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By : Savagehunger47

From ANON - Akirah on January 29, 2012
OK, I must say it: I'm completely hooked on you fanfiction. It has probably been a year since I started following it, and I have loved every moment of it. The character's portrayals are practically perfect, the story arcs incredibly interesting and I have found, to my own surprise, that I even like a lot your OC's. I can't wait to read the next chapters :D . With that said, I just have a "complain": the relationships themselves. It's not that I don't like them because I actually love them very much, but it's just that I can't stand how the Blondies treat the boys. I know that it's perfectly in character, but even Iason is still controlling every movement of Riki, and the others have basically enslaved the rest of them and force them to do what they want. I know this is comes from the original story, but I thought that with your fic you would develop the characters towards more equal and healthy relationships. So, maybe it's not exactly a complain but a question, I just want to know if the Blondies will start treating the boys like people and not like objects (Because, as much as I love manga, the "bastard boyfriend" trope really gets on my nerves: NO MEANS NO YOU BLOND BASTARDS!!>
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From ANON - Kay on January 29, 2012
Hehe, Raoul still got the beef with Gabriel for stealing his furniture? Heh, that prideful blondie. When he's gonna admit that he treated Niko almost like a son instead of servant?

Then there's Orphe and whatever little affection he had for Fidget in his eyes, for a moment there. Is it because Fidget helped him to bed Violet? Sometimes I shudder at the thought of being Fidget's target practice of his witty remarks and pranks. Seriously, I'd start losing my composure and bicker with him all day too, just so I could make my point across.

Thanks for the update ^^.
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From ANON - Kay on January 17, 2012
Hell yeah, shout out to the remake! *Note the date on sticky*

Age is not really an issue for the four pets (Riki, Katze, Lily & Jade), but it is for the three other mongrels. Could Riki's influence somehow reach to the point of slowing their ageing process? Wonder if Jupiter already has a plan about this matter... ^^

Heh, another sexually frustrated blondie to the list. ^^ Go Aisha!
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From ANON - Kay on January 10, 2012
�God�s call�n ya, Orphe. Maybe he heard my prayers and has come to set me free.�

Haha I really love how you manage to conjure such a situation where catchy retort will get back to the other speaker, especially the banter between V and Fidget. Like Fidget said, "You suck, V" and V replied, "With skill, *followed by something like his fan mail and calls for his talented tongue and mouth, lols*" Heck once someone I know said that I suck, and I unthinkingly answered "With skill". We were both surprised, then we just laughed it off and she said "Damn, that was really cool." See how much FC influenced me subconsciously? ^^ *Too bad she's not into yaoi...*

Back to the topic, did Orphe just make Iason wait for him? Haha, I bet Iason's gonna get irritated even though he might have guessed what they had been doing when he's calling. ^^

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From ANON - Queen Pen on January 10, 2012
Thanks for the update!!! Love the direction you are taking, waiting anxiously for more!
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From ANON - Kay on December 07, 2011
I've reviewed in your lj, but I review again here since I feel like you deserve more ^^. I think a lot of people read your story, but maybe all they can think is how awesome the fic is. Therefore, they read everything and forgot to leave a review for the author because their head was still reeling from epic yaoi bliss plus exciting adventures crafted in your AnK ficworld. It happened to me previously.

Ranting aside, I like how Riki showing his protective instinct toward Jade, or at least trying to act fatherly. A little interesting since we know that the concept of parents are very strange in Amoi... Well good luck Jade trying to get Gideon's attention that way. ^^

And Iason got another long hours of field day with Riki. That damn blondie. Have some mercy on Riki!

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From ANON - Kay on December 01, 2011
Oh sweet, you really update! I was so excited to read this chappy that somehow I got stuck reading the first two paragraphs for a minute...

And I sooo loved Riki's and Iason's moment together, that was freaking hawt! Too bad it was a kinda short chapter, coz it often leave me hanging wanting to read more. Haha I wonder if Lily and Jade knew about Riki and his Blondie's activity in the other room. Riki's screams were telling enough lol. By the way, did he betray Rio's name to Iason?^^ Bet Iason would present his ass to Jared later, after he's done interrogating that guy for information.

So there are at least two different people who want Riki. One to kill him, one to kidnap him... Kirin aside, hope you'll reveal the other identities soon enough.

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From UchihaRiddle on November 04, 2011
OMFG!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your story is AMAZING!!!!! I've read it like 5 times over and I'm still in love with it, PLEASE update soon, I can't wait to see what you think up next. Oh and by the way, LOVE the writing style.
~Ta
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From ANON - Kay on October 17, 2011
Yay, an update! Thank you very much! ^^

So it was the living mask after all. It seemed that I let my imagination run too wild in my previous review. Lols. Do I smell some Jared x Rio in the future? Don't ever grab an attention of a blondie, Rio, lest you get more than you can chew. Though I really don't mind you getting screwed for that, hahaha. *enters some perverted thoughts*

And now he could change his hair color willingly too, after being in contact with Riki. Interesting, indeed. I wondered whether Iason had listened to their phone conversation the entire time. Damn, promise me that you'd write the hottest, angstiest, baddast and sexiest Iason's field day with Riki in the next chapter, alright? ^^
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From ANON - Queen Pen on October 15, 2011
Just re-read this from the beginning, I have to say the first few chapters are still my favorite of all time! I'm not always a fan of OC stories, but you do it very very well! But that first chapter, especially how it ties back to the ending of the series, well it is just fantastic! Whenever, I rewatch AnK I will now forevermore pretend this is how it truly ended!

Glad to see such an active writer in this category, I hope you return to this story soon! Thanks so much for all the work and effort you have put into this so far!!
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From ANON - Kay on September 18, 2011
Thank you for updating. ^^

How old is Rio anyway? I like Rio, I mean he's cool in sort of crazy, reckless way. And *cutely* annoying. Though I wonder what is his purpose of being there. Is he the other assassin hired to kidnap Riki and kill Iason or does he have his own agenda? He's unique, making me think at one point whether he could be one of the ancient races from another planet. He looked like he'd been genetically enhanced too. Not to mention his interest in Riki... and the revelation that he could be Jade's ex-master.

And talking about Riki - that sexy little beast, Iason's soo gonna have a field day 'interrogating' him at home. ^^ Lols.

Jerico... I don't know whether to hate him or pity him. He's already 'infected' in a way, his obsession of Jade would be his doom. And whatever he's been planning will surely backfire on him later, with Riki against him. Since whatever involves Riki involves Iason, and Jade's Gideon, I'd consider his Elite ass got fried in the future. On another thought, is it safe with Jerico knowing that Jade is Riki's son?

Damn, you have so many mysterious things plotted and leave me hanging wanting to know more. And the fact that I'd have to wait for a while before the next update is poor torture. You meanie. ^^

Well, will Jade get his lovely little bottom screwed by Gideon as the punishment for disobeying his blondie? ^^

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From ANON - Queen Pen on September 17, 2011
Finally got caught back up with this story!! Glad to hear of your personal success with writing! While I always look forward to new chapter, I can't help but be happy for you.

I have to say you have renewed my love with AnK, and your OC are entertaining as well. Now if only you would write a little pet scene between Lilly and Riki...drools over thought...
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From lucmaria on September 16, 2011
i loveeeee....your updated.....
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From ANON - Kay on September 06, 2011
Yay, an update!^^

I notice a few things in this chapter... Damn, is that Chaz the same Chaz Riki beat the crap out of in some deserted planet V dubbed as Hell? That was after Riki's changes in appearance, and I remember they said that that place is much worse than Ceres. Furthermore, when you mention about how Riadson's eyes color change, that reminds me of this Rio guy. Are they even the same person, or could they be related to each other? Now that I think back, that planet is used as training grounds for mercenaries... and mercenaries can always be hired as assassins. Wow.

Finally, a few developments between Gideon and Jade. Can't wait to see them consummate their bonds and give Gideon *that* new exclusive club membership. ^^ Hahaha.

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From Sparrowhawk on September 06, 2011
Oh, totally forgot, thanks for telling me about your LJ page and the side stories you have there. I'll definitely go look them up! (:
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