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Reviews for Captured!

By : Imsadistic
  • From Animedevildog on January 25, 2010
    To The Major;
    I do not see where this story has a simplistic plot to it. Nor do I see how this is in any way inferior to any of her other writings. Maybe it's because you see them reacting to a situation that the members of the Ranmaverse have never been seen in before, and you prefer to read stories that follow the canon of the anime/manga a little more closely. Please remember, this is the product of someone with a wonderful imagination, and the rare gift to put that imagination into words.

    To Sid:
    Thank you for another fine chapter. I especially like how you had it as Ryoga who figured out how to find the clue in Ms. Sato's scribblings. Not many would have thought of that. Also, I'm surprised that Soun has not taking up smoking again. In a particular episode, he is seen smoking after finding out about "another" engagement arranged by his friend Genma. (if I emembered correctly, they were Marlboro Reds, I shall have to look it up)

    I did notice that you appearently are missing a line or two from the opening of the chapter. Do you copy and paste your chapters like I do?

    To Scorpinac:
    I suspect that you may be right, though we shall have to wait to see what Sid has in store for us loyal readers.
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  • From ANON - The Major on January 24, 2010
    Simplistic plot. Descriptions of the capture and later fights simply not credible for the Ranmaverse.

    Why is this story so vastly inferior to earlier efforts?

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  • From Scorpinac on January 23, 2010
    Oh, dear, poor Mousse and Akane, it's not looking good for them, is it? I do hope they're saved or escape before the baby's born, I don't think either of them will be happy to be separated from it. And I'm definitely seeing blood being shed from these guys, if not by Akane and Mousse, then by Ranma, Ryoga, Kuno, and possibly even Shampoo and Ukyo. Well, until chapter 4, then. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on January 22, 2010
    Whoa, what an opening! I wouldn't have expected such a tale from you, and yet here we are. And I eagerly look forward to more, not so much for the smut, as I'm thinking it won't be too long before Mousse and Akane break down, ar ot least bend a little, and do it, but to see what it takes for them to either escape or be rescued! And I'm thinking there may be a lot of bloodshed before the tale is done, and I don't just mean hymenal. Well, until chapter 3, then. Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on January 21, 2010
    Damn... It appears that Akane and Mousse are in serious shit now. so far, it's coming along excellent. Keep up the good work! Untill Chapter Three then. ^_^
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  • From Animedevildog on January 20, 2010
    Very good so far. This is a different spin on akane and Mousse as well. I am very interested in seeing how it works out from here.
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