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Reviews for The Sparks of Dark within your Light

By : mayablackwolf
  • From on April 21, 2009
    oooh, me likey very very much!!!!

    can't wait to read L's

    i think you did a great job telling this from watari's point of view...it's gotta be kinda hard since he's so...eh...old

    please please please update, i love it!
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  • From DecadentDreams on April 13, 2009
    It was good!
    At first I was hoping you'd go a bit more into detail about when Light got shot but then the more I thought about it, the more I realized you had gone into as much detail as the story allowed, so it's okay.
    xD

    I've just read the first chapter, I'll read the next two now.
    I'm glad you went and did this, it's fun and interesting to see where you've gone and how you've further molded your story by giving more back stories.
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  • From ANON - Sarian on March 23, 2009
    lol, review? I almost see no point in doing that. I know that i'm going to like wat you write. But for the sake of letting you know that i've read it, and indeed, liked it, i'll review. god, i'm sooo booored!!! there's nothing to do.... can you update soon so i can read that really good story? you know, the one called darkness within your light'? please? lol, finish this first, before updating the other...
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  • From ANON - Kenichi Matsuyama on March 23, 2009
    *squeal* OMG!!! I LOVE IT! Your an amazing writer, don't give up!! Update and stuff soon!! *pokes muse*
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  • From Foxmore on March 23, 2009
    Yay! I love Watari, and I think you managed to get into his head really well. (just a reminder: the cookie offer is still valid xD)
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  • From SailorAurora on March 23, 2009
    Yeah, a pity that was so short but at least you managed to characterize Watari well. :)
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  • From ANON - Fallain on March 22, 2009
    Wow! I really liked this, I can't wait to read L's part
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  • From on March 22, 2009
    brilliant, can't wait to read l's pov ^^

    keep writing your awesome stories XD
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  • From ANON - Sarian on March 21, 2009
    it's good, will you update darkness within your light now? It's just so mean to hold us in suspense... and when are you planning on getting the second part up? ...so cruel... *sniffle* poow wight
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  • From ANON - Nyves on March 20, 2009
    Aww I liked seeing Soichiro's point of view. I don't think I've ever liked him this much before. I really can't wait to see Watari's side, and of course I wanna see L's cuz seriously, who doesn't just adore L? Update soon please!
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  • From SailorAurora on March 20, 2009
    it was pretty excellent. :)

    I love how you detailed out his thoughts so well.

    I put up another DN fan-ficton in the AU section if you need some new reading material. like you, my muse's been stuck in a pit of mud too so I thought a new one would kick-start it :p
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  • From Foxmore on March 20, 2009
    I really like this. Yagami-san always kinda scared me in the anime (you could deffinately see where Raito got his crazy genes), but in your story he actually seems human. Great job. I hope your muse gets unstuck. I can't wait for Watari's pov. And of course the next chapter.
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