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By : Savaial
  • From Savaial on December 06, 2008
    Thornwitch, yeah, mmmmm indeed! Yeah, she's a teenager, and pretty open to experience. I don't imagine there's much interesting about an orphanage, either. Sock glue is a Japanese invention. In their culture, the state of your socks shows how "loose" you are. If you wear your socks baggy, you're advertizing sexual adventurousness, as far as I understand it. "Good" girls use glue to keep their sock high on the legs and smooth. The glue is coming into use in other parts of the world now, as it does it's job pretty well, lol. Thanks for the read and review!


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  • From ANON - Thornwitch on December 05, 2008
    Mmmm, Bondagecard... Seras is likely to develop a fetish over this. Come to think of it, she's just now entering her teenage experimental phase, isn't she? After all, that ususally takes time and resources and she probably didn't have either as an orphan going through Police Academy.

    What the hell is sock glue?
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  • From Savaial on December 05, 2008
    kaitlyn, thank you! I try to update every day. I'm sure that won't always be possible...

    Anon, I appreciate your words. Not everyone likes the tension to draw out, so it's nice to know you DO like it. I hope I do know what I'm doing, lol. Thanks for letting me know what you think! I love R&R whether it's reading and reviewing or rest and relaxation.

    Snake-eat-dog, never meant for you to do the hempen jig! Alucard's version of mischief will eventually return. Right now he's going through difficult times. Thanks for the read and review!
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  • From 1upmushroom on December 05, 2008
    Still hanging, my neck will get rope burns..
    I like the interaction going on here. Who's mad at who for what and who ought to be and who ought not, heh. I think Alucard should discarded both the sulk and the peacock, and gone back to his mischievious bastardly self. Next time she's soaking, maybe :p

    Chiao
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 04, 2008
    You're story is utterly brilliant, something worth while. You didn't cut immediately to throwing Seras and Alucard into a sex-driven relationship and I respect you for it. I like the tension you add, its genius. I hope to read more from you, you know what you're doing, you handle your business very well. Thank you for such a delightful story!
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  • From ANON - kaitlyn on December 04, 2008
    i really enjoy this story. you are a very talented author. i hope you update soon.
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  • From Savaial on December 04, 2008
    Anonelbe, thank you for the early morning review! The cult is deeply disturbing, as I will reveal. I'm glad you like Walter. I really, really like Walter myself. I want one. I'm blending manga, OVA and the series, here, mashing it up to suit myself and hopefully others. Thanks for the feedback!

    Snake-eat-dog, thanks for the R&R! I don't write quick fics, so you may encounter cliffy stuff, sorry. I try to limit my chapters to around 1500 words. Yeah, Aries suits Integra. She's a trailblazer who likes to do things her own way. I just gave Walter the astrology thing as a little quirk. We don't know how Walter fills in his spare time, if he has any. My sympathies for your maimed fingers! I believe finger wounds are the worst. BTW, I talked to my brother and he said he has some sensation, but not much, because most of the nerves were severed along with the tendons. So, it's a re-write for that little bit, and I wouldn't have known without you pointing it out, so thank you.

    Mach, thanks you very much for the read and review! Yeah, they're OOC, but like you said, most fics are. We want to see more with our favorite characters, and when the original creators don't cough it up, we write it ourselves. Thanks for the favy!

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  • From ANON - Mach on December 03, 2008
    Ah, I love this fic to pieces. Especially the interaction between characters, very nicely done. So maybe they're a tad OOC, but hey, what fanfic isn't? Looking forward to seeing the next installment, add will definitely add to favs when ever I get around to making an account. Toddles!

    -Frog & Mach
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  • From 1upmushroom on December 03, 2008
    Awesome, a whole chapter and we're still in the dark about last chapters cliff. Awesome. Walter and stars? And Integra an Aries? Cool, me too.
    = I'm pretty sure Walter's last name is Dolneaz though.
    Yeee.... 3/4 huh? Damn, even worse than my uncle, lost a few whole fingers to a table saw. All I've lost is the tip of my right middle finger in a door fight with my brother. Almost squished my left middle finger flat in our garage door hinge, but stopped it in time to only squish it half-way flat, so it managed to return to normal size and shape.

    Heheh... Anyway, chaio
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  • From OmegaX on December 03, 2008
    Early Morning review time!


    I somewhat suspect that there's something about this cult that Integral isn't telling us, seeing Alucard's reaction to it. Hopefully we'll find out eventually.


    More lovable badass Walter action never hurts, and it shows that deep down, we all want a Walter.

    Also, I was curious as to why Alucard needed a new gun, but then it finally hit me, you're branching off the original anime, which is a PERFECT idea, as that version is really the closest we'll get to open A/S in the series.

    Always great work,

    Anonelbe
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  • From Savaial on December 03, 2008
    BlackDesert, thanks for your comments! The mysterious group will become less mysterious in a few chapters.

    Snake-eat-dog, I always thought they were particularly moody. I also enjoyed that scene of her as a child, confronting Alucard with her peashooter. I'm kinda going in a different way, though, because she's all grown up and has more subtle weapons at her disposal. As for the hand- My brother got his 3/4ths removed in a piece of farm equipment. It's going out of range to say a full recovery is possible, but he has some use of it. Thanks for commenting!

    breet, thank you for the encouargement and the promise to read. I hope I don't disappoint.

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  • From ANON - breet on December 03, 2008
    i just wanted to say that your story is the best i've read on this site and i plan to continue reading it in the future. thank you for such an entertaining read.
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  • From 1upmushroom on December 02, 2008
    Hah, nice cliff. Alucard and Integra are a pair of moody sods lol. She ought to prove how much he doesn't scare her by blowing his fangs out of his mouth with her favorite silver magnum. Remind him of how she impressed him in the first place as a child. As for the hand surgery... Would the nerve connections really mend together?

    Chiao
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  • From BlackDesert on December 02, 2008
    oh-ow here comes trouble! ^_^ hmm but i wonder what that group is about!
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  • From Savaial on December 02, 2008
    Anonelbe, what an interesting idea... Bondage Alucard does bondage, lol. I could make a meme for that. Thanks for your support!

    BlackDesert, thanks for your encouragement! Yes, I will keep updating.

    Matoska, well, good! Hope to continue the fic that way. You hit the nail on the head with the whole theme of the fic. Thanks for the feedback!

    Snake-eat-dog, lol, well, it isn't quite the same for females. Yeah, you can get a hand put back on. The surgery would be out of this world difficult due to tendons and such, and the recovery would be longer than six months I believe, but I'd imagine Integra would have the best medical team available.
    Thanks for the feedback!
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