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Reviews for Midian Evolution

By : Savaial
  • From OmegaX on February 01, 2009
    Haha, is it me, or is our Paladin getting chummy with our beloved Organization of Vampire slayers?


    More indirect orgasms for both Alucard and Seras.... when are the two ever going to finally seal the knot?


    We so need a scene where Walter just goes batshit insane on a group of foes and totally violates their bodies with his wires. One shouldn't mess with the wife of the Angel of Death.....


    Always awaiting the next chapter

    Your friend, always

    Anonelbe
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  • From ANON - Thornwitch on January 31, 2009
    That was an awesome couple of chapters. I loved Walter's reaction to being changed. "Am I disfigured?" "Oh, dear". It was like the reverse of the Joker's unveil in the 90's Batman movie.

    The transfusion was a great solution (are there universal recipients? I knew there were universal donors...?) And incidentally I like your storyline better than the one in the actual manga. Walter choosing to go bad and spending his ENTIRE LIFE in deep cover never made any sense to me.

    Still kind of expecting Allucard to attempt to seduce all the rest of Hellsing. Could be both sexy and amusing. Seras is undoubtedly in the beginning stages of tempting Anderson over to the "dark side" with the overwhelming power of her cuteness. After all, she's the most human person in the entire cast, and is also sweet and adorable. And he's getting a ring-side seat.

    I hope your mom is doing better.

    Good luck, and keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on January 31, 2009
    Your writing is very nicely composed, and I just read all of Midian Evolution in one sitting even though I am tired and was meant to go to bed almost six hours ago. I would hope you continued to write it, because it is very enjoyable. I love the way the characters act, and the relationships that are forming.

    Very well done, you have the gift of forming words into 'goodness' people would kill to read.

    A fan.
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  • From ANON - Angel Reaper on January 30, 2009
    ^^ I'm kinda excited about Walter being young again, I always did like him better that way. It was funny at the end with him preening in the mirror.

    I liked the Mangaverse Seras dream, it's a nice contrast to your story. I think I've said this before, but I really wouldn't like the Nazis and the Major appearing in the story, because they would be sort of out of place. On the other hand, I would like to see Dark Walter; I'd love to see Alucard fighting against him.

    And the Alucard/Seras moment (w/ Anderson commentary) was great, as always. I do hope more will follow soon...
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  • From ANON - kira_k on January 30, 2009
    I have just found this fic after reading the manga and watching the anime; and I really like how you built up this alternative reality, and how you developed the characters. (And of course, it is nice to read about the hot Seras x Alucard action as well!) I really enjoy your fic!
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  • From butabara on January 30, 2009
    Or dear God. I pray every day for updates to this! This is BEAUTIFULLY well written! The characters are perfectly captured, and the chapter flow is seamed together just right. I can almost SEE the situations, rather than read about them. You have AMAZING talent. Not many people can do that. Maybe one day we'll see some of your published work.

    Wonderful. Never, EVER stop writing, no matter what anybody else says. You have a gift, and I hope you nurture it.

    If its not too much trouble, could you email me when you update? guni_tatsuhiko@yahoo.com

    I dearly hope that you finish this, and can't wait for another update!


    Amazed,
    ~Gwilwileth~

    P.S. Thanks for the review of my story. After reading you work, it means a lot to know that a writer as brilliant as you appreciates my work, so THANK YOU!!
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  • From ANON - raichael on January 30, 2009
    and it just keeps getting better and better...
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  • From lara5170 on January 30, 2009
    Walter young. I'm so grateful you saved him & I'm also glad Seras saw her other self. I don't know why I'm so relieved that your not taking that course . I much prefer yours & you've got wondering about so many things you've hinted towards. I was so excited to see another new chapter........I think I love you.
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  • From OmegaX on January 30, 2009
    A little play between Master and servant, the revived Walter, and Seras getting a glimpse of the Mangaverse. Overall, a great chapter.

    I'm glad to see you addressed the issue so well with the versions of Walter, and I quite enjoyed Alucard's rebuttal of Anderson's claims that Seras is a child. Children with Double-D cups indeed. (D Cups fulled with Justice! Or perhaps crazy bondage fantasies?)


    I somewhat hope that the Mangaverse stays where it is, only so that it doesn't disturb Seras' view on things here. Still though, I pity anything that tries to take on the Hellsing family now, and I almost pity the kids Integra and Walter will have..... that kid is going to have the parents from HELL!
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  • From ANON - Niamh on January 30, 2009
    I have always looked forward to the part when Seras becomes the predator she is. She didn't grow up in some nice suburban neighborhood with white picket fence. But whenever I tried to come up with a story in my head, I could never imagine her doing it. Your story feels very natural, and kept Alucard's wicked playfulness and all his burden so real. I love your story! I haven't finished reading yet, but I really want to tell you that I am enjoying it so much and thank you!
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  • From lara5170 on January 30, 2009
    That was great. I love the ending with Walter saying "Oh dear" after seeing Anderson.
    I love this.
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  • From ANON - Grietje on January 29, 2009
    This is the first time ever I give a revieuw. I love reading, I hate writing ;-), and I dont like giving my email, because you know, spam. I realy like your story, but when do they finally get each other, sigh. You realy know how to build the tension between them. But i'm just a reader and no critic by any means.I hope you finish this story. So here's my revieuw, because you asked so nicely, ;-). Grietje
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  • From ANON - Selena_1 on January 29, 2009
    I love the story! I managed to read all 38 chapters in about 2-3 days! Please continue ^_^
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  • From ANON - Angel Reaper on January 28, 2009
    Oh my, does this mean I was right (or at least half-right) about Walter becoming young again? I was joking at the time, honest... Anyway, I do like the brilliance of using Anderson's blood to cure Walter. I hope they'll go and find who sent the serum now, that has been bugging me a little...

    As a random thought, how long will Anderson be sticking around Hellsing? They no longer need him, and I doubt they want to keep him prisoner any longer. And the Vatican isn't missing him (as far as we know) so they won't ask for him back... *shrug* I wouldn't mind if Anderson did stick around more; it's interesting having him in close quarters to Alucard.
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on January 28, 2009
    I read all of the first 37 chapters in one night, you know. Chapter 12 almost scared me to death. :) im firmly addicted to this story now. More? *puppy eyes* please?
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