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Reviews for Midian Evolution

By : Savaial
  • From SapphireEyes on February 21, 2009
    ...this has to be one of my top favs in the Hellsing universe...Seriously, I am floored at how well you have written this! I shall be stalking the updated section till you have the next chapter up! *wishes she had found this lovely piece earlier*
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  • From butabara on February 20, 2009
    Wow. Every chapter leaves me salivating for more! You are a VERY gifted author. I most impatiently await an update!
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  • From ANON - Angel Reaper on February 19, 2009
    This is probably dirty and wrong, but I started laughing when Seras said she liked her Master's firmness...

    Anyway, it was very cool getting a glimpse of young-again Walter with Integra. I hope more moments like that come soon. And I definitely liked the revelation that Alucard never really considered himself human, and the bed scene. I wonder if Alucard plans to do anything since he knows Seras loves/worships him, or if he can do anything at all.

    Hope your mom is doing well!
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  • From OmegaX on February 19, 2009
    A short chapter, but it tells so much.


    Alucard finally opens up more to his wife, Seras gets some tutoring from Walter on cussing, and we finally get to see some of Walter's skill in a non murderous manner.

    I like the angle you've used concerning Elisabetha. It's not something I would have thought to include, but it further strengthens the relationship between Alucard and Seras.

    Also, she finally admits to her love and worship of him..... Hahah, I wonder how Alucard will have Seras worship Him in front of Anderson now?
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  • From KarenLioncourt on February 19, 2009
    Fluffy^^ i'd like to see where this is going
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  • From LuciferDragon on February 19, 2009
    Good things are happening today. First I check out the car I'm getting for free, then I come home and see you updated. Keep going, this is great. And hope your mother is doing a lot better.
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  • From Savaial on February 19, 2009
    Hello and thank you to all my readers and reviewers. I do appreciate each and every one of you, believe me. After the stresses of family care it's nice to log onto this board and see what you all think of my silly shit.
    As to the Romanian translations: I checked my useage several times with different translators and each time came up with something different. I am not Romanian. It's a beautiful language to hear spoken, but I don't think it carries over well for English, one of the clumsiest, most contradicting languages on Earth. Let me check my notes and write out what what he's "supposed" to be saying. I'll footnote it at the end of each chapter as I come to it, which might require back-reading, but at least you'll know what Alucard meant. I'll cut down on that confusing stuff in the future, I promise.
    Again, thank you for reading, reviewing and taking the time to drop notes on this fic. I wish I could up[date more often these days, but it's just damn near impossible right now.
    GV
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  • From LadyFrisselle on February 18, 2009
    Can't remember if I've reviewed before or not but here goes....

    I really like this story...The way you have Seras' personality evolve subtlely is really good. I also like the way that you characterize the other players in this little drama.

    Keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - DemonCryQQ on February 17, 2009
    Ander-plant?. is that that Alucard try to turn Anderson into a vampire that would be kind of cool.
    Love this fan fiction one of my fav so far and i have read them all chapter are a great length for how fast you update this fan fic one of the fasts writes i have seen that does not sound like much comeing from some one who has not said a thing tell now but i swear to god that you are the fastest updater there is if i new any better. anyway like ever one above is saying you could slow down a little.
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  • From ANON - Nicole on February 17, 2009
    Ok, I just spent an hour or so reading this story straight through and it is fabulous! I would have left you a review for every chapter, but they would all read the same thing....
    OMG THIS IS SO FREAKING AWESOME! YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER AND SHOULD NEVER STOP! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!
    So yeah, just wanted you to know that I absolutely LOVE this story and I have no idea if you've abandoned it or whatever (haven't checked when the last update was posted) but if you have, please reconsider because you truly are talented and this story truly is fantastic. I've been looking for a really entertaining Hellsing story for a long time and so far you're the cream of the crop.
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  • From EchoingVoice on February 16, 2009
    I loved it. I had forgotten to check on it for a while and there were five new chapters! Your writing is wonderful and I especially loved Walter's new life. He was one of my favorite characters...
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  • From ANON - loui on February 13, 2009
    this is a great story but I came in around chapter 39 or 40 had come up(you kind updated fast on there for while). I try to review on the latest chapters if the story has alot of chapters. However I wanted to know what the words in romanian meant. So I tryed to find out or my self,and wound up try to learn the whole language by myself. (Thanks to free downloads.) This is what I got so far if you could email me and tell me what correct and whats not I'd be very happy

    Singe-sotie= cheif wife
    Ea datoria= she incumbent. ???
    Singe-sotie mea esta bolnav= My wife is Sick!
    Ai apartin la mine= of stateless is mine???
    Din cauza ei= ???
    Nu imi pasa= ???
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  • From ANON - Andrew on February 10, 2009
    I just read this whole thing in about two days. Very well written, interesting character interpretations. It's now one of my favorite Hellsing fics. Looking forward to more!
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  • From lara5170 on February 10, 2009
    Oh yes....this one was great & I loved that it gave you so many things to think about & look forward to. I can't imagine what they are going to do with Alexander & I loved the fact that they forgot to feed him. I almost felt sorry for him....no food,his blood taken,no privacy & sexual harassment but then again....it kinda feels good to be mean to him. I like how you've given him more depth then the anime/manga Alexander. I love how A & S interact. It's been a while since they've spent any alone time.
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  • From ANON - Angel Reaper on February 10, 2009
    It's ok if you slow the pace down, real life always takes priority over fanfic updates.

    Anyway, it's morbidly fascinating how Alucard is trying to break Anderson down w/ the bondage and homosexual innuendos. I suppose it helps that Seras is there to counteract some of the more intense moments, otherwise I would be very freaked out. I did like the moment where Alucard suggested Seras seduce Anderson though, it made me laugh. Well, keep up the good work!
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