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Reviews for Northern Star

By : osirisavenger
  • From aragdoll on September 08, 2009
    Your characters just seem very human is all. They're enjoyable to read. Dominic letting the chef's wife die rather than playing the hero or inexplicably being able to talk the man down was probably the selling point for me. You just don't see that in too many stories.
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  • From aragdoll on September 08, 2009
    I'd like to maintain that this made my reading list after the happenings of the third chapter.

    But to be honest I don't think I could go without adding it after the Immortal Emperor of Mankind said "canoodling".
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  • From on September 04, 2009
    Aw, we love you too, Ausare, we're just too nervous to say it! A few bookkeeping items:

    --Religion: From your description, it seems like Jirachism and Arceanism are parallels for Christianity and Judaism, respectively. The gospel according to Mesprit, ha. So Kanto is predominantly Jirachian, while the Sevii Islands are mostly Arcean? Should make for some good conflict.

    --The question that the answer to that first question is...why did humans leave at all?

    --Keep the voyeurism coming. You may be on a fairly well-worn road as far as the Pokemon involved, but if you can make it work, hey, more power to you. The writers are all but being asked to do a Gallade/female Trainer story in that thread on 151chan, so it doesn't seem like there'll be any shortage of Ralts family lemon anytime soon. (Hell, I might do that story.)

    --Where's that walk-on cameo of mine you mentioned? Man, I was looking forward to that. Professor Bayberry popping in or something, that'd make my day.

    So we're all eagerly awaiting Chapter 4, but don't burn yourself out trying to finish. That's no fun.
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  • From on August 29, 2009
    Wait, I gots a theory.

    Chapter 2 shows the planet humans are originally from. If this is a massive spoiler, feel free to delete it.

    As for my massive chapter-crankage, I don't honestly know. I was just born to write. There is a diatribe that goes along with this, but it's only available on request or audiobook.
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  • From ANON - Krizzfizz on August 27, 2009
    Okey, a great read. I was confused a little there, began to wonder it was the right chapter or some other story.
    For some odd reason I began to think about Oblivion
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  • From daveb on August 25, 2009
    Very promising. Nice to see someone who respects religous people.
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  • From on August 23, 2009
    Hmm...I am intrigued. Do go on.
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