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By : Savagehunger47

From Sparrowhawk on September 06, 2011
Cuuuuuute!! I love the part between Jade and Gideon and how Jade's getting frustrated rather than fearful when Gideon touches him. Let's see if he really does go ask "daddy" how to seduce his blondie, lol. Can't wait! I was so excited there was a new chapter out today. You're updates always lift my spirits and make me laugh and think about what might happen next. Speaking of which ... what is that assassin planning to do? Who is the other assassin Kirin hired?? Sounds like Iason's going to have some more trouble coming his way. Better be prepared! Who's the dude with the changing eyes? Is he the same guy on that planet where Riki and gang fled to where they were always competing? Can't remember what the planet was called, have to go back and look, but anyway. What does he want? Is he after Riki, too?? "Unhealthy" if Iason becomes aware of "Mr. Riadson's" interest in his pet. Haha, I think that's an understatement. Aaaah, I'm so bummed that you'll be disappearing again! I was so hoping to get another update really soon. But I ... suppose ... I'll have to forgive you. *Sigh* Just kidding, lol, congratulations on getting your book accepted for publishing!! I'm trying to get one of mine published, too, actually, so I kinda know how that is. Good luck, and I hope to see another chapter out soon, regardless! *Squeal!* I adore Jade and Gideon, just so you know! I also adore the twins and their blondies and V and his blondie and Lily and his blondie, and let's not forget Riki and Iason! I just love all your characters and all of your book. (Didn't mean for that to sound so um ... what's the word I'm looking for? Sappy? Insanely envious? Ah! Like a crazy fan girl. That's what it is.) Haha, see ya!
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From Sparrowhawk on August 16, 2011
Hehehe, go Iason, you tell Jupiter! So who is that "Latzen man" Katze is talking about?? Hmm, interesting, interesting. Awesome steamy scene between him and Raoul. Steaming up my computer screen, lol. The chase scene was great! And Riki's humor even when he was caught, haha. "You want me to keep my hands up or flash you so you'll see I'm not carrying a weapon?" Epic. Oh no! The people over in Ceres were watching, poor Riki. That must've been a bit of a shock. Ooooh, what is Sky going to do?? I am so, so, so looking forward to that chapter between Sky and Aisha now that Sky's facade is blown. Whew, I don't think they're going to be getting a vacation any time soon, huh? Maybe when everything wraps up, hmm? Loved it, as usual, and I'm definitely looking forward to the next!!!
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From alexxgalaxy on August 15, 2011
An update, finally!!!

I'm relieved that Rike was back with Iason. I'm sorry for his loss of freedom but it worried me that he's away from Iason being subject to any kinds of potential harms.

Hehe, love that Katze still slacked. It's not something we could see every chapter, not once in a while or even not ever again. The redhead beauty was such as a workaholic and I always felt kind of bad for Raoul.

It sucks that we will have to wait a few weeks before another updater is up but I hope you enjoy your break. LOL
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From ANON - Kay on August 15, 2011
Yay, an update! Seriously, I checked every few days to see if the next chapter came out or not since the last one and today you just made my day. ^^ Thank you.

I can't wait to see the time everyone got a turn being bent over, hahaha. Sky gives me the creeps sometimes, wonder how Aisha would deal with him. And I'd like to know what happens between Gideon and Jade. Kinda miss Lily too.

Poor Riki. He had to get back sooner than he'd have expected, but if the troubles didn't follow him around, he'd cause them himself, so I guess that can't be help. And now that he has become a target, Iason might lock him at home for a long time. Lol. How he'd investigate what Norris had told him?

Really miss them in action, especially Riki's rebellious character. With all this development, I can't wait for the next chapters, but I hope you'd get the free time sooner. ^^

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From Nishi on August 15, 2011
Love it, you keep me waiting for more. Thanks for the great story
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From missanime4eva on July 23, 2011
hey there

I have been reading your story since the very beginning and i love every chanpter. I am currently writing a Ai no Kusabi fic on FANFICION. NET and a comment someone posted made me become aware of a little mistake on my part. And plase believe me I say I had no idea I was doing it. Apparently one of the Blondies, Mikhale Train is one of your characters, and is not from the book or the anime. I used him in my story without any knowledge of this so I am so sorry. If you don't want me to use him, I understand and will rewrite my story but if you let me continue, I will defiently give you credit for the character. Hope you arn't mad. I honestly had no idea.

please reply as soon as you can.
Lozzypoo
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From Sparrowhawk on July 22, 2011
Wonderful! V finally got was coming to him. Very hot!! So ... did Iason let Riki go out because he was going to be talking to a potentially dangerous Jupiter? He's finally confronting her! Woo! Can't wait to read what happens next! Please update again soon (: (:
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From ANON - Kay on July 21, 2011
Wow I'm so happy you update Forever Caged! And got a yummy scene between Oprhe and V too! All hail the cherry popping hour!^^

Is I'm not mistaken, was that Fidget who sold him out to Orphe? He had literally handed Violet's ass to the blondie minus the silver platter and ribbons. Lols. And I bet V's ass**** would look 'violet' enough on the next day. Hahaha *Shudder*

I'm kinda amused that Orphe went that far into putting the pet ring aka tracer inside V's body. Coz I think that's more Iason's way. Blondies' possessive traits sure are scary. You'd be in for a really long haul, V. Too late if you only realized it by now. ^^

Welcome to the devirginized blondies' club, Orphe. *snicker*

Wonder what Jupiter would tell Iason in the next chapters. Dare I say that the cats are almost out of the bag now?

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From alexxgalaxy on July 20, 2011
It's V's turn finally. Now that Orphe had him. I had no doubt he would be insatiable just like his brothers and will take V again and again. V could be insatiable too but considering his ass was on the line...hahaha, he was in deep shit. I wonder how he's going to get back to the twins. :D

Okay, so Sky was the only one left. Wait, there was still Jade. well, the boy was so delicate and seemed so fragile. There was no way Gideon would force himself on him like his brothers did to their lovely mongrels (except Marcus). But, Jade liked him, it could be easy but also be difficult. Let's what he got.

I'm not sure how to describe Iason's move. Was it safe to go see Jupiter? Was he so sure Jupiter wouldn't hurt him? Of course, if Jupiter wanted to harm him, she could have done it easily. Then again, sometimes people (or that machine) would let the dog lie if they weren't pushed too much.
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From Sheleeta on July 17, 2011
Ahh... had a lot to catch up on. Riki's causing trouble as always. I'm loving it. A lot's happened since I've been MIA. Glad that you've kept it up. Looking forward to the next installment again.

-Sheleeta
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From kuroineko on July 10, 2011
Hey that was so good!
But I�m really curious how Aisha will handel Sky and if the brothers could meet regually. They so cute together.
I also would like to see how Riki kick the asses of those elites that are after him.
You keep writing, I keep reading.
Love!!
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From Sparrowhawk on July 09, 2011
Good work on the latest chapter! Marcus was totally fooled by Fidget, and I must say, so was I until Fidget started acting like ... well, Fidget. Then I thought ... hmm, something's wrong here, lol. And of course, it was the eyedrops *smacks herself in the head* should have known, lol. I was laughing so bad at that part! Well, Riki hasn't gotten up to too much, thankfully, since he doesn't want to get his ass hauled off by Iason. Who are those three at the end? I'm thinking two of them are Jade's former master and Kirin, but who's the third person? Hmm ... a lot to look forward to! Please update soon!!!
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From ANON - Kay on July 06, 2011
*snicker* Marcus the Sucker got his cherry pop by Fidget, who played him by shedding croco tears (and using eye drops at that). Welcome to the devirginized Blondies club, dude ^^.

And Riki, oh I so miss the attention on his actions in FC. And you are being mean stopping when things are heating up too ^^. I can see that plots and drama are in the air. Who are the three people who had their eyes on him? Jerico, Kirin and assassin? Aww, I'm so wanna read what happens next!
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From alexxgalaxy on July 04, 2011
Nice play, Keita. I thought he was really upset like Marcus did. I sensed something wasn't right that the boy was too eager and he didn't really resist Marcus too much. I know that why now.

Did Iason really not send anymore to keep an eye on Riki? Riki was strong but it's inevitably for the boy to not get into trouble. He could still get himself hurt however strong he was.
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From kuroineko on June 30, 2011
Hallo
I just found your story Forever Caged and I couldn't stop reading untill I was through.
A wile ago I read Taming Riki from Kira, since then I haven't found a story so captivating.
But your story is even better. (Not the handcore S&M) You're really brilliant!!!
The twins, V and their Blondeis are so cool.
Will Riki met Kirin and Jerico when he'll run around in Midas.
I'd like to see what'll happen to this bastards.
Keep writing, please.
And I think you should really end the story when the thing with Jupiter is solved.
But a sequel wouldn't hurt. A prequel wouldn't be necessary I think, almost everybody have seen Ai no kusabi, and that is the prequel. And the past of the twins sound so depressing. I don't know if I want to know more about it.
Awaiting your update.
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