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By : Savagehunger47

From LuvLotsaYaoi on April 12, 2010
Oh my what a turn of events. I never thought that Lilly is also "Charmed". Is he and Jade both related or were they bred with this "ability"? Now I am starting to question if Jade is the third or if it is Lilly. I know my question may be confusing to other readers, but my reasoning is the fact that both Katze & Riki are immune to Jade and Lilly is as well. Also it appears the Lilly shares this "Shading" ability making my earlier review stating that (Katze is the Brain, Riki is the Brawn, & Jade is the controller) now that I can see that only these three can not be controlled.

My goodness SH47, if you were determined to throw me through a loop and show that you still had some secrets to tease me with you have certainly done that. Congrats I doesn't happen often :)

I am most certainly anxiously awaiting your next chapter.

Until next time {^.^}

Also to find out more about those 2 men they are in "Aristian Holiday", "Echoes in Time", and "The Lost". They are right here on this site by the author "UntamedLady" and they are also HIGHLY rebellious to Jupiter.
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From ANON - Passing reader on April 09, 2010
HI

Im not one to review. Never know what to say and i normally like to read reviews before reading a fic and i love you story so far but i'm confused on something someone said. who is omaki and hiehu? i reread the story and didnt see those char in there.

thank you
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From LuvLotsaYaoi on April 09, 2010
Okay, I didn't think that a chapter all about sex could be so damn funny. Poor Katze, I am going to personally send him a tushy donut (^.^) Now Raoul and Iason are EXACTLY alike. Hell even Raoul was in a good mood (unbelievable). As always Iason can't get enough, its a wonder Riki can walk at all. And now both furniture from the households can share "Blondie ravaging Mongrel stories".

Why is Riki so into this other pet (he almost seems like a stalker) and who did Guy kill for and arm like Heiku's? I assume its going to be the chapter where the 3 come face to face at the saloon. And I am in no way looking forward to what is going to happen to Katze in the Med facility. I absolutely love this story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Until next time, your loyal reader, MS

{*.*}
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From LuvLotsaYaoi on April 07, 2010
Yay! I'm so excited that they finally did it *doing the happy dance*! Although Raoul needs to take a chill pill, doesn't he know he won't get anything from Katze by trying to dominate him *sighs in exasperation*. Did Raoul learn nothing from Iason's errors for heavens sake I can't take another 5 YEAR love fight *tears running down my face in frustration*. I really thought Raoul was smart, he knew that Iason owned Katze first, he knows Katze works in the black market, he also know that Katze is doing "research" for the Blondie leader, so why did he never think that Katze may NOT be able to say certain things over an open line without some form of code. We both know that Raoul all but stalked poor Katze for months if not years, so obviously he would have seen a potential lover *ranting with a giant angry symbol on my forehead*. Sometimes these Blondies really make me made, I can't wait you you to write Katze putting Raoul's uptight Blondie ass in his place. It is killing me to see how he responds to the reprimand he's about to get for his total misinterpretation of Katze's phone call, better yet him just listening in on the conversation in the first place.

Now on to pressing matters. Is Jupiter going to have false lists of tests sent to Raoul and why is so important for her to find these 3 mongrels? Yes, I already guessed that the other pet is also from the Slums of Ceres too. I just haven't figured out how he came to be a Tanagura Pet only because I don't know the name of his master. If Omaki or Hieku is his master then it answers a lot, but some other Blondie Elite is then you have actually managed to stump me.

Also how is Katze suppose to return to the Black Market after Jupiter starts her tests don't they all make the test subject sick? I am getting a bit concerned for the three and will Katze be able to discover what is happening to Riki is also going to happen to him before it does happen *biting nails in hopeful suspense*.

I look forward to your next chapter, until next time *I'll be pulling my hair out strand by strand*

{^_^}
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From LuvLotsaYaoi on April 06, 2010
YAY Katze! Tell those psycho doctors what they can do with those needles! Now you have to save Riki from the doctors as well as himself man. Also before you tell Riki where Guy is how about have the bastards legs chopped off first, you know just because.

Hey SH47, is Raoul about to break Katze into the feel of a Blondie? I already know that he just scared the crap out of him, mine-as-well show him some of his true domineering side. Also what happened to that odd pet, I kinda like him with his Bi-Polar voice (giggles) and how will Katze react to this other pet? Now that I think about it, he just may be the third of the special 3. Katze being the brain, Riki as the muscle, and him as the controller; these three together is going to rock the Blondie's world.

See you again on the other side of "Forever Caged". {*.*}
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From Kalicia21 on March 30, 2010
Im loving this story and i cant wait to find out the relationship between Katze and Raoul! Your story is wonderful and well written and i love how the chapters are not short. Keep up the great work!!!
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From Sheleeta on March 29, 2010
I love Katze's reaction "this can't be good." That was priceless. I am curious about that pet though, he seems to be an intriguing character, and poor Riki. Iason is such a sadist sometimes. Looking forward to more of your installments.
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From ANON - Talltree-san on March 29, 2010
I really like this story so far. I look forward to reading chappie 5 :)!
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From LuvLotsaYaoi on March 28, 2010
I am so happy that Guy is not #3, thank you for clearing that up for me (BTW I have no idea why my actually name showed up and not my AFF.net name on the last review).

This chapter was great, I am so glad that Iason reacted the way he did about sick Riki, although I feel a little sorry for Cal. I can't wait to see what he has up his sleeve so that he can find out what is REALLY going on with these "so called" physicals {^.^}

As far as Riki and his agenda with Guy...(Sighs in frustration with Riki's obsession)...doesn't he know that Iason would sooner cut off Riki's legs than let him contemplate going after him again...(Ugh Riki is draining the life out of me, he's a pain every time Iason is nice).

Now on to more pressing issues. Who is this pet with split-personality voices? OMG, I almost died laughing reading Riki's response to his voices. And does this pet REALLY think he can intimidate Sexy Ass Riki the Dark...HA that's priceless...and does he really think that his other pet friend could really help him...HEE HEE HAA HAA Oh Christ I'm dying here, Ouch pains from laughing so hard. [Takes a deep breath in and lets it out] I'm ready to continue, the possessive pet in the background, is he "special" also, anyway I look forward to your next chapter.

{*.*}
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From SirynsMagick on March 25, 2010
This is a very good story. Its well organised and the chapters are long and interesting. It left me wanting more when I got to the last line. I wonder who is the new subject and if what ever is in Riki has been or will be passed onto Iason? Are those scientists that run the secret lab Elites or aboriginals to Amoi? and Poor Katze...

Normally I don't care for stories where Jupiter had more human characteristics and emotions but I honestly think it goes well with this story line. This is really good in spite of the things I usually don't like being in it. You made them fit and make them work well together.

Thank you, and keep up the good work!
Ganbatte!!

Ryn
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From ANON - Michelle on March 23, 2010
I must say I have read all three chapters and as a avid "Ai No Kusabi" lover, this is totally delicious so far. I already know that Jupiter is 1 of the "mysterious" talking people, but I am really having a hard time figuring out who the 2nd person is. I love the fact that she gave Raoul Katze because she is such a Bitch usually and this in turn gives her a better side that she just doesn't have anywhere else. I've gathered that Riki & Katze are both "Special", but for heavens sake please don't say that the third 1 is Guy (I would die a long painful death, he almost killed my babies ). Okay I'm composed, I really love your version of my favorite Yaoi couple and I look forward to the next chapter.
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From Sheleeta on March 23, 2010
You have definitely captured my interest. I'm looking forward to seeing how your little story unfolds. And I like how you reference the other castes of the elite, too many stories ignore them. In my RP with a friend of mine, we have everything from the Blondies and Plantina's to the Sapphire's and Onyx's and those in between. Thank you for realizing there are more than blondies, furniture and mongrels.
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From ANON - fan on March 22, 2010
im hooked, i cant wait for the next chap ^_^
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From ANON - yaoifangirl89@gmail.com on March 19, 2010
Who was talking to each other?I still don't get it why was the reason that Riki was a pet?But gooooooooooooood though!!
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