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Reviews for The Forbidden Kisses Of A Would Be God

By : osionide
  • From ANON - Lena on September 28, 2011
    Um...wow. This is hands down the best DN fic, with the best dialogue and the best portrayal of L I've ever set my eyes upon. Their personalities were dead on which made it seem like these scenes could have been apart of the actual manga or anime. Although, I'm not sure where it would have fit. We can only imagine, right? I absolutely adored the alternate ending. The violence, the kiss. I'm a sucker for drama. Well done. Seriously, best ever!
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  • From JubblesBubbles on December 13, 2010
    :3

    I adored the first attempt, just because it was so much believable they would suffer like that just to confirm a point (a cruel an unavoidable fact)

    But I loved the second chapter, the alternative ending, just because the racionalization, the dialogue, the pure impact of the words... “You mean to tell me that you like me, you enjoy my mind and find pleasure in my body, you’ll let me come inside you! But, you would find it distasteful to kiss me?”... were just too perfect!

    And the conclusion... my gods! A perfet ending
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  • From SailorAurora on June 23, 2009
    I quite like this alternate ending... :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2009
    ah, the well written-ness o this little piece has made me a happy person
    well done my dear, well done *applauds*

    I liked the way you wrote L very much.
    and the ending was so sad *sniffle*
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