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Reviews for Edgeplay

By : DeathNoteFangirl
  • From DeathNoteFangirl on December 31, 2008
    Melissa:

    *catches the kiss and blows one back in return* I didn't write with a straight face. Half the time I was badgering Miyamashi in messenger with 'does this actually work?' and she was 'it's genius, carry on' (or 'that's shit, how can you even think it? Go back and try again' obviously). *snort*

    Did you put your age in when you joined?

    Mello:

    Awww! You're so lovely. :D I've been and read it. I commented on Mangabullet, do you want me to comment here as well?




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  • From dominateMello on December 11, 2008
    *sighs happily* No wonder I love you so much Matilda, darling. Any story your briliant mind can come up with is definitely worth reading. Come Monday you might have a special sneak peak at a new story I'm writing. For now I am grounded and must resort to the use of a PSP in secret so bear with me. I am eager to hear your opinion on said story as you are my idol.
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  • From TsukinoMelissa on December 10, 2008
    You, my dear, are epic! *blows a kiss in return* And I figured it wasn't part of the main story. Mello IS much too possessive. I knew the second it said you were using all the kinks that you took this contest as a challenge. When I scoped out the comments later, it confirmed it. XD I just find that hilarious because I don't think I could write some of these kinks with a straight face. xDDDDD

    And embarrassingly enough, I didn't touch this site until I turned 18 after they made that new main page that's all official looking. xD Sad, I know. But I've seen this site bust people for being underage somehow and I have no idea how they did. xDDDD It's intimidating! (God, I'm lame.) Whatever, I'm legal and here now.
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  • From DeathNoteFangirl on December 09, 2008
    Melissa:

    LOL I do like a challenge. :p Yes, there were two Alice references. First the place was called a Wonderland, then you had the people dressed up in Alice drag. *blows kiss*

    This story doesn't really fit in with the main story. It couldn't and still have all the kinks in it. Maia commented on MangaBullet that Mello leaving Matt in the alley was stupid and I concurred. It was there simply because rape was on the kinks list and so I had to get it in somehow. In my series, Mello would never have done that, because he's too possessive and paranoid. Also Nine Lives mentioned on the official competition thing that it ended a little strangely, with them taking a shower. Shower sex was also on the kinks list, hence that happened. It was a story very much driven by the kinks list and so should be treated as complete crack. *grin*

    As for the reviews here, I have had people comment elsewhere that this site scares them a bit. It's generally the younger ones frightened by the warnings, when you first log in. I think that they genuinely believe that lying about their age will have national security forces knocking at their door and getting them in trouble with their parents. I've even had one person tell me that she can't read them here, because she doesn't want to go to jail. -.- Plus you get the fact that it asks you to review rather than merely comment. That comes with the software that runs this place and it's a git to change. Review is a much scarier word than comment. *grin*

    Glad you liked the story.

    Nine Lives:

    Yes, I have heard your comments elsewhere and they were as astute as usual. Thank you, guapa.

    You are right, this isn't linked with my main story. As for their 'normal' life, it's interesting to speculate. I think it would be doomed to epic failure. Matt wouldn't last 20 minutes without getting bored and Mello would go crazy under the lack of intelligent conversation. That's my humble opinion anyway. LOL
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  • From Ninelives on December 07, 2008
    Yeah, right. You can't get many comments in this site. Dunno why. People prefers ff.net
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  • From TsukinoMelissa on December 06, 2008
    Yeah, but you're you! haha I just mean people in general. Every time I come on this site, nothing seems to have more than 10 reviews max, no matter what pairing it is or who writes it or anything. XD
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  • From Ninelives on December 06, 2008
    Melissa, I haven't commented cause she already knows my thoughts about this piece and I'd hate to be repetitive LOL

    I wonder how far was the Total Power Exchange thing going. I mean, in their normal life. We see them in a BDSM event, where people are acting as they're supussed to, and still Matt keeps complaining xD and saying he hates mello and stuff LOL I wonder how their "normal life" would be (i'm assuming this is not linked to your main story)
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  • From TsukinoMelissa on December 05, 2008
    First of all, holy shit I love you. Who else could put every kink into a oneshot? Honestly? XDDD You. Are. Amazing. I saw that list. There was like... quite a few kinks. XDD MAN. And not only did you have them all, but it like... made sense. And worked! Holy CRAP. I just can't get over your skill. You even got the tentacle thing to make sense. Shit. I'm just amazed. -worship-

    Second of all, I have to make a comment about Mello looking at the drag outfits. God knows he would look good in them. XD And dsaahkfafh YAAAYYY!!!!1!! at the AiW reference I think I spied. XD YAYYY! hehe

    I LOVED the ending. And how it tied into the beginning. Hopefully Mello will stop messing with Matt's mind. XD I like him being able to talk. haha His sarcastic wit was greatly missed in this fic. haha

    And another thing, why does no one review on aff? Seriously? Nothing ever has that many reviews on this site. XD Well whatever. I never shut up, so I'm gonna review. AND WORSHIP YOUR SKILL. WORSHIP I SAY.
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