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By : Savaial

From ANON - Angel Reaper on September 28, 2009
Seras has me worried a bit in this chapter; maybe the pressure of being at odds with her master is making her crack. But it seems like Alucard will help her become stable again...

Hm, there's nothing else I really wanted to comment on in this chapter. I still can't wait for the honeymoon to start though. Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - ChaoticReverie on September 28, 2009
I almost cried when I'd seen that you updated!! I've been waiting for what seemed like eternity. I'm not saying that to make you feel bad or anything... I do understand that there is life outside of fandom. However I am a loyal and avid reader of this fic, and I've been checking for updates... sigh. At last...

I'm so torn for the poor little vampire fledgling; she seems so conflicted. Ah well... I'm sure Alucard won't let his police girl go too long without saying something to shut her up.

As usual I'm adoring your work. Victoria's conflicted feelings and the persuasion of Anderson into the Hellsing organization are both welcome changes. I'm eager to see how you let the rest of the story unfold from here.

Looking forward to it...
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From nefertarialita on September 28, 2009
*sniff* *sniff* *cries* This chapter made me cry... Thank you again. The best was as Sera was in the Bathroom and cut herself...oh this blackness in her *wonderful* and Alcuard, *sigh* I think i will wait a few days and then read you fic all over again.
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From OmegaX on September 28, 2009
Hehe, Seras having a meltdown was surprisingly cute, even for her.

Naturally, Alucard has to put his foot down so his pet won't get all depressed over little to nothing, and the reward of punishment hopefully should hold her over until they can discuss this rationally.
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From darkness100 on September 28, 2009
i love seras slow descent into madness. she is having trouble coming to grips with alot of things and you make her struggle very tangible.
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From OmegaX on September 28, 2009
Poor Seras is still depressed, Anderson gets some freedoms, and....something is up with Alucard. I'm thinking something along the lines that Seras' assumptions are affecting him more than she thinks, or something like that...
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From ANON - Angel Reaper on September 27, 2009
Hm, more Anderson-Seras conversations... I guess it's a sign that Anderson is slowly accepting his new "position" in Hellsing more. I get a strange feeling that maybe Anderson will become like Alucard, in the sense that he will stay in Hellsing without bonds or seals because he wants to be there. That would be interesting to see...

I hope Alucard and Seras patch things up soon. There was a little hint of it near the end with Alucard reaching out mentally, which made me hopeful... Also, I wonder if Seras' heart stopping has caused their bond to break, the one that compels them to be close to each other. Then again, any one would try to avoid being in the presence of someone they've angered...

I can't wait for the honeymoon next chapter!
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From darkness100 on September 27, 2009
poor seras, Alucard being mean to her.... but i like the development with Anderson. hopefully he will come to see that not all vampires are bad just like all people are not good. though i think he has a right to hate Alucard for all of eternity, he really was a bastard to him.
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From ANON - shadow on September 27, 2009
wow, you've been busy since the last chapter i read :)
i really enjoyed how you presented Walter and Integra's wedding as well as the part where the 3,Alucard, seras ans alex went out hunting. you really had her torture that guy in the most brutal way possible.
what's also very interesting is how well alex seems to have adapted, is he becoming friends with alucard and seras?cause it sort of looks like they'll be working more and more together.
i'm curious to see how you'll patch up things between the master and his bride, i should be very interesting to read :)
so keep up the good work.
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From nefertarialita on September 27, 2009
New Chapter, thankkkkkk you *dances* I do think, i understand Sera a little to much. Really, all she wants is love. And thats likely the reason why i dont understand Alucard sometimes....And sorry dear male readers, for my last comments, not all men are like i said.

Thanks again i love your FF.
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From gypsygrrl420 on September 27, 2009
This was so sweet! Poor Seras--she just doesn't get it yet, does she? And Anderson giving counsel? Beautiful!
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From ANON - SilenceOfSlumber on September 27, 2009
i absolutely adore this story! alucard's and seras relationship sends shivers down my spine in the most wonderful and enjoyable way... the scene with alucard teaching seras how to stimulate both sir islands and the convict is still in my head, it was quite enchanting, keep up the wonderful work on this beautifully sinister story. i await to read more

~Silence
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From Savaial on September 26, 2009
Nefertari, it hurt me to write it, too. I have too much sympathy for a girl who can't get a man's affection. I'v seen it time and time again. Thanks for reading and reviewing. And btw, I've not done my job with Alucard very well if you can't get a little bit of a glimmer as to why he's so aggressive here... I'll work on that.

Anonelbe, yeah, it's a bittersweet chapter all right. Alucard does see what's going on... He's just a bit confused. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Angel Reaper, you pose an insightful question. Remember that her heart only started beating in the first place because Alucard touched her? Glad you like the Anderson bit. I thought I'd get flamed for that, honestly. And, I think his basic character IS very good. No, I don't see him ever completely relaxing, either. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Sabaku no Kyuubi, lol, yeah, I'm sure you've heard similar remarks. A few bad apples spoil the cart and all that... Glad you enjoyed the lead-up to the wedding and the way I posed the whole 'walk the girl down the isle' thing. And yes, Seras needs as much failure as success, because she doesn't entirely know herself, either, She's really too young to know herself very well, and just when she was getting a grip on who she was, she became Undead. That's gotta throw a monkey wrench inthe works. Dead-on with Anderson's inner self, or at least the way I imagined him struggling. He's got an identity crisis going on, too, just likek Seras. And, Alucard controls them both. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Darkness100, yeah I got them hitched, finally. Can you imagine their kid?? And, Seras has been wrong before about what her master thinks... Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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From darkness100 on September 26, 2009
aaawww a happy wedding but poor Seras gets sad about the fact that alucard won't ever love her...or so she thinks. at least i hope alucard will come to love her, and they had better get down to some action too soon!
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From ANON - Sabaku no Kyuubi on September 26, 2009
Okay, seeing as I myself am a guy, I will be ignoring that remark of Nefertari's about how all men are insensitive, alive or dead, especially considering what everyone tells me about myself. But I digress. Onto my review.

First, just let me say that for Ch. 47, I thought it was rather well done, especially Walter's and Integra's feelings on the whole thing. Now, onto my thoughts for this most recent chapter.

Now, just let me say that the wedding was just wonderful. Somehow, I can easily see Walter and Integra breaking all tradition by walking down the aisle together, both before and after the ceremony. As for the thoughts of Seras going against her Master's wishes and failing him, it was something that eventually had to happen, whether she liked it or not. I know that she strives to be his good little draculina, but no one is perfect, and she needed to learn that lesson badly, even if it was done the hardest way possible. In this aspect, I felt that you did rather good work.

Finally, we breech the subject of Anderson for this Chapter. While it's nice to see him keeping his attitude, it is also nice to see the new lessons, thoughts, and feelings leaking through in the way that he spoke with Seras. It is also good to see that he's starting to realize that not being a priest isn't going to keep him from being himself, but also allows him some newer freedoms. I highly doubt that if he were still a priest that he would demand that Seras take him to see Julianna the way that he did.

And that's all I have. Looking forward to more whenever you see fit. Bye for now! SnK.
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