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Reviews for Midian Evolution

By : Savaial
  • From ANON - Angel Reaper on September 26, 2009
    My heart goes out to Seras- it's hard being in love with someone who will never love you in return. Speaking of hearts, I wonder if hers will start beating again soon, or if it only stopped because she had disappointed her master and she couldn't stand the feeling...

    Anderson giving guidance to Seras was a great moment- it really does show how good of a man he is when he's helping the people/species he's sworn to destroy. He'll probably never be totally comfortable around Hellsing, but at least he's relaxed his standards a bit.

    Until next time then!
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  • From OmegaX on September 26, 2009
    Sad chapter is sad... but at least Alucard has a bit more of a glimpse of what his pet is wanting, and why she's been so urging as of late.


    She still needs a hug though
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  • From nefertarialita on September 26, 2009
    New Chapter, thank you. I was near in tears as Seras Heart stopped and she was so miserable *cries* poooooooooor sera, mean alucard. Men, dead or alive are such insensitive creatures *hugs Sera tight* Thanks for the chapter, cant wait for more ^-^
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  • From Savaial on September 26, 2009
    I'm so glad I didn't put anyone off with the pre-wedding scenes; I wanted a bit of the ordinary for these unusual characters. As for the wedding itself, it's a done deal, and we'll see more between Seras and Alucard during that happy event. (I think I'm going to be dodging napalm flames with this coming chapter). Thanks for reading and reviewing, everyone. I hope you all won't be too upset with a minor cliffie.
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  • From ANON - Riz on September 25, 2009
    damn it godvoltaire, your too good!!!
    it makes me squill, giggle, laugh and smirk everytime i read your fiction!! (my younger sis thought im crazy)
    i love every chapters and i cant imagine what kind of situation your going to put us through next!
    great to see that you are back together with updates.
    love you so much and thanks again!!


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  • From ANON - Angel Reaper on September 25, 2009
    ^^ The pre-wedding pep-talks were fun and interesting; I hope the ceremony will be lovely and wonderful. I still almost wish that some sort of invasion would happen so that Integra would have to fight in her wedding dress, but it would be just as great if the ceremony went well and they have a relatively normal time on their honeymoon.

    And thank you for addressing my question; it puts me at ease that Seras' basic personality won't change...

    Please continue!
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  • From OmegaX on September 25, 2009
    Heh, bride and groom have the traditional prewedding jitters, Anderson grows further as a person instead of a weapon, and Seras gives advice to both partners.

    Small interaction with her Master this chapter, but that should change, I'll assume...


    Poor Walter, getting pent up before the wedding night, the foreplay between the two is going to be legendary, for sure!
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  • From nefertarialita on September 25, 2009
    Thank you for the new chapter. I loved Seras peptalk to Integra and Walter. So sweet. And thanks for the fast updating. I cant get enough of your story.
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  • From Savaial on September 25, 2009
    Thanks, everyone, for reading and reviewing. I frankly didn't expect anyone to have patience and interest left on this fic for me to save it from the dusty halls of the abandoned.
    Glad most of you seemed to like Anderson's slow induction to Hellsing via her vampires; I have plans for him. Maybe not the biggest plans, but plans.
    As to Seras' developing brutality. She has to eat, and I felt she could bring herself to let her beast out if she didn't have to consider her prey at all innocent. So, I have no intention of making her into a cruel person. She's got to become a little hard simply because of who her master is, but I see no reason to completely change her basic personality.
    Thanks again to all the readers and reviewers. I adore you all.

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  • From darkness100 on September 24, 2009
    very hot and very gory, a perfect pair that compliment each other if done well. and you did very very well.
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  • From ANON - Angel Reaper on September 24, 2009
    The mental image of Anderson and Alucard casually chatting over a glass of wine while Seras is busy torturing her prey is a strange one, but still a bit funny and interesting. I also like the image of Alucard changing Anderson's appearance; I bet he would look fantastic as a teen goth priest... ^^

    It seems to me that Seras is slowly becoming more sadistic, because each time she's in bloodlust she comes up with crazier, more gruesome ways to make them suffer first. Is it part of her evolution, a side effect to being with Alucard so much? I don't think it's necessarily bad that she's becoming this way, but I just hope it doesn't start to become her normal everyday personality.

    Also, it's nice how you've been making so many little references back to previous chapters lately. It's like some things are coming full circle.

    Well then, until next time! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Matoska on September 24, 2009
    So very glad you are back and this story is moving forward. I must admit I missed you and this yarn. Since my fall an injury I have had little to look forward to but now I have my favorite story back once again. Hope things turned out well for you - I know it was hard. Thanks again.
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  • From Astmara on September 24, 2009
    And here I thought the story will be abandoned, checking it only for good measure :D. Great work, as always, and am looking forward to more goodness.
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  • From ANON - Sabaku no Kyuubi on September 24, 2009
    Ah, it is so good to see this story up and progressing with life again. I admit, that I have been making regular check-ups in hopes of seeing this masterpiece continued. Imagine my surprise and delight when I checked it today to see not one, but four wonderful Chapters added to an already wonderful piece of art.

    My dear author, I must congratulate thee on a work well done. To be honest, there is really nothing that I can give in the way of constructive criticism, since your work here surpasses anything that any of my writings could possibly hope to be. All that said, I do hope to see more from you whenever you deem it possible. Bye for now! SnK.
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  • From ANON - Wolfofd on September 24, 2009
    This is the most epic story ive ever read. I am so glad that i clicked that link on google and found this. Your ability to breath life into characters unlike most people who do fan fics is second to none. I cant wait for the next chapter to come out. This story has renewed my love of vampires and my fandom of Hellsing for this I thank you.
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