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Reviews for Safe

By : Foxmore
  • From LadyLaran on October 13, 2009
    AFF is slow on reviews...FF.net is just as bad but don't let it get you down. Get on going! It's a good start, I like the cute idea of L hoarding food like that. will you explain that behavior later?
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  • From KageMori on May 13, 2009
    seems intresting so far. i would like to read more of this story. i hope that you'll have another chapter out soon.
    i specally love L's hoarding behavior. its pretty funny, and deffently something that i can picture him doing, specally with candy.
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  • From Foxmore on May 13, 2009
    ha. thank you. I guess your right. Data is spelled with a "t". :D
    This story is a bit on hold, mainly because I am in the middle of writing a MelloXMatt fic that is taking over my muse. When one decides to show up that is.

    Again, thank you (and every one else that has reviewed)!
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  • From ANON - Some Crazy Chick on May 13, 2009
    I want you to know that I don't usually bother to review on here, so feel very lucky. But I recognized a bit of myself in you, the way you mentioned losing faith in your writing (I don't have any work on aff, it's all on ffnet).
    You're doing a good job, so keep it up. You might want to read over for grammar and spelling errors, though. I saw a couple, the most glaring of them that you accidentally put "dada" instead of "data." It IS spelled with a T.
    Other than that it's going pretty well, and I'm looking forward to future chapters!
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  • From ranmamatsuri on April 22, 2009
    Nice. Very nice. For such a short musing, this was well written and more in depth than most longer fics. I look forward to reading the next chapter, so here's to hoping that a raid of plot bunnies invade your brain. ;)
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  • From SailorAurora on March 20, 2009
    you characterized L's thought patterns very well, I must say.
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