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Reviews for Midian Evolution

By : Savaial

From ANON - Macchomei on August 20, 2012
So, I've read this story all the way from chapter one, and I have to give you acknowledgement for wiring a (so far) 64 chapter fan-fiction, I applaud you. Reading this far, I can't not give you a review, because you have earned it. First, I'd like to thank you for doing all your background research about Dracula, and Vlad Tepes. I always hoped to read a fan-fiction that explored those elements. You incorporated them very well.. even down to the lines in Dracula, Romanian,and even battle locations. Seriously, I have to hand it to you. You really put a lot of effort in developing Alucard. Thank-you for taking the time to do you research.

I'm also glad that Alucard and Seras didn't begin to have sex in chapter 3, and the fact that this isn't a 64 chapter long smut. But I really am anticipating that chapter if you know what I mean.

I have no complaints with your fanfiction, but for me, I don't see the presence of Anderson necessary. I understand what you're trying to do, (also you got his speech down perfectly, I don't know how you did that, but you did.) but I find him to be a little OOC. But, keep doing what you're doing because you wouldn't have him in the story without a reason.

Also, the heartbeats, I really love that. And how could I forget about the beautiful Seras. I love everything you've "done" to her if you get what I'm saying. I can't wait to see her develop more along with Alucard.

Sorry if this is really long and redundant. I know you like reviews so, I gave you my two-cents worth.
I can't wait for the next chapter! Happy writting!

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From ANON - Regina Nelson on August 12, 2012
AMAZING!!!!!! I couldn't stop reading. Keep it up, i can't wait to see how it ends :)
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From ANON - Beth on August 05, 2012
I don't know if this story is dead or still on going but I really hope you continue. I have read all 64 chapters and I love the driection you have taken with alucard, seras and the rest of the gang...

Im afraid I have trouble communicating so please take my few words as encouragement to continue
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From nekette on June 24, 2012
I'm back agaaaaain. Oh the review spam horror. >.>; I like rereading this one, though. :D

*rolls around gleefully, molesting the story shamelessly with too many reiews*

So here's excessive stalker inspiration to ever continue and know that people still read it and love it. O:)
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From ANON - midnightwakeonyou on June 23, 2012
For the love goddess please update this fic.. It killed me where ur leaving it off at...
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From ANON - Gunpowdersmoke on June 19, 2012
Off all of the good fanfictions there is here I do love this one the most. I'm sad that there hasn't been any updates lately since I regularly comes back to see if it has. But that doesn't stop me from rereading the story over and over again. I do hope that there is more chapters after this and that it will reach an awesome resolution! Can�t wait to read it even if it shall take another three years :)

The first chapters were a bit stumbling like you tested the water but the more you wrote the more you seemed to get comfortable with the story. Now you are writing the story from an oceanglider instead of swimming!

As for the story line I'm in love with how you mix in werewolves and magic users and makes them pop up like carrots in a vegetable garden. They seem like a natural development and does gives some interesting turns to it.

I think you have captured the characters� well and you have really grown during you writing. The characters� fits the story at the same time they still resemble and follows the original characters moods, reactions and feeling.
Something I appreciate is how Alucard gets a little more depth to his personality, he is not just a huge overpowered man eater, but he gets more contact with the man he was before turning into the King of Vampires.
Anderson is full of catholic prejudices, hatred for everything that concerns the undead and just as much as a raving lunatic as Alucard. But still he grows on one and you start to understand him and then he slowly turns into a protector and ally that you actually would love to have in life. And that you captured his Scottish accent perfectly is just awesome! :3
Seras is naturally the one that got through the largest transformation and you don�t really recognize her as the same character from the manga. But yet you do and she is truly Seras in an alternative universe and I love how she is slipping down a slippery slope to be Undead Queen as an servant to a mere human.
All of the characters is wellwritten and good but those are the ones that I wanted to mark out.

I can�t wait for new chapters, as I said, and I do hope there is more of them! I want to know how this shall end.
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From nekette on May 26, 2012
I just re-re-re-re... I don't know how maby re's, read the story.
I love this story.

If you even still have this e-mail active to recieve review alerts, know that readers still eagerly await any update. No matter how long it may take. I have this story favorited to reread when I have too much spare time on my hands.

*rolls around int he story*
I'll probably continue harassing you with more reviews the next time I reread. >.>
And I shant feel guilty about it at all.
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From ANON - Jane Hood on April 27, 2012
Just started reading your story. Wonderful stuff, thank you for writing this.
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From ANON - Kelly on April 10, 2012
I love this story! I started reading if years ago when there where only a few chapters, I was thinking of it the other day and decided to find it again. I was excited to see so many chapters :) This story is very well written, and I wanted to thank you for taking the time to make it so wonderful!
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From nekette on April 10, 2012
Wow, AFF'll let me re-review chapter 64? >.>
If your e-mail's still active I'm sure you're sick of me by now. XD

I love rereading this story. It helps waste my time with something entertaining. :D
And it'd be awesome if this story could pick up again someday, but Walter being revealed as not-a-traitor ... did I mention I always thought it was some sort of implant? Probably not, but the headaches gave me an idea... Aaanyways, that ending works.
But I love your writing, so if inspiration ever strikes again, your fans will throw a party, I'm sure.
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From nekette on April 09, 2012
I always loved this chapter. I reread it a few times just for the giggles on my first go through, and because my phone browswer was weird.
Bfffahaha... pedophile getting it up the ass with his own severed dick. Glorious.

Doubtless you'll get sick of hearing from me at some point, but I like reviewing this one when I have access to an actual keyboard instead of a keypad, it's easier to read the security code thing to tell the site you're not a robot. Heh.
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From nekette on April 08, 2012
I lied somewhat. I'm still rereading the second time around.
I love this chapter. :))

Anderson -so- would've cut it off. And it would've been hilarious. Poor priest gets so tormented by Alucard! *giggles*

Yes, I'm totally review spamming you. :P
But that just proves how much people like it. O:)
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From nekette on April 08, 2012
So now I forget what chapter her dream was, but since I'm rereading...
I think they were waiting on Anderson to bring the twins. :o
And maybe that Seras spawned after all, with that bit about Midians.
Tsk tsk Alucard. Keep it in your pants. >.>

I'll probably review one random chapter per how many times I reread it. Cuz I like this story. And I can reread things a zillion billion million times. >.>
...Also? It's -so- much easier to make things out when your screen displays italics and bold properly. =))
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From ANON - Brandy Presley on April 05, 2012
I love chapter 13. I think the ending for has to be my favorite. I love the way Alucard tortures her with his clothing and then when she says she doesn't like hearing any names for it he goews and tells her anyways. Iloved it. lol
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From nekette on April 05, 2012
Aw... No update since 2009? This'll teach me to not read update dates when trolling through the archives for stuff to read.

II can't tell if my other two reviews went through, since I sent them on my phone - and random note for humor, don't read AFF on an old style phone, it has no italics or bold, and makes it near impossible to tell wtf is thought or not XD - but I reviewed at 33/34 something, when Anderson got dragged into the story.
That was hilaristurbating. XD
I love it when Alucard's teasing the poor priest. Hehe.

And it's really only been a few weeks story-time wise? Wow. o.o Felt like longer.

I spent the last two days reading non stop cuz I got addicted. :3
But the 'Walter's not a traitor' is an okay ending if you've lost the time/inspiration to continue. I just wanted to review and let you know that I really liked it.
...And will doubtlessly reread it for my own amusement on a computer that shows italics. Heh.

...And, yeah. Not too sure what else to say, but it'd be awesome sauce if there was more. :]

...Also, it's a real pain to review and read the rrCAPTCHA thing. XD So that's why my other two might not've gone through right. Hard to tell.
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