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By : Savaial

From ANON - LuciferDragon on December 16, 2008
I came across this story by chance, and I can't get enough of it. Update as soon as you can. :D
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From 1upmushroom on December 16, 2008
Whoah, umm, cool surprise, but would section 13 really deploy such methods? Certainly not Anderson himself, he'd want every injury to Hellsing done by his own blessed blades.

Chiao, oh and that toussle was awesome XD
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From ANON - catcopy on December 16, 2008
I hated leaving for the weekend but got a very nice surprize when I got back, it was your lovely updates lol... You put out so many chapters while I was gone thank you... I think the last chapter was where the Seras and Integra where going to go shopping. The way you put the chapters up is very flowing it like you haven't even stopped reading from one to other. So I will just Review the last chapter... Poor Walter, getting doused with that crap, bet Integra is going to beat the living crap out of Anderson when she gets her gloves on him. But I have a feeling there wont be much of him when Seras get ahold of him for hurting Walter. Alucard is going to have to stop Seras from killing Anderson, he would tell not to kill him yet, torture all she wants but not to kill him.
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From ANON - Moleman on December 15, 2008
OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHH!!!!! A complication... I wonder if there's gonna be more 'playful' frolicking (sp?) with the vampires... Costly ;-) really awesome chaps, well done.
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From ANON - Thornwitch on December 15, 2008
Oooh, Walter's gonna be all badass and potentially unstable. Must be hard to find something to poison a vampire with. Nice of Alucard to change back into his "normal" work clothes for a serious purpose. Plus he's actually getting sent out to dance with his favorite (second favorite?) playmate! I'm glad Seras is making sure she's going to be treated the way she wants, not just how Alucard wants to treat her. He seems to get pretty out of hand without a little guidance, preferably of the violent female sort.

Oh, BTW, the differant categories of stories on fanfiction.net have different smut tolerances. For instance, if you put hard R or NC17 stuff up in a fandom for, say, a children's cartoon, someone is likely to object, even if you put in disclaimers. If you do it in a fandom where the original source material is say, totally gory and portrays major religions as evil and corrupt, you can get away with waaaaay more. Especially if you disclaimer the heck out of it. You can also link to the uncut version if you need to edit more.

I meant all the authors who won't take reviews unless you're logged in- then you can't review. I had a login once, but i think I lost the password when I moved to a new apartment...
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From OmegaX on December 15, 2008
Morning Review Time!

First off, sad news about your brief trip, but thanks for warning us all.

Angry Vampiric sex, the destruction of years worth of masonry, and Seras' darker half making another appearance.... she really needs to get that under control if she wants to be dominated properly.

Also, Iscariot is BONED, in every sense of the word... bastards, attacking Walter, Anderson is as good as captured. I will say though, I would have loved, in any of the series, to see a fight between Anderson and Walter, that would have been epic as hell.

Integral better jump Walter while he's in bed, and give him some "TLC" so our butler can get back to combat status.

Always looking forward to the newest chapters, and the week will go by slower because of the leave.

Anonelbe
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From Savaial on December 15, 2008
Anonelbe, thanks for reading and reviewing. I think you'll like the direction I'm pushing this fic in regards to both of these complicated relationships. I appreciate your constant feedback, truly.

Moleman, thank you. As far as bubly brides go, I think this would be the most "girly" Interga could manage, lol.

Thornwitch, thank you for the details on how the fic is making you feel. I know what you mean about the secondary female-bashing. It makes me wonder if women just have a hard time sharing the limelight. Integra and Alucard have a very complicated relationship going on, no matter how you look at Hellsing. And I think you're very right about the two females. Seras needs a female mentor, and Integra needs the reminder that she, too, is female.
Thanks for reading, reviewing, and being so concise.
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From ANON - Thornwitch on December 14, 2008
Y'know, one of my favorite things about this story is that It's Seras-centric, but you don't feel the need to make Integra into a cold, unfeeling, evil Bitch. I've always been extremely bothered that so many authors can't seem to write about a female character, particularly a secondary one, without bashing the other female characters. I really enjoy the Alucard/Integra relationship, which seems highly symbiotic on both sides, and you portray it beautifully.

I'm also glad Seras and Integra are going shopping together. Both of them are in serious need of positive female influence in their lives. I felt like thier relationship (almost entirely platonic) was only hinted at in the Anime and the manga I've written. Seras needs a sane, morally grounded mentor, and Integra needs to learn how to be comfortable with her femininity.
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From ANON - Moleman on December 14, 2008
An awesome chapter, it captures Integra's bubbly bride persona perfectly. Well done.
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From OmegaX on December 14, 2008
Two for One Review Special!

Ch. 32: More info on Seras and Alucard's relationship, and revelations that Seras doesn't like to be in control. A good companion chapter to....

Ch. 33: Bonding TIME!!! A nice game of chess turns darker, thanks to Integral's actual BLUSHING! Also, her mind is in the gutter with Walter, haha. It seems Integral enjoys her butler more than she let on before, and a plan is hatched, Frustrate the men with teasing!

Pent up Alucard is not going to be a pretty site.....

As always, awaiting the newest chapters,

Anonelbe
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From Savaial on December 14, 2008
Anonelbe, I love your early morning review specials! Seras is not mistaken in assuming she's a No-Life Queen. She's just a different No-Life Queen. Got more coming with Walter's dynamic, too. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Don't sweat a short review. Power here is so funky I have to save my documents every few minutes. I lose power when it rains, even.

1Moleman, thank you. Right now I'm writing to keep my mind off of very worrisome things, so I'm putting up chapters fast, maybe faster than I ought to. Thank you for taking the time to review after reading. As always, I appreciate it.

Snake-eat-dog, thanks! This is rated Au/Ar mostly because of future characters. Some are dead in anime/manga continuity. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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From 1upmushroom on December 14, 2008
Hey, still really enjoying these little surprises you put in each chapter. Question, why is this rated AR? Is it because of Walter is wedding Integra?

Chiaoooooooolol
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From ANON - 1Moleman on December 14, 2008
The story keeps getting better and better! I honestly can't comprehend how fast you're updating, you must be working like mad. Thank you for the effort you're putting into this.
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From OmegaX on December 13, 2008
Another Early Morning Review Special!

Seras gets a bit of reading done, and sadly realizes the fact that our beloved Walter is mortal (Or seems so, anyway)

I agree with her analysis of him, as it seems to fit him to a "T"

One thing I meant to ask, is Seras mistaken in assuming she's a No-Life Queen? I kind of get that feeling, but I'm not fully sure.

As always, eagerly awaiting the newest chapters

Anonelbe

P.S. Sorry about the short review last time, my power kept on going out due to a winter storm, and I didn't want to loose any progress, it seems I did anyway.
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From Savaial on December 13, 2008
catcopy, thanks for reading and reviewing! I appreaciate your detailed thoughts on the fic. There's no better incentive to write than knowing one has a few people who look for updates.

Anonelbe, thanks! Lol, poor Alucard can't let go of past bias.

Rose, thank you! I'm not sure how OOC my representation is, so your review is comforting. Thanks for taking the time to review.

Cherii, I appreciate the R & R. Hope to keep you entertained.
omg!! this story is awesome!!!! your doing a very good job with the plot and everything too!
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