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Reviews for Shadows of the Night

By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From FogofNature on May 11, 2010
    Wow I can't beleive I haven't read this yet, it's nice to get some backstory and see a same Miyako.
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  • From ANON - soundwave on September 06, 2009
    hey greate work on this fic but my question is will gardevoir ask the greate one about the past and also if there baby die or what because if the baby had die than she shoud not be there give some hit
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on February 18, 2009
    Cerebrate Fate---It was barely out in time, lol, but haha, I did it. Very late happy birthday, too, lol.

    Skyler---I considered Flannery/Blaziken, but they haven't really been examined in Sinners proper, so their personalities weren't really set yet. Miyako and Quiero, however, have received a pretty deep examination (and will continue to show up later in the main story).

    FireBlaster---It's interesting writing them as 'normal', considering that the main encounter with Quiero was as a storyteller and Miyako as a batshit insane ghost. They were both very much sane and in love during life, though, so tee-hee.

    Espy---NEVER SKIP ANYTHING. Hope you haven't been doing that in Sinners, or you're going to be very surprised when certain events transpire, lol. And yes, I will refuse to write lemon scenes if I feel it damages the story's overall tone. I like sex, especially when it involves Gardevoir, but I've always been a plot-first, sex-later kind of writer, heh.

    Xain---Perhaps you should review it after you read it, and not before, lol.

    Kurbee---There will be Flannery goodness in a future oneshot, I promise you.

    Ashi Taiyono---Glad you like it.

    shadowed death657---While the focus at this part of Sinners is how similar the two timelines are, later the focus will be how different they've ended up. Partly because of that silly "free will" thing, and partly because the veil of the Shadow is breaking things down, including prophesy.

    Imasuky Lomae---Heh, it ain't going nowhere. Glad you enjoyed.

    Vyers---I thought it was short, too, but I wasn't going for anything epic or seriously plot-filled. Just a brief snapshot of two very long lives. :-D
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  • From Bishonen on January 21, 2009
    Great Fic soory i took so long lost my computer but this was so good it almost made me cry.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - shadowed death657 on December 28, 2008
    great, i really liked it lol in this case history repeats itself alot dosent it
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  • From ANON - Ashi Taiyono on December 28, 2008
    That was...touching. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Kurbee on December 27, 2008
    I doubt you're the only one, Celebrate. I had at least 5 friends at my old high school that played at least one of the games from Ru/Sa/Em/LG/FR, and now in college I've found 2 more who play Diamond.

    And I'm turning 19 next month.

    Great read, Slash. Though I too figured it would be a friendly romp story featuring the lovely Flannery, I'm not too disappointed. Merry Christmas and a happy New Year to the lot of you!
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  • From xain34 on December 26, 2008
    Oh, this looks good Slash, I'm gonna get reading it A.S.A.P. Peace for now man, and I hope to see some more from you later. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Espy on December 26, 2008
    Definately quite the read, as always Slash.

    I kinda skipped the bolded part though, only because I read that first paragraph, and knew where it was headed ;P.
    Otherwise, very nice.

    Oh, and one more thing:

    "No explicit sex in this one. It's not needed and it's not right to force it."

    "It's not needed, and it's not right to force it."

    ...

    Thanks.
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  • From FireBlaster on December 26, 2008
    lol, and Cerebrate? Guess again. You're looking(not literally) at another 18 year old right here. Haha... you'd be surprised how many people still love pokemon around our age. Shit, it helped shape some of our lives in a sense.

    And Slash, sorry for taking your comment page for that message. lol

    Here, I'll use this comment to state how much I liked this again. Because I did.
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  • From FireBlaster on December 26, 2008
    Nice. I really like it, for what it's worth. I could really feel the love between the two. Pretty damn awesome.
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  • From on December 26, 2008
    OH SHI---

    MIYAKO STORY

    Well, my guess was wrong. I thought for sure Blazekin would be warming up Flannery. Oh well, maybe next Christmas. Or any of the next twenty Christmases, considering how fast Sinners gets updated.

    --Nine months later, their child was born. It was...a Cacnea!--
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  • From ANON - Cerebate_Fate on December 26, 2008
    Yaaay backstory! Merry christmas everyone. I am now (As of yesterday) OFFICIALLY 18. Woot. Who wants to bet that I'm the only 18 year old at my school that is still into pokemon?
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  • From ANON - Cerebrate Fate on December 26, 2008
    Holy shit! Slash actually got something out on time! Ill post a review after I read it.
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