of the Danes and the Geats...
Argh! Anyway, this has to be one of my most favorite chapters (though it's so hard to choose). Erm, Alucard's native tongue is Hungarian, no? Out of curiosity, are you fluent? Cause it sounds like you're quite familiar with the language.
I love the back and forth conversations between Alucard and Seras...and I'm dying of curiosity to know what's wrong with Walter. Earache my patootie!
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From LadySephiroth on October 01, 2009
I was up from 8 last night to 3 this morning reading your fic. Be proud, for never have I dedicated so much time to a fanfiction. It may sound cocky and arrogant for me to say, but I don't really care, because it also shows how effective your writing ability is. But I was also studying your fic, trying to pick out the things I both liked and didn't like about it, as you did beg for crit so early on in the story. So, after sleeping on it and thinking about it, I've decided that I can properly review this piece.

First of all, I want to say that as an author, I know how you feel about not getting reviews. You poor your heart into the story and you want someone to reply to it, good or bad. You need to improve, after all. And you did make a distinct point: they are getting word porn for free! The least they could do is review! I snapped once like that in my fanfiction, so I can sympathize. Except I waited four years for another update. Life happens, sweetheart. You're not obligated to update this fic. When you start feeling like writing fanfiction is an obligation, it's no longer fun, and the whole point of fanfiction is practice and fun! We don't want you to lose your joy! Life is important. Take care of life first. People will always be around to wait patiently for updates to your fanfiction. Trust me. I know this from experience.

Now then, onto the actuality of the matter.

I talked to your fic. I actually talked to it. I interacted with the characters out loud, as if I were a part of the story. Talking to a story is a great thing; as a reader, it means I am very engaged. And I was very engaged. I was absorbed, engrossed, couldn't stop reading until the very last chapter. I love stories like that. If this were in print I'd curl up with it in a second with a warm cup of cocoa and just read myself into a brain numbing stupor. I mean that.

Your characters come to life so easily; I was gripped within the first five sentences, and that rarely happens for me, even with original fiction. I feel I have to plow on for a few pages before I get to a point where I don't want to put it down, but with this fic, it wasn't a choice. I wasn't going to put it down. How could I? And miss the life-like interaction between favored characters? My body said "Sleep!" but my brain said "Shut the hell up. We're enjoying ourselves for once."

And your characters. Oh my, but I think Alucard (believing that he is Dracula) would probably be just like that. He really is a monster, but with a soul and a heart like no other. That passion, that drive is still there, and has been there so long he no longer recognizes it as such. That is the very thing that appeals to me about him, and you've captured it so perfectly, down to the Romanian (not an expert on Romanian but it was believable to me), the bloodlust, and the sexuality that would accompany a practiced killer with a background and history bathed in blood.

How darling are Integra, Walter, and Seras? While the story is told from her point of view, I like the fact that she has equal character interaction with everyone, so the story isn't just about her and her feelings. She focuses on other events besides her relationship with her master, and other things happen in the story that aren't service to this, but rather help to shape it. Ahh. I sigh a sigh of satisfaction from this alone. How rare this is in a fanfiction nowadays. How very, very rare.

And the priest, or rather, ex-priest. He gets great giggles from me. You did his accent well, but I love the matter that you currently have him grappling with: housed with monsters he's sworn to hate, deserving of forgiveness but fighting against it tooth and nail. Huzzah for internal struggles. They are the best kind, and his kind is more appealing to me, since religious zealots are such a fascination.

The thing I liked the most though? I love how you explore the sexuality of each and every character, without shame or trying to cover it over with fine, flowery words. It's real, it's raw, it's unabashed - like sexuality should be. It's sex. It doesn't need to be accompanied by purple prose; it is what it is. Obviously, you took this point of view as well.

Last, but not least? Your vocabulary is superb. Just thought you'd like to know.

You worked very hard on this. You did research, you studied your characters, you evolved them to a believable and reasonable degree beyond the original 13 episodes we're stuck with. Pat yourself on the back, because this is excellent, and is going on my rec list as soon as I'm done.

Did I find anything wrong with it? Not particularly. The only thing I didn't like was the chapter length; they're so short and there's so many of them! It made my eyes roll around in my head for a moment. But it's not anything to concern yourself with - that's just my personal preference.

In conclusion: this was delicious, and a rare gem. My hat's off to you. And I do look forward to future updates.
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From ANON - Nefertari on October 01, 2009
*lol* that was the best chapter ending ever, and all that sexuell Tension in the air *sings* sex is in the air ~
Cant wait to know whats behind Walters behaviour. I love this chapter, its Mile-High-Club in Vampire Style *fangirlscream*

Fabulous Chapter, thank you so much.
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From darkness100 on September 30, 2009
i like this!!! poor Integra on a commercial plane for her honeymoon.... :'(
Also like the grouchy guy on the plane...lawls
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From ANON - Angel Reaper on September 30, 2009
Tee hee, I suppose Integra would be irritated with all of the airport security measures and being treated like a common person.

How interesting that Seras found her animal form so quickly; I wonder if she'll get to practice using it in the future. At least she and Alucard are on better terms now, even though her punishment is coming soon. Even so, it doesn't seem like it will be a harsh punishment.

Ah, I'm running out of witty ways to say good-bye or to wish you good luck or to encourage you to write well because of these recent constant updates. Oh well...
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From OmegaX on September 30, 2009
D'aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww, and Seras was a kitty.

A sweet, almost WAFFish chapter, with Seras awaking more and more of her latent powers, and gaining some insight on her condition in the process. Poor Integra.... the people of Istanbul are NOT going to know what's going to hit them once she gets out of that plane. We're just lucky she wasn't placed in Coach.....
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From Algaliarept on September 29, 2009
A cat! How appropriate! lol Ohhhh all the jokes I can see Alucard making at poor Seras expense! LOVE it
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From ANON - kai on September 29, 2009
Oh I'm so glad that they are trying to reach an equilibrium! Such satisfying interactions and the idea of Integra at airport security was priceless. I can totally see Seras as a feline, especially the way she craves contact and being petted! I'm so excited to see such regular updates they are a definite high point in my day! I love how you are molding the characters into something so original yet so believable. Fantastic job.
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From ANON - Nacreth on September 29, 2009
Oh how I love this fic! *dances in a happy little circle* love love love!!!! More please :)
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From Savaial on September 29, 2009
Thanks everyone for the reads and reviews on the last chapter. It feels so good to read them. I hope none of you want a lot of detail about Istanbul; I did most of my research on the Orient Express. Talk about an expensive train ride... Love to do it, though, even if I can't smoke. I guess I'd be Snus-ing it. But, thanks again!
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From butabara on September 29, 2009
You get me all excited and spoil me to itty bitty pieces by updating everyday for a minute, and then crush my dreams to ennsy weensy pieces by not updating today. *Sigh* you have spoiled me too much.

Great job, can't wait for more!
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From Raziaele on September 29, 2009
I honestly love your story! It's really hard to find a good fanfic that, though not completely with the anime/manga, still sticks close, and is long with good plot, but you pull all of it off wonderfully in Midian Evolution. Not to mention that -thank god- not every chapter is filled with smut like the majority of the Hellsing fanfics I see. Haha. Though smut is always good, it seems to be used with excess most of the time. But you have an excellent way of integrating it with your story! Please continue writing, I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! Thank you so much for this story! ^^
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