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Reviews for Bloody Business

By : antilogicgirl
  • From jadedust on August 16, 2013
    I miss this story! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 29, 2012
    So hot. I love the development of the story, yet I fear that the scoundrel Henry will try something again. Hmmm. Looking forward to reading more of this story.
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  • From ANON - freak-joy-spastic on January 20, 2012
    Hot and sweet; just the way I like it. Ciel is the cutest when he's writhing in passion. I look forward to the next chapter. Much love and anticipation. ~bye bye~
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  • From ANON - Saphir on November 10, 2011
    Oh my.... This story is incredible. I really hope you plan to continue this. Among kuroshitsuji fanfiction, it hits all the marks others miss... Crazy fucking good sex, and more notably characterization. It displays your considerable skill.
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  • From ANON - Andi on July 19, 2011
    I think I'm going to have a heart attack. The most recent chapter was so wonderful!! Well, aside from that worm, Henry Newlove trying to take what belongs to Sebastian. But I'm glad Sebastian arrived in time, before anything too terrible could happen. I loved that after rescuing him from Newlove Sebastian comforted, re-claimed, and relieved the sexual frustration Ciel felt all in one go. I find Sebastian's posessive nature in this fic absolutely delightful.

    I very much like the plot, the darkness and mystery of the situation all seem like a scenario that could have very well come from the mind of Yana Toboso herself. And the way you portray Sebastian and Ciel is wonderfully done! In reading some other fics I've had to stop reading because Ciel and Sebastian become so out of character that I can't stand it. It's refreshing to read a fic in which they are true to character.

    I noticed you haven't updated in a while, and I hope that doesn't mean you've abandoned this fic. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Wagama Hime on July 04, 2011
    Great story! It's so nice when you can find a really well written, interesting, and believable Kuro fic. It's the perfect balance of smut (plus points! lol) and intriguing plot. I'm really excited for what will come next. Additionally, it's great that you based your story on this whole Cleveland street thing. It really kept my interest. I find this Ciel to be extremely cute and this Sebastian to be quite endearing. Can't wait to see what you have in store! :D
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  • From daneandnori on July 03, 2011
    yes the wait was worth it. please do keep working at this, it's lovely.
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  • From MelissaO44 on May 18, 2011
    It's very good, but it is mostly a PWP. What happened to the original mystery? There is very little conflict now. Ciel feels no turmoil, it seems to me.Mood and tone mustn't be neglected. Is Newlove really supposed to be the main villain here? The story needs some more drama, IMHO. I'll be very grateful to read more of it, regardless of whether or not my suggestions are taken seriously.

    TY (=
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  • From MelissaO44 on May 18, 2011
    This fic is so exciting, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Off I go!
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  • From MelissaO44 on May 17, 2011
    WOW! That was great! I hope this is a long story! =D
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  • From MelissaO44 on May 17, 2011
    Oh, this is getting so good! Thx
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  • From ANON - Jenmoon1 on April 27, 2011
    good story one miner point though Ciel was raped so he knows what goes on in the bedroom also a`question is it complete thanks for writing it
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  • From ANON - Jenmoon1 on April 27, 2011
    good story one miner point though Ciel was raped so he knows what goes on in the bedroom also a`question is it complete thanks for writing it
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  • From jadedust on February 02, 2011
    Argh! I wrote an entire review and it got swallowed up somehow! Anyway, I think I said that I am amused by whiny!Ciel and adore manipulative, seductive, slightly vulnerable Sebastian. And I love how Ciel tries to be all proper but turns into a wanton mess (who wouldn't?) at the drop of a hat, lol. Newlove was all kinds of gross, and I'm sure it's not over as far as revenge and Sebastian are concerned. I hope it's violent. ;) It was heart-stopping when Ciel admitted what he wanted and Sebastian talked him through everything (and wouldn't "take him" in front of Newlove--rightly so). I don't mind the delay of them actually screwing; the build-up can be just as delicious and pays off later. ;D
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  • From ANON - MistressDrucilla on January 26, 2011
    Oh. My. Gods.

    BRILLIANT!
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