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Reviews for Midian Evolution

By : Savaial

From ChaoticReverie on May 09, 2009
Agh!! Of course I love your writing, and would never ask you to rush through a chapter... I just sincerely hope that it does not take too terribly long for you to post again. NO PRESSURE!! Do what you must to make it great, that's just me thinking out loud.
It's still fantastic, as I expected it to be, and I'm very anxious to see where you take this.
Waiting patiently...
Peace and well wishes to you and yours!
~J
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From ChaoticReverie on May 09, 2009
Whew, let me just wipe the sweat from my forehead... That was good, very nicely done. It was sexy. yet tasteful, my favorite kind of citrus.
So, still growing more fond of this story as I read more of it. :D I have to comment again on your superb writing. I truly enjoy this style, though I find most people cannot do it well. What I am referring to, of course, if the fact that I've noted most of this is dialogue based. Not that there isn't a bit of imagery and the like in there as well, but you know what I mean... I have come to notice that most authors who make their stories dialogue based tend to ramble, and much of it becomes pointless and boring. Yet everything that is said in this has a very strict purpose, each word elucidating new aspects to the story or uncovering hidden meanings. Very well done.
Also, I remember seeing one of your review responses at the beginning of a chapter a ways back. In it you stated something along the lines of how 'you thought your writing must suck sometimes'... To put it mildly, what the fuck are you talking about? SUCK??? You are a genius! A poet! The way you choose, place and use words is absolutely beautiful and astounding. It's rather impeccable, to me, and to hear that you think of your art in such a way is ridiculous!! I can see that you're somewhat modest, but please take this compliment as it is. You are INCREDIBLE! AMAZING! ASTONISHING! TOTALLY AND UTTERLY FLAWLESS!
Now, it could be simply because I've just been so enthralled in the writing, but I haven't even noticed a spelling or grammatical error as of yet, and that is quite a feat in itself. Please, I'm not saying you should brag. Stay modest, but there is no shame in knowing that you're good at something. Don't ever sell yourself short. A talent like yours is something to be proud of, so hold your head high!!
Keep it up!
J~ (aka Jay aka ChaoticReverie)
P.S. I simply added that because I noted that I have gone by a different name every time I review... so, just to clear things up... :P
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From ChaoticReverie on May 09, 2009
Absolutely not!! You deserve more than just constructive criticism, in my opinion! I understand that you don't want to seem like a review glutton, but really, talent like yours deserves so much more than a bit of simple feedback. Good writing deserves praise, and you, dear, are a spectacular author!
I was absolutely flabbergasted when I read how little reviews you were getting. Apparently this warning got the message across, though, and I'm glad to see you are getting the numbers you deserve.
I totally agree with you, on that matter. I'm an author as well (not as good as you) but I feel for you. Any good author writes because they love to do so, not because they want the praise. However, what's the point of continuing if no one is expressing their feelings on your pieces? How is an author supposed to know if they are growing and getting better if no one leaves them feedback!!?? Sigh... so many people take us for granted. Not all, of course! There are tons of wonderful reviewers out there, and they are all godsends in my eyes!
But, anyways, on with the actual review.
I still love, it, though my adoration grows with each chapter. The powerful, sensual way you depict Alucard is very wonderfully done, and the transition you gave Victoria as well. It's good to see her go from the shy, reluctant vampire lamb she was to a true hunter. AND, I might add, you did the change exceptionally well. I've read so many stories where the authors have characters go from being meek to these super sexy, bad ass girls... and it always seems really stupid and poorly written and amateurish. Your method of doing so is really tasteful, however, and highly believable.
Keep up the good work!!!
Jay~
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From ANON - ChaoticReverie on May 09, 2009
Ah! Loving this, so far!! It is actually very hard to find a good Seras/Alucard story, despite the show's popularity.
But, as I have said, I'm loving this one. Your style is just so well suited to the actual storyline, and flows splendidly. Honestly, I could really see this as being part of the actual 'Hellsing'. Maybe we should all come together and form a petition, asking the makers to add this to the storyline? What do you say? Ha, ha... Oh wishful thinking.
Actualy, in all honesty, I enjoy this MORE than the actual show/manga. I love the gritty, realistic sense of it. Your dark portrayal of the characters and their innermost feelings are very entertaining and believable. I can tell I'm going to be very sad when this is over. It's a good thing there are lots of long chapters for me to enjoy!!
I'll have to make sure I check out your profile when I'm done. I'm sure I'll find lots of other great pieces in there.
But, anyways, I'm going to shut up now, so that I have something left to say the next time I review.
Thanks for the great read!!
CR~
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From ANON - lilac_flower on May 08, 2009
wah~ this story is so good. I've reread it a whole bunch of times. Can't wait for an update!!!
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From moviefan on May 06, 2009
Spectacular. This is the greatest Hellsing fic I've ever read. Do update soon.
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From ANON - jingko on May 06, 2009
So i had a friend tell me about this fic, and wow.....she under told me how great it was! please don't stop. keep going !!!
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From kazeninoru on May 03, 2009
This is such a fantastic story. You portray Alucard and Seras' dynamic with an amazing chemistry and complexity. This is definitely a very interesting read.
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From LamicaLee on May 02, 2009
Wow...just wow. I was looking for a fic to read and I'm so glad I came across yours. ^,^ I love what's been going on so far and I hope to read more soon! :3 I'm so hooked xD ♥ Keep up the fabulous work!
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From ANON - Valnar on April 29, 2009
Holy shit, this story is just amazing. You know, normally I hate anime and I really don't like Hellsing, because of it's style and the way it deals with vampires, but you just manage to keep this story exciting and enjoyable by developing the characters into some really awesome personalities. Keep it up ;-)
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From butabara on April 27, 2009
Has this story been abandoned? I hope not!!!
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From ANON - Indusina on April 23, 2009
Thank you for writing this I absolutely love it! Will there be more? I hope so. This is not only the best Alucard x Seras I've read it's the best Hellsing fanfic I've read so far! Thanks again!!!
//Indusina
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From ANON - pammy on April 22, 2009
First things first: I confess I'm guilty for not posting a single review before for this amazing story. You can do as you please and punish me; throw a sharp object or knock me on the head with a thick boring book. seriously I know I deserved it.(BTW Eng. is not my native language so it's completely my fault if you don't get something I wrote. Don't bother, the part you don't get would probably be me babbling stupidly)

Now that I'm done with dat I can finally talk about the story which seems to be the best(and I'm not complimenting it's just stating the obvious) AxS story I've ever read. Let me tell you why I think so:

1. You made me read a story written in first person POV without feeling tormented. I never felt bored with Seras' internal conflicts in fact they made me feel like I'm experiencing all of it along with her.
2. You do not have one single OOC person in your story which is really important for me while reading fanfiction. I simply can't bring myself to read a lovesickpuppy-Alucard who starts to worship Seras as his goddess (other way around is completely working for me thanks to you) (another example: I feel like throwing up whenever I read about a Severus-look-at-the-flowers-life-is-beutiful-Snape in a harry potter fanfiction with Hermione/Snape ship)
3. I adore your young Walter and Integra . (I was near tears with the fear of Walter's possible death.) The relationship you created there is warming my heart and I really really want to read about their honeymoon in �stanbul.(*smiles widely* will be first time reading a hellsing ff with my own country in it.)
4. I know it's sick but I love what your Seras and Alucard are doing doing to poor Anderson. It's real fun to read the situations you put him in.

Need I say more? Oh yes... forgot to tell you're amazing:) And hope you don't have problems getting in the way of your life (*rub hands and whispers selfishly* so you can update soon)

xxxxpammy
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From ANON - May on April 20, 2009
So in the midst of re-reading this masterpiece I couldn't help but giggle at the poor unsuspecting Anderson. I just want you to know how great you managed to capture his character without ruining it because of the situation. Not a lot of people could keep such a zealot in character w/ two horny vamps at his heels lol!!

Hope all is well in your world and just remember to take your time w/ your stories. Its FUN not work and it is well worth the wait!

Warm wishes
-May
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From ANON - Faith on April 17, 2009
This is the best Alucard/Seras fiction I've ever read! Even better then the ones I've read on some other sites. I noticed you haven't updated since Feb. 12. So I hope you update this soon!
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