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Reviews for Please Your God

By : kitoriwitch613
  • From ANON - Jenavive Gemstone on September 04, 2013
    That was amazing good story, I enjoyed it :D
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  • From DyingEyes on April 01, 2009
    Yayyyyyyyyyyyyy THis story was simply AMAZING!!! Not gonna lie, it made me tear up a little when Light began to feel sympathy for L..SO CUTE x]]]] Hehe. OOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooo...L in a red and white maid outfit...you've given me a great idea for a really sexy drawing!!! AHHHHHHHhhh *gets out pencil and paper* I'll definitely let you know if I post a drawing based off of your story ^_~ Thanks for the inspiration!
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  • From Poisond on December 15, 2008
    Bummer. You're complete? This could go further. ^w^ I actually really like this piece. I think Kira, or Light, being what age he is is still at the age of constantly changing thoughts. It makes sense that he would be willing to get more of a challenge and feel some sympathy for hurting L.

    Also, I LOVE that Light called him L Lawliet when threatening to kill him. This story went smoothly and beautifully. And you did an admirable job of giving Mikami a rather twisted personality and almost willing to defy what was Light's specific orders. Nice job with your story.
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  • From Dreamfool on December 07, 2008
    I really like this edition. I cannot see Light being content with a totally submissive L or even his role as god. At least not for long. The novelty of it would wear out as it has in your story. I also picture him as the jealous type. However don't confuse jealousy for love. A completely in character Light is incapable of real love. He can favor things and maybe even feel some compassion but only when it suits him.
    Your stories have so far done this and I really look forward to the next installment.
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  • From Necroface on December 01, 2008
    Again. I love you.

    Mikami saying 'pussy' makes me laugh, however. And he was slightly OOC.

    But gods, I absolutely ADORE the premises of the story. Like. So. Fucking. Much.

    Continuation y/n? :DDD
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  • From IntHellsing on November 29, 2008
    Thank you for this... I haven't been able to find interest in anything LxLight for a long time.
    You've renewed my interest.
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