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Reviews for A Game of Poker

By : bookkbaby
  • From nikita005 on October 08, 2009
    Hello!

    I just have to say that I love, love, love your story. Everything is so natural and believable, and each chapter just leaves me anxiously awaiting the next...which isn't a problem right now since I just finished Chapter 4, so I've got a bit to go.

    I can't believe that I haven't run across your story before! I saw the pub. date and thought "Really...I haven't read this yet?! It's got, like, 21 chapters!" I'm a sucker for long stories and even more of a sucker for a long story with an engaging plot, an awesome writing style, and amazing characterization...and this story possesses all of these traits in spades!

    And not to mention incredibly hot sex scenes. I was blushing (Yes, literally blushing!) the first time they had sex...and the second... Kudos to you 'cause that doesn't happen very often, I assure you!

    Anyways, I just wanted to let you know that you're doing a marvelous job with this and for you to keep doing what you're doing since it won't take me long to catch up! lol

    'Til next time!
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  • From KotoriSensei on September 28, 2009
    Hi there!!!
    OMG! I was like OoO when Lavi and Bookman were talking...i though i was gona die from suspence!!!! And Bookman!!! He gave him another night!!! Of course, i think that will be more painfull at the end but...it's another night after all.
    So, when are you going to write a little more Yullen? I love them!!! Specially Yu, he is so easy to bother and when he is angry...ggggrrrr...sexy!!! Jajajaja, yes...i'm nuts.
    Just hope ypu continue soon...this is on it climax!!!! I gona pull over all my hair if i have to wait to much!!!
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  • From KotoriSensei on September 14, 2009
    Ok, this last chapter...intense.
    Not only did Tyki rape Lavi (because that was...even if he get little plasure and...he like it at the end...ok, maybe it wasn't...) but the reason why he did it on the firsth place...he is obsesed with him, not in love (for now) but obsesion more that anything. Lavi on the contrary it's realizing his actually fellings. Poor of him. Think that someone you care only wants sex..must be depressing...
    It's late...i should go to spleep...but i can't!!! Your fic is to damn good!!!!
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  • From KotoriSensei on September 14, 2009
    .....I'm sorry that i can write to much but i have to go to the E.R because of a nasal bledding....>///
    he let the Innocence!!! Jijijijiji
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  • From KotoriSensei on September 13, 2009
    So, so? It's there going to be some "Yullen" in this fic too? I wouldn-t get angry at all!!!!!
    T-T I didn't like the fact that Tyki sould change Lavi so fast...but i did like he wasn't satisfy...buajajajaajja, he deserve it!!! I know it, i know it...they aren't lovers or are married and it was just a game but...i'm hopeless romantic woman...let me dream...XD
    See you latter!!!
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  • From KotoriSensei on September 13, 2009
    I think this may be the longest lemon i have ever read...not that matters...in fact...I LOVE IT!!!!!
    KKKKKKKKKKKKKKiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was amazing!!! Congratulations!!!
    When lavi just drop the card i though..."Mmmmm, Tyki is going to find them"..and of course he did.
    Good thing because that will bring more encounters beetween those two. BUajajajajajajaajajajajajaja (evil laugh)
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  • From KotoriSensei on September 13, 2009
    Wow! That was a really good starting, because you catch everybodys atention with the game and specially, with what will happen next!
    So Lavi lied...i would have do exactly the same...Tyki!!! He is SOOOO SEXY!!!! >///
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  • From Mitsuhon on September 13, 2009
    Thanks a bunch for the update. Tyki's so sweet in his possessiveness. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2009
    I was so happy to see you updated! But the part about Bookman going to see Lavi worries me.
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  • From Mitsuhon on August 03, 2009
    Thanks for the chapter! My heart really cries out for Lavi. :p And Tyki's such a sweetheart too. And the sex totally made my day.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2009
    Oh shit. That Finder's going to blab about Lavi isn't he? Damn it! I was happy to see that you updated. Seeing your new post brightened my day.
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  • From FelineFantasies on July 17, 2009
    This is amazing.

    I was just recently introduced to Lucky and reading this has made me a fan of it.
    I love it and can't wait to read more.
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  • From PandaPon on July 07, 2009
    Wh0oT!!! This fic jus' keeps gittin' better an' better, hon!!

    I'll admit i wasn't expectin' ta see Yuulen in there, but...Kanda was jus' SO DANG CUTE!!!!! Seriously....talk about denial, much? XD I got a HUGE kick outta tha'.

    So, Allen's startin' ta figure it out, hmmm? Well, i wouldn't put it past him. Moyashi's are SMART. D:

    When do ya plan on puttin' in Lavi's 'talk' with the Ol' Panda? Or are ya not goin' ta include tha'...? I'll be honest, tha's one part i'm lookin' forward ta. I'm a sucker fer drama/angst. -___-

    Anywho, i can't WAIT fer yer next update! I'm totally addicted ta this fic. Have been since chapter one....
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 07, 2009
    OMFGWTFBBQ
    You're just going to leave me hanging after introducing a sexy new potential pairing?! You are so cruel! Just kidding. But seriously, update soon. I wanna see if Kanda reveals his feelings for Allen and they have sex. And I want Tykki and Lavi to have another private moment too. Love your stories so much!
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  • From cagna4 on June 22, 2009
    so the finders did hear. those sneeky people. you have an LJ? could you tell me what it is please? please update soon also.
    windingcircle4@yahoo.com
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