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By : hsaotome

From peterschell on June 19, 2010
I have to congradulate you on Ryouga. He's really evil here. And yet we get a teaser that maybe he's as much a victim as Ranma and Akane. He might come out of this more traumatized than they are if things don't go right.

Very effective "DUM DA DUM" moment featuring Ukyou, and that Strap on certainly sets the stage. Be interesting to see how nasty she can be. There is a reason the Indian's used to turn prisoner's over to the women.

I do have a quibble, it's wholly because of my bias and likely not shared by everyone. It was Ryouga keeping Ranma male, and actually getting him to steer Ryouga into Akane. A mervelous bit of nasty on Ryouga's part, but I can't help but think he would be uncomfortable as hell with a guy handling his junk. In my own mind he just covered well and really ground Ranma's nose in the dirt at the same time. For my preference I'd just as well prefer it if Ranma were not male during these little sessions.
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From Imsadistic on June 18, 2010
Ummmmm, another strokable chapter from the master of dark lemons. I salut you my friend can't wait to read the next one.

Kisses

Sid
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From ANON - Random on June 14, 2010
Still waiting on the next chapter. I can understand a busy life, but the least you could do is give us an estimate on when it will come out!
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From mebsmebs on May 29, 2010
"I suppose that makes me evil. But it's a kind of evil that remembers being something else."

That line is just EPIC. I didn't think anyone could make Hikaru Gosunkugi look cool, but there it is. I salute you, good sir. Well done.
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From ANON - Anon on May 18, 2010
Just out of curiosity, how long will it be before you can get Chapter 24 together?
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From ANON - Anon on May 12, 2010
---Still waiting on the next chapter. Was kind of hoping it would be out faster.

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From ANON - iAmMelting on April 10, 2010
Thank you so much for continuing this story! I'm glad to see the Hiroshi/Daisuke elements have been added to the story, and the new twists with Ryouga are amazing. But you left us with such a cliffhanger!

'What' exactly is it that he has planned for Ranma for Christmas Eve which would be especially perturbing for Ranma? Is he going to make her dress in a ribbon and be a present? Is she going to have to kiss various people with the addition of mistle toe?

Or is it something non-Christmas related such as he's going to make her wear a slave collar or a maid uniform or some such demeaning thing? Or is he going to put on her body some symbol of his ownership such as a tattoo or engagement ring? Or will it be something behavior related such as making her sleep with him in the same futon or making her call him by a pet name or a name of dominance?

Also what are his plans for Akane? It seems clear that he no longer feels that she is as pure as the falling snow. So how will his new outlook affect his use of her in comparison to Ranma?

And what about Gos? It seems clear that he still plans to proceed with his plans for the taming of Ranma using Akane as a pawn.

I know you have a real life difficulties with your time so I will not plead for an immediate chapter, but I urge you to continue to carry this story on. Read reviews such as mine if you ever start to feel as if no one cares. Make sure that you don't lose your enthusiasm for this story, because your fans are like a bevy of addicts. Each of us are waiting anxiously for the time when we can get that next fix. And, while we go through the most painful withdrawals when we can't get one fast, we would rather be able to feel that high of another chapter release than to have to quit cold turkey and suffer such pains forever more. ;)
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From scifinut64 on April 09, 2010
great chapter, im on the edge of my seat waitting the the next one
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From ANON - thtiger on April 06, 2010
Another good chapter. I'm enjoying Hiroshi and Daisuke, and looks like Ranma and Akane are not going to be the only ones sore and humiliated. Ryouga is proving to be a good bad guy. But I have to wonder how Ranma is going to feel when he discovers that Ryouga's Perversion pressure points have been pushed, and some of them are still active. He knows first hand what that can do to a male's mind. And I wonder what the long term effect on Ryouga will be. Hard to believe that he'll simply go back to normal after all this time.

The same goes for Akane and Ranma. I think their deluding themselves if they think that life will go back to normal once they are cured. Akane is pretty much addicted to a level of sex that I don't think Ranma can give all by himself. And Ranma is heading that way 'herself. Going to be interesting to see where everything goes.
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From Imsadistic on April 06, 2010
Another fabulous chapter, this is my favourite story of all times.

Thanks so much for writing more and can't wait for the next one.

Sid
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From ANON - Pariah on April 06, 2010
Even when she shouts it out in a horny stupor, you're still not quite sure whether she's consciously put Ranma in that position or not. That ambiguity makes for the most realistic approach to Akane's ever-growing perversion.

It wouldn't be necessarily out of character at this point for her to consciously want to do those things to Ranma, but all the same it would sound rather OOC for her to come out and honestly admit such a thing. So rather than risk a literary juxtaposition that distracts from the erotic decor, you took the wiser "fantasy" route that Akane may or may not be consciously using to take advantage of Ranma. Either way she's made out to be delusional.

I don't get the feeling that you're really gonna let Ranma and Akane finally consummate their relationship as they intend. So I'm really interested to see that development.

And what of Ukyou? Will she make another appearance or have you genuinely lost track of her (not that it's a big deal)?

I imagine that if you're going to involve any comeuppance--and I'm sure you are--Ukyou would be the one to receive the brunt of it considering that her particular betrayal towards Ranma doesn't have a "pressure point" excuse to fall back on.

Great installment!
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From Scorpinac on April 05, 2010
And yay, more concensual sex, sorta... And I'm guessing that other thing he intends to make Ranma do is adjust his curse the same way Ranma's is? Well, at least we're kind of getting somewhere now. If they could just figure out what's really wrong with Ryoga, like say a brief regaining of control by the real him, perhaps. Well, until chapter 24, then. Laters.
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From Imsadistic on March 18, 2010
An excellent chapter as ever.

I love how evil Ryoga is turning out to be, I can't wait for the next one.

Yes you may be a little slow between chapters sometimes but what you post is worth the wait.

Oh well, keep up the wonderful work, you're the Lemon King, it even says so in my FF profile :)
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From ANON - Anon on March 09, 2010
In response to the last few emails, I honestly wouldn't be surprised if Ranma does it of her own free will at this point. Ryoga is his mistake, and he is doing this because Ranma couldn't tell Akane about the little porker while he was still sane. Odds are, Ranma will soon feel the need to be punished.

Either that, or he'll need to do it to earn Akane's forgiveness.
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From ANON - Pariah on March 09, 2010
Well, Akane's certainly acting like a professional tramp at this point. Her shame has all but evaporated. Hers was truly a seamless transition. Even with her acting so flagrantly promiscuous with Ranma, Hiroshi, and Daisuke, her outrageous behavior still felt within her character according to the rationalizations she's offered up of simply getting in practice time--I especially enjoy how you're not totally sure whether or not she's conscious of her own perversity throughout her ordering Ranma to act like a slut, and not to mention her domineering attitude towards Daisuke. Bravo for that.

And the best part is that she's unknowingly dragging Ranma down that same path with her. At this point however, I wonder if you're really going to allow Gos to reap the fruits of his labor or have it all snatched out from under him by Ryouga--who may or may not be cured int the future. Either way, I am rather interested to see how Akane will be able to talk Ranma into having sex with Hikaru willingly. I imagine that she'll have to distract her with some sapphic attention while Hikaru sneaks up on her, and Akane makes sure to calm Ranma while he gradually rides her down.

I don't personally mind either way as long as Ryouga still gets his piece like he did with Ranma and Akane. I'm sure you realize that I especially loved that bit where he told Akane that she couldn't compare to Ranma while he was plugging her. Even in the midst of her disgust, she felt jealousy at playing second fiddle and arousal for seeing Ranma getting fucked and subsequently reciprocating. That was just awesome.

And to wrap it all up in a nice tight bow, it was especially satisfying watching Ryouga kick Michio and co. around. I looked forward to the briefing he has prepared for Ranma and Akane. It probably wouldn't do to let them know that he's commandeered the photographs since that would remove their incentive to do as the other boys say. So I'm rather curious about that.

Anyway, great work on the last three chapters.
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