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Reviews for Cold Feet in Hot Water

By : Amako
  • From FairySlayer on October 21, 2012
    I listened* to this just last night and was impressed with the intimacy as you laid out both's feelings then let her take that one heroic step, in her mind risking everything, to "tell" him what she wants because she's naive enough not to have understood her feelings. The bit about her panicky transformations occurring more often was a good hint in the beginning that she was very troubled before looking into Fakir's angst. It stuck in my mind and tempered my reaction as you delved into the angsty writer's frustration, and touch of anger, tempering that until you got to Ahiru's feelings. As a heroine she had to take bold steps and risk great sacrifice to do what was right, and fortunately it turned out for the best. And very hot (besides the water).

    * I run fanfics and news through a simple text-to-speech then load them on my MP3 player so I can get my news and stories when I'm out and about.)

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  • From lionofjudah on July 04, 2009
    This is so good! You need to write more! I left a better review on FF.net, but I'll use this place to beg you to write more stories. I can make prompts for you or something... Maybe you can read my new one for some inspiration?
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  • From slayer-of-evil on June 10, 2009
    This is very good.

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  • From HitomiBrighteyes on April 13, 2009
    Absolutely amazing! You have the characters down pat. And, of course, the fact that it was hot as Hell was a smexy bonus!
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  • From THEleprechaun on April 10, 2009
    Awesomeness! I loved it! If i were the sort who smoked I would totally light up after this ^^ so lots and lots of marshmallows and chocolate to you!!

    murray
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  • From ShouraiChan on April 03, 2009
    Loved it. It was cute, sexy, detailed and funny! Great job!
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