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Reviews for Birthday Surprise

By : GoddessKahori
  • From ANON - LadyNorth76 on January 03, 2013
    Please update soon. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - calicokitten on January 28, 2011
    Can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep going!
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  • From bonnybanshey on July 30, 2010
    oh come on I'm wound up I want to see what happens
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  • From ANON - AndoraT on June 21, 2010
    Hey... evil... how about you do post the next chapter? please? I liked the first one!
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  • From Blackwidina on December 20, 2009
    AUGH! THE DREADED AUTHOR'S PEROGATIVE!

    Seriously, how could you leave me hanging like that?!?

    *cough* On the review-y side of things, I find your writing style to be incredibly engaging. I was glued to my computer screen the whole time I was reading; I also hugely appreciate your correct use of grammar and punctuation. Such things can't be praised enough in fanfiction.

    All in all, I can't wait to see what the boys have been up to!!!

    Dina
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  • From ANON - Tiramisu on November 28, 2009
    Please write more!! Thank you so much!!
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  • From BeefJerkyYo on October 17, 2009
    It's a good start. I hope you can deliver on the next chapter being 2 times as long and was it 10 times as awesome? But all jokes aside, you did have a few spelling errors, (I don't have the right to say that because of my story are filled with them.) Also you should try using dialog from the anime or manga. Your characters act like themselves, but don;t sound like themselves. Try looking for their speech patterns. Haruhi's are obvious but some of the others won't be so easy.

    I hope you find that useful and I hope that I wasn't too harsh. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Pixies on October 07, 2009
    oooh I cant wait to read more! This is interesting!!!
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