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By : hsaotome

From ANON - Halle on March 04, 2011
Awww man! I show up here for the first time in an eternity hoping against hope to find something half way decent and end up stumbling across the friggin' Fountainhead of Ranma 1/2 erotica--AND IT'S UNFINISHED!

This fic is absolutely amazing. I'm less than a third of the way through and it just keeps getting better.

It seems as though the writer has finally given up the ghost on writing though, so I'm in tears that I'll inevitably finish reading a story that has no real end. *tears*
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From Imsadistic on December 20, 2010
Wow that was intense.

Loved it as ever and that bitch Ukyo got raped. I love when she gets what she deserves.

Now can the rest of the guys do her in a never ending gangbang?

Sadist Sid
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From ANON - MSA on December 17, 2010
Man, where to begin? This is a pretty solidly written piece of agony, and I've been enjoying it overall, though this last chapter had me pacing around for about an hour in a haze of, well, anger. This is not a bad thing, rather it's just a statement that your writing managed to hit me in a meaningful way, though perhaps not in an expected one.

In truth, it's actually the second time as well - the first was "Hyde-Side" Ryoga's torturing of logic to make himself sound the hero; playing the victim card while victimizing his so-called oppressors was a rather masterful stroke of hypocrisy, and you wrote it so it managed to hit me just so. It is a very human thing to twist shit around to justify ones actions, but I ended up hating him rather more than the first villain. Even though Michio is arguably the worse of the two, his horrible justification is simply so much more mundane.

And now, Ukyo has gotten the treatment and my reaction is much the same. Bravo. I always found her rather boring in canon, and now you've managed to get me to have a strong feeling about her. Granted that feeling is seething rage, but it's something and much stronger than I normally feel about depictions of her. Much like with Ryoga, it's the expertly twisted illogic around a seed of burning hypocrisy - the "truth" can only be what she wants to hear. Granted it's a fairly common hypocrisy, but it usually doesn't involve torture. With Ryoga, at least, it's a twisted mirror of his actual personality, which is still present, if subdued.

Ukyo is just a colossal bitch, and while I can't predict whats coming next (aside from more twisted sex, of course), I must admit that I do hope, most sincerely, that she gets what's coming to her.
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From peterschell on December 17, 2010
Ukyou certainly has a talent for the nasty. Looks like she's going to bring a womans touch to the enterprise. Poor Akane and Ranma. I have to say, however, that I don't find the prospect of Ukyou making male type Ranma do her very interesting. Hyocritical of me I know. But I honestly don't think she'd find the experience satisfying. She might get sex from him, but she wants way more from Ranma than that, and there is no way she can make him give her that.
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From Scorpinac on December 15, 2010
Once again, frying pan, fire, etc.... On the plus side, Ryoga will most likely tell her the actual truth now, and hopefully Ukyo will actually let herself hear it, but I suppose that would be too much to ask? Again, though, Gosunkugi comes out as the only decent one aside of our heroes and their two "secret" allies. Well, until chapter 28, then. Laters.
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From scifinut64 on December 15, 2010
I just love this story, can't wait for the next chapter, what i'm really looking forward to is when Ranma and Akane get the cure that is going to be a great read. Keep up the outstanding writing.
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From ANON - Kazuma on December 15, 2010
I've been keeping up with the story since it started, but i really got to say that the idea of adding Ukyo to the equation is a terrible idea. would of prefer that you killed her off, but then i just hated Ukyo in a general since since she was first introduced in the manga. I look forward to what you plan on doing but I have ideas and not too fond of 'em.
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From Imsadistic on December 02, 2010
Glad to see you're back writing again. I love, love, love this story. Each chapter is like a cherished gifts.

Thank you,

Sid
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From peterschell on November 29, 2010
and Ukyou now enters the story as a principal character, I hope. I'm guessing she's going to find out very soon that she's bi, which adds a whole other element to her desire for Ranma. And the way this story runs, she's going to find out that she really enjoys putting little sluts in their place. That is unless Akane gets rescued of course.

That is actually something I see being very important in the following chapter. Ryouga sent Akane out at night alone, and now she's vanished. He's likely going to 'interview' the boys to make sure they haven't decided to stash Akane away somewhere. But I'm hoping their is enough of the old Ryouga left that he can feel dread and guilt over what might have happened to her. Ranma of course is not going to be a happy camper either, and both he/she and Ryouga are not going to be able to take it easy.They're going to have to go out trolling for something more dangerous than dumpling men with a pigtail fetish.

I did like the way Ryouga 'played with Ranma' in this chapter, and Ranma's reaction. She no longer seems to feel shame or degredation, merely severe annoyance. Makes it much easier to read to tell the truth than if it was given the full dark treatment with the girls reacting in real world terms.
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From Scorpinac on November 29, 2010
Yeah, I suppose cannon events that occurred subsequent to the moxibustion arc would still occur in this twisted reality regardless, it will be interesting to see what you do with the Dragon Whisker story. As for Akane and Ukyo, well, maybe Akane will tell her what's really going on and that will bring Ukyo back down to earth? I mean, Akane's weakness is prrof enough. Oh, boy... Oh, yeah, and kudos on getting this one out so fast. Until chapter 27, then. Laters.
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From peterschell on November 28, 2010
Welcome back. And you came back with a bang too. A very good chapter with lots of fun abuse. Though I'm sure Ranma does not see it that way. Akane on the other hand. . . More foreshadowing with Ukyou. I have no trouble seeing her doing some pretty nasty stuff to Akane, but I would sort of like to see her rehabliatated to a certain extent. Frankly, given her past history I think she's a very logical candidate to use the magic of the series to turn into a guy, which would add an interesting element to the situation.

There is only Kasumi left in the house now, and I really have to wonder about how clueless she is. You can't hide secrets like this from the person who does the laundry and housekeeping. She's either a lot stupider than I think she is, or is ignoring things for her own reasons. There is part of me that would love to see her join in, on Ryouga's side, as her little sister has needed some serious disipline for a long time. Or take this chance to go out on her own,leaving Ryouga alone at home with Ranma and Akane. The possibilities for certain scenes if he had no fear of discovery would certainly be fun.
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From Scorpinac on November 23, 2010
Just looked at your correction of chapter 24, and yes, that works, makes much more sense now. And since I forgot before, Ukyo really needs a shrink, doesn't she? At least she trying to control her anger, but for how long? Oh, well. Again, laters.
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From Scorpinac on November 23, 2010
Somehow, I think that little boat excursion would have been more comfortable in the spring or summer time, but I digress. And Hikaru continues to gain respect, I must say. Though I must also admit to perfectly understanding his reasons. As to the close, yeah, should have seen that one coming, though sadly Ryoga covered it well. And somehow I think he's going to step things up a bit now that Soun and Genma are out of the equation for a while...though there is still Nabiki and Kasumi... Ah, well. Until chapter 26, then. Laters.
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From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2010
---Sheesh, the perverts just keep getting kinkier. Still, it could be worse for our intrepid protagonists . . . Shampoo could get into the game!

Do me a favor and see to it that Ukyo gets hers in the end . . . even if you have to add her as forced slave-whore number three in Michio's little group. Not sure how you'd do it, considering how the moxibustion is gone, but she would deserve it.

Nice to see you back in action. Don't wait too long to update next time, got it?
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From Scorpinac on June 19, 2010
Yes, the partial cure, I predicted that. And geez fate really tried to do a number on them right then, huh? Though frankly I find it odd that there would even be ice cold water in a greenhouse, I'd think the heat of the inside would prevent it from getting that cold. But, hey, what do I know? And, hey, at last Akane and Ranma have full sex together! Wahoo! Now, again, if they could just realize there's something terribly wrong with Ryoga, since the real Ryoga did manage to push through for a moment there... And to be honest, I'm surprised that Ukyo's still trying to get Ranma after what he did to her in the mountains in retaliation for her raping him. It'll be interesting to see what she has in mind, especially after she finds out Ranma's been back for awhile now. And do I really even want to know what's going to happen when she finds out what those two have been up to in her home? Well, until chapter 25, then. Laters.
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