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Reviews for Midian Evolution

By : Savaial
  • From 1upmushroom on December 01, 2008
    Serras's womb totally ROCKS dude! lol. Sweet chapter. Ah... I get a bad mental image though... Knee to the groin, ouch.
    Can you really get a hand reattached?

    Chiao
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  • From matoska on December 01, 2008
    Oh My! so steamy, fresh, different and good! This is much better for building the relationship/ownership than the typical wham, bam, thank you Mam. Seras got it when in this chapter she mentions Alucard Evolving. She appears to make him more human and he makes her more vampire but in a good combination.
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  • From BlackDesert on December 01, 2008
    love it! so glad you keep updating, the story really rocks ^_^
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  • From OmegaX on December 01, 2008
    Huzzah! And finally, Alucard brings Seras to her first climax!

    Expertly played, as always, and why can I see Seras getting into bondage with Alucard now?
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  • From Savaial on November 30, 2008
    wiper, thank you for the motivation!


    BlackDesert, thank you. I try to update every day. We'll see how long that lasts, as I'm sure to get a block sooner or later.


    Thornwitch, thanks for the details. Alucard would like to make them all his progeny.
    All of the characters are AU/AR, but maybe I should put up an OOC warning on my fic title. I can see him learning to play instruments over the long, boring years.
    What did you mean by some of the authors not letting you review? I don't know if I can edit this enough for Fanfiction.net. I will give it some thought, but after registering there many moons ago, I saw they didn't allow adult content and I just dropped out... I like it here a lot better. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Thornwitch on November 30, 2008
    You might want to put a slightly edited version of this on fanfiction.net A lot of people gave up on adultfanfiction when the site wasn't working for a while. Plus a lot of the authors here won't let you review...
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  • From ANON - Thornwitch on November 30, 2008
    I like the Integra/Alucard/Seras relationship in this fic a lot. May I assume that Alucard is planning to make them (and possibly Walter) into his own little scary-ass vampy family at some point?

    Seras seems just a little too okay with all the homicide, though.

    I loved Integra listening to Alucard playing the piano, though I have to say it did seem a trifle ooc.

    -TW
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  • From BlackDesert on November 30, 2008
    wow, you update so fast i can hardly keep up with you, but it's a really awesome story! ^_^ i'm sooooo glad you decided to continue
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  • From wiper on November 29, 2008
    Thanx for good new chapters and contunuing writing of this story .o)
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  • From 1upmushroom on November 28, 2008
    Well, you have my apology for reading and running when I'd finished up to chapter 6 and there were no more at the time. I'll make up for that now that I've caught up to chapter 14.

    Hmm, you write what I like to read, I can say that much. Your plot is interesting, and unlike the majority of fics found anywhere, doesn't feel at all rushed, no amateur work here.
    If I had to say something I don't like, which isn't easy when I'm enjoying it overall so much, well, all I can think of is that segment where Alucard breaks down in front of Integra, I really can't see that even as a possibility. But whatever, it still got to me a little thanks to Serras' reactions.

    Keep up the good fight writer.
    Chiao
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  • From OmegaX on November 28, 2008
    Haha, our No-Life King is possessive, isn't he?


    As I've stated, I love your interpretation of Alucard, as you're fusing the best of his Hellsing persona, with the best parts of his past as both the Count Dracula, and Lord Vlad Dracula of Romania's past. (I admire the man for doing exactly what he felt was required to rule his country.)


    Can't wait for the latest chapter.

    Anonelbe
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  • From ANON - Pix on November 28, 2008
    lol - I love it. A Zombie hunt maze - the idea is perfect. Needless to say I'm thrilled that you decided to continue your story and happy that the story continues on its steady exciting pace. I read a response of yours that said Alucard softness to Seras would soon be explained. I can't wait for that.

    Hope to hear more soon and please keep us updated on your progress (as I check this site but rarely),
    Pix
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  • From ANON - Pix on November 28, 2008
    Just read chapter 12 and I agree with you. You play the fine line between asking blantly for feedback rather than begging for reviews in order to glorify a personal goal. As a reader, I've seen writers provide long-winded thank you at the beginning and end of their stories, beg for more feedback or put out personal review counts they hope to achieve.

    How annoying.

    However I don't deny that as a writer - to have no feedback is equally devastating and annoying.

    My thoughts on your story:
    - Alucard doesn't come off nearly as insane as I know him to be from the TV series, however I like this version of him
    - I *love* the integration of the story Dracula into this fanfic though I haven't read the book and those do not know whether your interpretation of its characters are thoughtful and provoking, etc.
    - A solid well paced fic I hope you continue.
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  • From matoska on November 27, 2008
    I'm sorry but also glad you are comtinuing this story as I think it is very good. A little change of character for Alucard but in a good way (I am not one to believe he is all "bad and evil" like some authors take him). I do find reviewing in this Fiction site a bit difficuly however which is why I will rate chapters but seldom review. My computer does not like the login for some reason and gives me much grief. I do hope this story will continue and conclude as I really am enjoying the change of venue. Thank you again for continuing.
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  • From BlackDesert on November 25, 2008
    what a pity, you're going to stop? but the story is so awesome! i really love it, the pairings are awesome; i alway though alucard and seras belong together, and that last chapter, that was really hot! you really rock as a writer
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