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By : Imsadistic
  • From Scorpinac on October 20, 2009
    Well, maybe a little. Hm, Hiroshi into S&M, never really seemed the type to me. A nice finish over all, and my kudos. So, next up, an Ukyo gets hitched tale? or perhaps more on Ranma and Akane? Kasumi finally netting Tofu, perhaps? Oh, well, whatever you like. Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on October 19, 2009
    Thank you for this chapter. I had just posted moments before that I was hoping that Chapter 13 wasn't gonna be the last. I wish more writers could update as quickly as you do. and your writing does not suffer in the very least for it too.
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  • From Animedevildog on October 19, 2009
    I hope Chapter 13 isn't the final chapter... -_-;
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  • From Scorpinac on October 17, 2009
    Well, I suppose that is one way to punish Kodachi, though not exactly what I would have expected. I do hope Hiroshi will ttake some time to actually get to know her, and let her get to know him after the official nuptials. And I'm thinking, due to a lack of a "The End", that there's going to be at least one more chapter to this? Until then. Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on October 16, 2009
    Ok, this was NOT what I expected... but I could not have asked for a better chapter. Thank you for your prompt posting of chapter 13. Eagerly awaiting chapter 14 now.
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  • From Scorpinac on October 16, 2009
    Actually, if you check one of my earlier reviews, you'll see I actually suggested Sasuke telling Yutaka about the placebos as he wasn't forbidden to do so, only from telling Tatewaki. Liked the wedding, and the wedding night, and is Nabiki pregnant with twins, or just admitting she intends to eventually have additional offspring in the future? Well, until chapter 13, then. Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on October 15, 2009
    That was another excellent chapter. it saddens me to see Soun acting the way that he is, though, Knowing what I do know of Japanese culture (having lived in Japan) it is understandable. Hopefully, he will see past the hurt pride and forgive.
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  • From Scorpinac on October 15, 2009
    Yes, well, hopefully you'll be kind and give us the rest of the scene at the beginning of the next chapter, though considering this is a Nabiki/Kuno fic I won't be surprised if you don't. And I see you took my little idea regarding Sasuke telling Kuno-kun about Kodachi's little plot. That, or you'd already intended to do that all along. Hehe... Well, until chapter 12, and I'm going to guess the finale or very near to it, then. Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on October 14, 2009
    Excellent chapter. I like how the elder Kuno has changed for the better. I also liked how Kasumi laid the law down when Soun said that Nabiki would not be able to stay after the baby arrives. As for what Sasuke was telling Takawaki about Kodachi and her scheming... I'm HIGHLY looking forward to THAT showdown!
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  • From Scorpinac on October 13, 2009
    Well, I didn't expect that, even Principal Kuno is evolving and pulling himself together! And it occurs to me that Kodachi only forbade Sasuke from telling Tatewaki, not the Principal, so her little plan may be about to blow up in her face! Hehhehheh... I eagerly look forward to chapter 11! Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on October 12, 2009
    Damn you1 I went from being incredibly pumped up (adding more power to your motorcucle does that) to having tears in my eyes from reading chapter 10. (such a powerful chapter)




    Thank you. *hugs*
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  • From Scorpinac on October 12, 2009
    Personally I think she probably should get the abortion, but that's just one person's opinion. Obviously you have a plan in mind, so I'll just leave you to it. That said, I like the somewhat odd friendship forming between Ranma and Tatewaki. Also, I don't think I ever really considered Kodachi this evil, half nuts, but not really evil. Oh, well. Until chapter 10, then. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Ashi Taiyono on October 11, 2009
    Congratulations, you have made me hate Kodachi even more than I already did. But that just means it's a good story, doesn't it? :D
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  • From Animedevildog on October 11, 2009
    Someone KILL(!) Kodachi for me... PLEASE!!!
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  • From Scorpinac on October 11, 2009
    I got to say I'm enjoying how you're evolving everyone here. Somehow I imagine Nabiki going to Tatewaki at school and telling him about the home test, and the two going off to a private clinic together for a more thorough one. I look forward to seeing what comes next, and wonder if this is in any way connected to your other fic, "Mousse's Revenge"? Til next chap., laters.
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