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From ANON - Mac1960 on November 11, 2015
Throughly enjoyed the intriguing story. Looking forward to more chapters of the world you have created.
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From ANON - Steph on October 18, 2015
Oh oh oh oh Please Please Please do tell me that you are out there still considering continuing this story!
I absolutely adore it. And LOVED the never ending twists that you made in it! The last part was soooo unexpected! Did Jupiter knew about the secret mission of the agencie?
I have the feeling that she knew and that is why she sent Iason to meet Riki again to test their bond, even after the brainwashing.
Xoxo
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From ANON - maria on October 06, 2013
please continue this wonderful story here or on http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8872975/12/Do-You-Remember where are only 12 chap I reali want to know what happens after chap 24 (a reali clif-hanger) LOL
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From ANON - Lex Mortem on August 02, 2012
Do you have ANY intentions on continue with "Do you remember?"??? I just LOVED it!!!
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From ANON - Morphious on July 16, 2012
Wow, when you began this fanfiction, it was interesting, but needed a lot of polishing still... These last two chapters have been superb. You've come a long way from enthusiastic and bumbling to more in-character and refined. Keep up the great work & remember that while drama and angst can be good sometimes, they are only the spices to add flavor to the dish of sexual tension. Use them sparingly : D
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From ANON - Nishii on June 25, 2011
I keep waiting for an update, such a great story please continue soon! Your a truly great writer, and you have a very original take on this story, can't wait to see where it is all going!!!!
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From ANON - MidniteOni on March 14, 2011
Wah!! Oh my kami. this is a seriously good story! the plot is great and had me bouncing on the edge of my seat and just about pulling my hair out! What's going to happen now?! Is Iason going to ask Katze to investigate 'Rikki Black' on Amoi? gah! I wanna know!!! PLease update soooon!

Middie
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From LuvLotsaYaoi on March 08, 2011
I knew you'd update this eventually. I have immense faith in you so I never gave up hope XD. Anyway YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY Riki and Iason are about to do the nasty TeeHee. That is so awesome. I did have the urge to slap the Sit out of Iason when he treated Riki like dirt though; I'm glad his feelings was hurt when the sexy, sinuous, midnight sun eyed, ONYX body guard ignored him. Now here's gonna be the issue. Jupiter has erased Iason's memories of the ONYX, she mongrel napped and erased the ONYX's memories, she placed him on a planet the he should have never run into the BLONDIE on, and forbade all involved with the BLONDIE to ever mention the ONYX again. So given these things that the AI has done who do you think is gonna be more shocked to find out they are together (fate is a green-eyed BI). Now I'm just waiting for the RUBY mongrel to be contacted about finding out the identity of the ONYX. Then the lovers will be nearly reunited, hopefully Iason will do it right this time... If you're wondering why I keep calling Riki an ONYX is because I how you can see my hopes on what I mean by Iason doing it right. I HOPE he demands for Jupiter to make Riki an ONYX elite (she made Aki a platina) so Riki should be an ONYX so that Iason can take him as his mate and have him on equal footing as well, also I don't think Riki would completely come back to him under any other circumstances.

Anyhoo I loved the chappy HN and look forward to the next {*.^} Mikki
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From ANON - QueenPen on March 01, 2011
wow! you continued it!! i am so glad to see an update! so i figured i owed you a review. i absolutely love your work. the characters have real depth, I feel you have taken them above and beyond the original story line. Your plot is also very intricate and intriguing. While waiting for updates i have found myself going back and re-reading this story over and over. Your writing style is very enjoyable and your capacity for language and sensualism is probably the best I have ever seen. I can't wait to see Riki and Iason reunite and see how it works out this time.

Also as a side note, your blondie uke scene was HOT! The image of Katze rimming Raoul is now permanent brain candy. Waits impatiently for more!!
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From ANON - Yaoifangirl89@gmail.com on February 23, 2011
Where were u?!!!Here I thought u abandoned his story!Is the sex scene will b next?
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From ANON - missmotoko on February 20, 2011
Do you have any idea how happy it makes to see that you've updated "Do You Remember?"!?!?!? You have made my day. Regardless of being incomplete, this is one of my all time favorite AnK fanfictions. I hope this means you will continue to update on a regular basis again... pretty please?

You left us hanging just as you decided to put a major twist in the plot and give Riki a new identity as "Agent Black" after he supposedly died and just as Iason pleads with Jupiter to alter/erase his memories of Riki's existence...talk about a cliffhanger! Once again they cross paths without prior knowledge of each other, but still chemistry remains intense between them and the sparks of lust blaze, but then...(the sound of crickets chirping in the background)...nothing for over a year.

It's fabulous to have you back, a year+ long hiatus notwithstanding. Anticipating the next chapter, hope it's a juicy one.

-missmotoko

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From ANON - FantasyGirl222 on September 07, 2010
I really, REALLY, love this story so far. And for English to not be your native language, your grammer is DAMN good.^_~*
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From barrie18 on March 17, 2010
Well this chapter certainly opens up new dimensions to this story. But where do you go from here. For the first time Riki and Iason are together, and even though they are employer and employee, they are not master and servant/pet. They are now meeting on an equal stage, which gives this a whole new area to cover.

Problem 1: If they don't regain their memories, then this is just a short planet affair of what might have been and they go their separate ways when Iason returns to Amoi.

Problem 2: If they do remember, then old attitudes will probably resurface as well, resurrecting the old issues. Would Iason really be able to put that behind him and put an ex Pet on equal footing with him?

Problem 3: What game is she playing? Did she do this on purpose or is this just fate...

Problem 4. Katze.. . . I can't believe he is safe from Jupiter. . . does she want him to find Riki? She kept giving him 'strange' looks while feeding him information. . . as if to say, my hands are tied, go find out the truth. . .but why?? Iason and Riki know their is an attraction between them would Katze's interference bring the memory to the surface....was that implanted in their memory wipe.

Yes, my dear, you've created a load of problems, now please get to work and give us the solutions :)

Enjoyed greatly, hope the next chapter is soon :)

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From ANON - Misaki on March 17, 2010
That was hot!!You should have kept going!!(with oral sex thingy)(blush)I'am confused Riki did sound like he lost his memory,he didn't recognize Iason?Why did the police took his body for?Thanx for letting me know for the story!!(hugs)
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From ANON - Michelle on March 17, 2010
OH MY HELL!!!!!

Did Jupiter just inadvertently put Iason & Riki back together?????

The "Wiry Old Bitch" is gonna blow a gasket when she finds out.....

YAY! Raoul has grown a pair and he's supporting Katze in finding Riki and bringing him back to Iason.

WAA! Poor Kirie! Why did you loose your mind man? Tell me you aren't spacing out because you think Riki died.

I have to say now that I'm done talking to fictional characters, this chapter has helped to dry my tears only a little though. Its a bit upsetting knowing that my favorite lovers are so close and still so far. Riki, I don't see him getting his memory back so easily; but Iason is already feeling his return. Hespera, please don't tell me that during the trade conference something is going to happen toward Iason which will put Riki in serious danger, just so that Iason will move all of Amoi to save his lover. Also will Raoul & Katze be attending the trades as well and it they are, are they going to be the reason that something bad happens to our lovers?

Here I am a loyal reader *biting my nails in suspense* awaiting your next chapter.

Thanks again for the great reading {*o*}
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