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By : Savaial

From nefertarialita on September 24, 2009
Great Chapter, i loved how Sera told the Man, that Vlad was her boyfriend and Alex her brother. The three of them are so sweet when they are hunting *kukuku*
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From OmegaX on September 24, 2009
Heheheh, Seras certainly knows how to pick them out! Anderson is finally starting to realize some of his faults, and Seras is again enjoying the thrill of the hunt.

I will say, the dual posing via Alucard and Anderson was hilarious, and would have made an awesome picture somewhere!

Answering my own retort last time, I had forgotten that Seras modified her body to appear younger. Having not remembered to read though M.E. in a while, I had forgotten that she had that ability now.

Always, awaiting the newest chapters!
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From Savaial on September 24, 2009
Thanks, guys, for reading and giving thoughtful comments about the last, short chapter. I have to work today, but I might get a second chapter up later tonight if all goes well. Again, thanks so much!
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From ANON - shadows on September 24, 2009
nice work, you tainting alexander even more than before, i like it.
wonder how he'll do on the hunt with Alucard and Seras?
also happy to hear inty and walters wedding is coming up, hope it will be interesting.

keep up the very good work.
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From ANON - Angel Reaper on September 24, 2009
^^ It's interesting how Anderson is slowly tolerating Alucard and Seras more and more... also, I loved at the end where Alucard says people love the goth priest look; while Anderson isn't exactly goth, he isn't really a bright sunny opposite to it either, so it's funny.

I might of told you this before, but I really love how you write a Seras bloodlust scene, it's always described so well.

Until next time, keep on keeping on.
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From OmegaX on September 23, 2009
Heh, part of me wants to wonder how Anderson can make a joke about Seras being jailbait with her epic bust somehow restrained in her outfit, but part of me thinks that it's not needed.

Regardless, Seras in black is much needed, and her perversity is slowly rising. I do wonder how the two will pass the time other than guarding the newly married couple, perhaps some bondage lessons?

Still can't believe that you're back, and updating as quickly as you have been!
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From ANON - Big Al on September 23, 2009
Another so soon! You work magic with your keyboard ;)
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From darkness100 on September 23, 2009
Go Anderson! Whoot and Sera's too! can't wait for the next chappie.
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From Savaial on September 23, 2009
Thanks everyone, for reading and reviewing. I realize a lot of you might not like the direction I'm taking Anderson, and that you're impatient for the AxS smut, since you've waited a whole freekin year for it. I appreciate all this patience, I really do.
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From ANON - shadow on September 23, 2009
i'm so happy you posted 2 more chapters, they were great. i especially enjoyed the second one, the ending was very fun to red.
how you model the relation between Alucard and anderson is excellent, a little bit more and his got the priest completely tainted and on his side, can't wait for that to happen. i'm also looking forward to integra and walters wedding, yet most importantly at how the relationship between the 2 vampires will further evolve; if Alucard will ever tell Seras what she actually means to him, considering her feeling for him and all; and if they'll ever get to finally consummate the bond they share.

so good luck on writing more excellent chapters, will be waiting for them.
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From OmegaX on September 22, 2009
Mwahahaha, Seras' outburst was hilarious! Alucard continues his teasing, yet Seras still has doubts. He'll have to punish those out of her, heheh.

Anderson working for Hellsing will be interesting, maybe the man will finally let go of some of his hate....
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From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2009
Wow. I love it. I never thought Anderson would warm up to Alucard or Seras. Somehow I found it harder to believe he would warm up to Seras over Alucard. At least he and Alucard share the love of killing vampires. ^.^
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From Algaliarept on September 22, 2009
Welcome Back!! I was so surprised to see the update I almost fell out of my chair! Just wondering if your *now extremely dead* dirty priest is of any relation to the Jonas brothers? Thought it was humorous even if not ;)
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From LuciferDragon on September 22, 2009
It had been awhile, so when I got an email said it's been updated it took me awhile to remember it was your story lol

Really amazing updates, and we're all of course waiting for that amazing intimate moment. Really can't wait to see what happens. Sad to hear not everything is going great on your end. *hugs* But everything will turn out alright in the end. Take your time and get whatever you can sorted out.
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From ANON - Angel Reaper on September 22, 2009
I was pleasantly surprised to find your email in my inbox late last night, and read chapter 43 immediately. Unfortunately, it was around that time when AFF.Net has scheduled down time, so I couldn't review then. But it was equally delighting to see another new chapter now that I have time to properly review. Before I forget, thank you for posting again after your extended absence, and thank you for emailing me! You're such a lovely considerate author.

Now, back to the new chapters... I quite like the new development of Hellsing finding the one who tried to kill Seras, and how Alucard is slowly trying to persuade Anderson to join Hellsing. It will probably be difficult, but then again, Anderson does seem a bit softer to Alucard and Seras now after spending so much time with them. I liked the part about Anderson giving Seras his cassock a lot, it says a lot about his personality. The introduction of Julianna also seems like a good method to persuade him. On a slightly unrelated note, Seras expressing her anger was fantastic, especially because she started using Walter's list.

Integra and Walter's wedding day seems a bit surreal now; at this point it would be surprising if it went well and they all have a relatively peaceful honeymoon. Hm, I would almost like to see a Jan & Luke Valentine-like invasion on the wedding day, and Integra would have to fight in her wedding dress... ^^

Well, I hope that you'll continue writing, despite whatever real life problems trouble you. Keep up the good work!
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