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Reviews for Forever Caged

By : Savagehunger47
  • From ANON - makota on August 17, 2010
    i agree with 'shishi'. I think an ainokusabi male pregnancy fanfiction by you would be a nice addition to the site. Your past works seem
    to have enough potential for it, so i believe you should have a go at it.
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  • From ANON - shishi on August 11, 2010
    so one twin makes weapons and such, the other knows escape paths. Violet can escape from any where. ok, but what about Riki and Guy? what were their special abilities. OMG. new thought. Bison had guy, riki, luke, sid, noriss, aaaand killie. guy luke and riki are gone, if ur keeping up the original killie cant really be in Bison any more so it's just noriss and sid? sad, but the gang was disbanned i guess. good chapter, seems the knowledge is circulating finally, lol.
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  • From Sheleeta on August 11, 2010
    And the story gets deeper and more interesting. I'm still wondering how they are going to take care of Lily out in space. But I trust you that all will be revealed. I love what Niko did to Gabriel, that was priceless. Can't beat it. Too bad it wasn't on his head. Looking forward to the next installment.
    -Sheleeta
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  • From ANON - Shishi on August 05, 2010
    oh poor riki. Jupiter you skank! all he wanted was to hear his voice... ITS SO SAD!! Just like a Disney movie. It makes you cry, laugh, get angry, and happy at all the right moments. I love how the story line is your own while keeping you keep the original make up of the actually story. I think this is a perfect example of a fanfiction. You didnt rewrite the story just... gave it a fan's touch. Simply wonderful! You were late but for this chapter... I'm just so happy. You made my day... or night since its like 330am. Omg, i loved this chapter. I have no problems with long chapters, their great. But now how is Riki suppose to find out about himself, Jade Lilly and Katze. My be the old women is still alive!? Riki is such a softy. Now has another kid on board. He should totally adopt her and give Jade a sister. Awwwwwwwwwwwww. how will explain that to Iason. lol. All rambling aside, it was an A+ chapter. cant wait for the next one.
    P.S.
    you should write a mpreg ai no kusabi. awessssssssssssssssome. lol
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  • From Sheleeta on August 05, 2010
    Poor Riki... that ending almost made me cry. Jupiter is such an evil *****. But we all knew that. I really felt Riki's emotion in that chapter, and of course Jupiter is playing him like a musical instrument. Looking forward to the next installment.
    -Sheleeta
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  • From Sheleeta on July 28, 2010
    Wow. I'm still loving it. But Riki is going to totally burn himself out if he's not careful. And how is he going to handle the Jade being his son thing and the fact that Lilly needs sex on a regular basis... you just keep me guessing. Looking forward to next installment, as always.
    -Sheleeta
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  • From ANON - ShiShi on July 27, 2010
    Riki, you are the father! yes, lame, I knnow. LOL i cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Sheleeta on July 19, 2010
    Oh my goodness... things just keep getting better and better, and the s*** that Riki and his group are getting in is getting deeper and deeper. I'm even more curious and look forward to the next update... and that's going to be hard. The tale you are weaving is just getting more beautiful and intricate. -Sheleeta
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  • From ANON - shishi on July 19, 2010
    ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Jupiter is just mean. Interesting cchapter. Lets talk about updates. you should really update like, sundays and wednesdays. it would be awesome. hm. but i dont want you to rush, and i dont like being pushy, hmmmmmmmmmmm. but i do like this story and it kills me to wait a week. what to do. what to do... idk but thanks any who. Think about it though! im happy that this chapter was long. Wonderful
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  • From ANON - shishi on July 13, 2010
    i know iknow i left my comment already but i have a question. how old is riki when he and his "team" run away in this fic?
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  • From Sheleeta on July 11, 2010
    The disk! And what is Gabriel's thing with Niko. Does he desire him or something. That was another very good chapter. -Sheleeta
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  • From ANON - shishi on July 11, 2010
    lol. THAT was unexpected! i hope the girls dont work our little group of cross-dressers too hard. This chapter was very comical. i hope the next one is just as good.
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  • From ANON - cricri on July 07, 2010
    Sooo cool! I just love the story from the beginning, especially this escape part,I can't even breath,well, not literally....update soon please
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  • From Sheleeta on July 07, 2010
    Oh gods, that was a nail biting chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and the side story was awesome as well. I'm on the edge of my seat; I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter, as always. -Sheleeta
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  • From ANON - shishi on July 06, 2010
    OOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGg. wonderful! i really really really enjoyed this chapter. it was freakin' awesome!! Nanomites, irobot. It was so cool. poor katze, not strong enough yet.ok. so this process happens every 25 years. is that only for "half" breeds like katze or does riki (being a pure bred) have to wait 25 years too? i know iason is ticked off and his elite buddies are gonna be maaaaaaaad. and jade's master is gonna be like "where is my pet!?" Great work. If evveryone updated their fictions once a week, and were this long... my life would be perfect! i cant wait for your next chapter. i'm shaking with anticipation.
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