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Reviews for Light in Darkness

By : kissmekillmeloveme
  • From ANON - Tyrsira on September 14, 2009
    That was *beautiful*. Other than a few slight problems with typos and grammar (not enough to distract from the story itself), the only thing criticism I have is that L tops. I've always felt that Raito was the more dominant of the pair, though it is plausible that because of his subordinant position (ha!) to L and the necessity of maintaining his unaggressive persona that he submits to L in this situation.

    At any rate, you are very skilled at writing as L the person, emotional and passionate, while retaining the logical and orally-fixated mannerisms that define his public personality. I look forward to seeing what you write in the future.
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  • From ANON - l-girl on May 10, 2009
    Very good! Fairly realistic, very sweet and kinda sad. Please feel free to continue to play with these two, you do such a good job.
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