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Reviews for Pokegirl Yellow

By : WolfBleed
  • From kuramasgirl on November 25, 2010
    cool story so far. cant wait to read more. but make the chaps longer, theyr way 2 short. please update soon.
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  • From daveb on October 30, 2009
    ADD SEX. Otherwise good, but your chapters are too short
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  • From Fortree on October 29, 2009
    Generally, if you're going to do a PokeGirl story, you add gratuitous sex scenes, not skip them over. It's okay/better to have the scenes shaky or awkward as both you and the character gain experience with doing this.
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  • From Snidne on October 27, 2009
    Forgot this...

    snidne@yahoo.com

    Give me a call.

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  • From Snidne on October 27, 2009
    Well, for starters... it certainly LOOKS like a good start, but it lacks... something. I mean, besides the lack of sex scenes I mean. Not sure if your one of the group (If you are, I may have missed that... heh...)but...

    Give me a call, yes? I'll await your reponse...

    Signed,
    Snidne. President of Angelic Evil Inc.


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