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Reviews for Unusual

By : Agdistis
  • From ANON - Mb on September 24, 2009
    one i really am enjoying your story, i always like on where people use the lesser known pokegirls, i'm sorry to bother you with this but would it be possible to send me the link to the new pokegirl website when the old one went down i haven't been able to find the new one. thank you for your time and writing.
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  • From ANON - Soul_dier on September 20, 2009
    Hey, I absolutely love the story, and have enjoyed reading it, I really hope you keep going with it. ^ ^
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  • From maddogm12 on September 19, 2009
    *Nodding head and clapping* I must say, that I am impressed. Of all the fanfics I've read, this one truly sticks out for a few reasons:
    You've got impressive grammar! (There should be a medal or something for that.)
    You have a definitive hook with the story,
    And you have an interesting style of presentation. I find that when you describe something it takes very little for me to recreat the scene in my mind. Most stories force you to work to a greater degree to get such images, but you get your point across.

    I would be sorely disappointed if you stopped now.
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  • From Pokeprof on September 16, 2009
    You're earning some serious brownie points with me, using all these Pokegirls that would otherwise have not gotten much screen time from the PG group. As it is, I'm not too favorable of the Slime girls, simply because they're nearly identical to the original Slimes that inspired them. Curious on where you're going to take this, and anxiously waiting for your next chapter.
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  • From daveb on September 16, 2009
    HOT. MOAR.

    Anyway, request time. Anal scenes, Tentacles, Aine getting fucked, and lastly, Aine with human scenes.
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  • From Snidne on September 14, 2009
    Well well, didn't expect to see THIS story here of all places... I do so recall some time ago reading this story somewhere... It was excellent then, is excellent now. Though I suppose I'm not that great of a reviewer, it's good to see another PG author here...

    Keep up the good work, yes?
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  • From Pokeprof on September 14, 2009
    Looked you up and saw you there. Good to know that there was a hidden gem among us that was able to provide such an interesting story. As far as the Dryder, I'm must say two things. One, I congradulate you even more then before on using a Pokegirl that is rarely, if ever seen, at all, much less in a good light. As you are sure to know we have perhaps 3 or 4 tauric Spider girls and because of her realitive normalcy compaired to Widow and Dryder, I assumed Arachnae.

    As for the the story and this chapter in particular, I really enjoy just how smooth it seems. One thing that I'm constnatly struggling with in my stories is that it seems choppy and forced in some places and rushed in others. It could just be me being my own worst critic, but that's how I feel. You've also made quite the unusal pokegirl appealing and arousing, as both your main character and myself know!

    You've got yourself a fan now, so I'll be expecting much more from you, and while I could strive some guesses at what Iris and Clover are, I could very well be proving wrong again.

    A final note. As you may know, we have been revising quite a large number of Pokegirls to make their profiles flow better as well as provide information that is otherwise missing. Because of your story, I think Dryder herself could use a tad more fleshing out, if anthing from insperation from your story.
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  • From Pokeprof on September 14, 2009
    Don't recognize your user name, so I don't think you're from Pokegirl.org or the other sites I'm familar with. Regardless, I've got to say that this story is quite interesting to say the very least. Not just because of the character that you've introduce, but also by the detail in the story as well as the use of the Pokegirl Arachnae, one who doesn't see much fun in most Pokegirl stories.

    One thing I thought when first reading this was that the main character might be a daughter of a Dildoqueen, which would explain why she is the way she is. Of course, it could just be the way she was made as we all know that such people exist in our world (especially if you've been looking at the news lately). Regadless, this is a interesting tale that I'd like to see more of and I think so would the other members at some of the Pokegirl websites.
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