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By : bookkbaby

From Nanaka on December 11, 2009
I love this story so far and can't wait to see what happens next. This is actually the first D. Gray Man fanfic i've read (I only just got into the anime/manga). So thanks and congradulations on making my firt impression of DGM fics a spectacular one!
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From Gunzablaze on December 06, 2009
Awesome chapter...Hmmm do I see Tyki being handed an exorcist uniform? Oh dude that'd be awesome! Oh no! Maybe he'd follow behidn with Lavi and Bookman willing! EEEH it's so fun to think about it!
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From KotoriSensei on December 06, 2009
OoO''' I haven't realized you are the same writer!!! I mean: of this fic and Canis Luna!!! I'm like >///
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From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2009
omgomgomgomg u UPDATED!!! ugh, but the cliffhanger was murder! u are quite evil madame (?) hope krory gives jasdevi a spanking *giggle* you never see much Krory/Jasdevi for some reason. i mean it has potential but no one does anything with it. not even fanart. anyhoo, i love your writing and i'm following your canis...the dgm version of little red riding hood. i loves me some LUCKY and Yullen. That reminds me, will yu get some action with allen? he hasn't even told him how he feels yet! what's wrong with that boy?! anyway, can't wait until your next update. i can't wait!
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From Mitsuhon on November 25, 2009
Thanks for the update! I was having an awful day yesterday, but at least I got to read a new chapter of this
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From KotoriSensei on November 24, 2009
KKKKKKKKKKKKIiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally!!! A new chapter!!! You said it will be out soon but...ok...not complaining, better review.
What to say? Actually i don't like fighting chapter (as this) a lot, beacuse it doesn't happen much more...that the fightign. Of course, no matter that, this one is great because is kind of the prologue of the biguest battle of them all: Tyky VS Lavi....jajaja, and i don't really think is going to be a corporal fighting more that a verbal or staring one....jijijiji I know, i nut. I just laugh and laugh, but i love that last sentence with Tyki's thoughts, exactly as a very upset, angry and rengeful woman will speak!!!!!! JAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJA
See you soon, please!!!!
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From Anonymoose on November 24, 2009
You update fast! And awesome, battle time.

Thought for a second there that Tyki might go evil. Glad he didn't. ;3;

And the pink bunny akuma Kanda slayed sorta reminded me of Lavi. I dunno, don't mind me. lack of sleep makes me weird.

Until next chapter. ^^V

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From Anonymoose on November 09, 2009
I decided to stop lurking and registered on AFF.net to review you.

Your story is amazing!

I admit I began to read this because it said "Yullen" in the summary and I'm a sucker for Yullen. But as I continued reading, I found out it's a Tyki/Lavi fic and I /love/ it (and it also has slight Yullen, so it's a win-win).

Also, I'm not quite a fan of angst but if it was all sunshine and rainbows then it wouldn't be as good. And a good ending is always better after hardships. ^^;

In my opinion you did a great job at writing this and I hope you continue to write in the future.

PS: HAVE MY BABIES! ;^;

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From KotoriSensei on November 08, 2009
I think i cried during all this chapter...except the part of Komui and Reever...but the rest...OMG, my poor eyes.
So, it happen as wanted and Tyki wake up before Lavi leave...and now, i'm not pretty sure i still like that. Poor Tyki..come to my arms!!! I'll confort you...buajajajajajaja, no, kidding. Tyki is Lavi's sweetheart, nobidy else's.
Sooo....Lavi start to consider the idea of not been a Bookman; that must be hard, after all, it's all his life has revolve and start to hate that because some thing else (independent that something else is a wondelrfull and sexy Noah) must be stressfull.
My ilusion now (and i hope it doesn't end like this) is that Allen gets an epiphany and go to speak to...TYKI!!! Ofcourse he must be...now very happy, but maybe that hell a little, specially if Allen describe to him how Lavi is now...without him...T-T I'm crying again...
You write you'll continue soon, PLEASE DO!!!!!
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From Mitsuhon on November 08, 2009
Thank you, an update always cheers me up. Lavi and Tyki, they so need love. Poor darlings.

(and wow, Allen and Kanda are so cute too!)
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From KotoriSensei on October 28, 2009
Oh God! Thanks for the new chater!!! As you said it had a little of everything...of course the first part was the nicer..XD No kiding. I almost get a heart attack with the scene of Allen and Kanda in the bathroom!!! I though my heart was goin to get out of my chest!!! It was so funny and hot at the same time!!! Please...make another...longer this time...maybe with a diferent end...you know what i'm talking about...jijiji
Anyway, thigs are getting complicated. I supouse in the next chapter Lavi is going to wake up...and leave T-T Poor lavi, and poor Tyki. As i ask you in the last one, is he going to tell him anything at all or not? I'm bittibg my nails!!! And of course, the second big incognita: when is the Earl going to strike back? He must be desperate (as i'm) to see Tyki againg and...say hello...OoO
Continue soon!!! In act, don't beta'd!!! Just publish it like that and...make me happy... :)

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From nikita005 on October 28, 2009
Chapter 26

Hiya again! Yay, I'm finally caught up!

Sorry I haven't been able to review/comment lately, but we all know about the real world and its annoying habit of intruding on our Fanfiction fun. It's already starting to get down to cruch time at my college, so I'm get less and less leisure time to myself. "Hurry up, Christmas Break" is my healing mantra for now!

But enough about me. I just wanted to say...

AWESOME chapter! If I were a more emotional person, I think I would've been sobbing at the end of the LUCKY scene...so bittersweet! Please don't have them sleep through the rest of the night! They've still got a few more hours, right? Lavi should wake up, kiss Tyki's facial beauty mark (I've always thought of this as such a sexy but loving gesture), the Noah wakes up, and then...well...we all know what would happen next when left in your capable hands! Lol

I also enjoying your Allen & Kanda dynamics. Those two are already funny enough with their animosity towards each other but add in their attraction, and it just makes their interactions even better. Since both of them are still in denial of the other, it's just that much more amusing to watch them skirt the issue. I'm glad you decided to include them. I must admit, they're usually not my pairing of choice, but you have all their little habits and mannerisms down pat, so your interpretation of their actions seem more natural.

I'm also EXTREMELY relieved to see that you'll be continuing to post "AGoP" here. I was almost depressed when you said you might not be. It would have been such a shame to not know what'll happen with this lovely story!

Okay, I guess that's all I have to say for now. Happy writing, and I anxiously await Chapter 27!

'Til next time!
nikita
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From darkstar51 on October 11, 2009
Uhm... but you will be updating it here right?? >.< I likes reading this sooo much. And I know how you feel one of my other fics get favorited and alert but only a few people review.. Its a bit annoying not getting feedback so I don't blame you. i just hope to be a able to keep reading this.
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From xRiisaDesux on October 08, 2009
I apologize. I would have reviewed earlier, I just didn't have an account at the time.
I have to say, your writing is wonderful, and helps me develop my own stories.
Sorry I'm not leaving a larger review, I just have an intense headache.
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From KotoriSensei on October 08, 2009
Hi there! Sorry for the ones who don't review. I undertand it's a lot of work to take the time and write every single chapter and of course, to think what will you put on them, and of course you deserve at least, a coment of it, be good or bad.
This chapter...well, besides the little paragraph at the beginig of Allen (i get all exited when i read the name, thinkg maybe Yuu will be there too) it was all about T and L...they are soo cute!!! Both of them! This lemosn was amazing because they are no longer containing themselfs from the pleasure (especially Lavi) and using Poker as a excuse. Of course, it's also stained with the idea of Good bay...but just from L... poor of him...i'll be crying like an idiot in his arms....TT_TT
Anyway. Will actually L tell him that's the last time they'll be togheter? Or he'll just leave at dawn without a word? Maybe that won't be possible...i don't believe T will just sleep pacefully, specially because last time L left without saying a word...i hope that...
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