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From ANON - Kay on June 28, 2011
Sweet Raoul and Katze scene, it's nice to see Katze dropped his control once in a while.

Just about time Orphe, Marcus and Aisha got to know their mongrels true name. Aww, really couldn't wait what would happen to them after this. After all the tricks the three mongrels played so far, hopefully the blondies could maintain their default dominant and seme position... or else they might be the laughingstock of Tanagura if words got around that not only they got played by their pets, they end up as submissive too? ^^

Actually, for the above wish, it's just my preference. Blondies stay seme and mongrels stay uke. Though I think I'd enjoy whatever you throw at us and never get enough on it, lol.

Yay! Bet Riki got a field day in Midas, and *may troubles follow him around* so I could read amazing action scenes in the next chapters.

Even after longer chapter you update this time, I fidget in my chair, couldn't wait for the next one to come out ^^

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From Sparrowhawk on June 27, 2011
Woo! Katze is hot stuff in that first scene, almost had to douse myself in ice water (: Annnnnnnnd ... Marcus figures out that the twins have switched on him and Aisha! Bwahaha! Thought he would. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Fidget and Sky were sooo asking for it! Ooooh, and can't forget Sky returning to his normal self. Rather than being put off by it, though, it seems Aisha's fired up for the challenge of taming the cruel little mongrel. Looking forward to that. What's Orphe gonna do to get V to tell him his true name? Hehe, so much to look forward to in the next chapter! Darn, cliffhanger. Hmm, what's Riki going to do? Looking forward to the next chapter, as usual!!! Your story is so entertaining. Keep up the good work!
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From alexxgalaxy on June 27, 2011
WOW, what Raoul said to Katze, I don't know how to describe it but it was kind of touching. It sounded like the vow in a wedding. I wish Raoul let Katze talk. I wanted to hear Katze's response to his Blondie's words of affection. Katze was so shy about his feeling. Spilling �All I do is think about you.� already made himself blushed. So adorable! LOL No wonder it drew the vow-like remark out of his Blondie.

haha, finally! The twins's real identities were blown. Not bad huh, Macus. I can't wait to see how Aisha wins Sky's heart. Sky was one little tough mongrel. He was not as innocent and kind as Fidget. Other than being agitated by Macus, I also wonder if he was a little mad that Aisha couldn't tell Fidger and him apart.

I thought V's real name would be revealed on the spot. Was Orphe able to smoke it out later?
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From alexxgalaxy on June 20, 2011
wow, if that's what it went for Riki, I wonder what it would go for Katze. Unlike Riki, Katze didn't drink the "drink", he seemed pretty conscious about what he was doing, or what he intended to do. hehe, it would be very interesting to see Katze seduce Raoul.
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From ANON - Kay on June 20, 2011
Ahh... Riki and Iason hour. Not bad ^^

Though my fantasy involved Iason grabbing and molesting Riki in front of everyone and it'd be one hell of a time of awesome blondie performance, combined with Riki affecting everyone and Lily emitting arousing scent were enough to convince the rest of the Elites population to lose their virginity that very night and the party would turn to an orgy bwahahahaha, then later they'd all hail Iason as the new ruler and unite to overthrow Jupiter... *got shot by Jupiter's spy android and die*

An outing gift to Midas? I suspect that something might happen to Riki there since troubles follow him everywhere, with Jerico up to something and Kirin's unnatural interest in him (is he whom I thought he is?). You sure know how to surreptitiously develop your plots and throw the bomb in a big bang later. ^^ Even if nothing happens, it'd be good for Riki to be let loose some time. Being cooped up all the time can kill anyone, yeah?

Ahem... I wonder if Lily would get harsher treatment from Mikhail since he was the one who used his scent to calm or affect Riki's behaviour in the party. And he let Riki kissed him too. Hell if Mikhail didn't notice that.

Would Jade get some attention from Gideon in later chapters? He contributed his voice to affect Riki too. He needs to be fondled, uh no... admonished a little, rite? *batting lashes innocently*

As for Valen, whooo boy... this mongrel is soo gonna get in trouble. I wanna see a both enraged and aroused Orphe for once ^^

Hehe, hope my review won't bore you to death, coz I really wanna read the upcoming chapters. ^^

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From Sparrowhawk on June 20, 2011
Another great chapter (: Riki so got what he deserved. But you gotta give him a little slack for his reply when Iason asked him about how it felt to kiss Lily, saying that it was Iason he was thinking of even if he can't remember. H-O-T!!!! Their little lovemaking session afterward was also sizzling. Iason's giving Riki free rein in Midas? Hmm, unexpected. No wonder Riki's suspicious. What's he gonna do with that freedom, I wonder.
So can't wait to see if V gets caught trying to switch the twins back *rubs hands together gleefully* His interaction was Orphe after waking up was awesome! Loved how the Blondie told him in no uncertain terms that he'll be fully aware of it when he takes him for the first time. Ooooh, so gave me the chills! Thanks for the update!!! Loved it, as always. Keep up the good work (: (:
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From ANON - kay on June 15, 2011
Oh... No!!! I want more! Really, how can you stop here when things are getting more interesting... **wish I could kidnap you and make you write next chapter in one sitting**

I've always loved it whenever Riki makes Iason pissed off, more so jealous - intentionally or not, coz my perverted self wanna see Riki being punished so much, and punishment by Iason brings a lot of hot scenes **nosebleed** ^^

The twins will cause trouble again... sometimes I pity Marcus and Aisha that I hope they can tame the feisty mongrels faster, or is it the other way round? And it'd be exciting to see the time Orphe got to pound Violet's ass, as well as learning his true name. I wish Jade's relationship with Gideon would come out to light sooner or later, coz Jade is one adorable angel.

Geez, I might just drown in my own fantasies and anticipations if I keep writing my thoughts here. Lols. I'd be good and wait *patiently* for the next chapter ^^

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From Sparrowhawk on June 13, 2011
Oh dear! Did the twins just switch places on their Blondies?! They are going to be in such deep shit, lol. Not to mention Riki. Can't wait to see what Iason's going to do to him for his little ... ahem ... display. Sounds like punishment time! I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!! A pissed Iason really gives me the chills. Thanks so much for the update! You have no idea how many times I checked the site to see if there was anything new in your story even when I knew you weren't posting this last week. What can I say? I'm addicted. Keep up the good work (: (:
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From alexxgalaxy on June 13, 2011
Whoa, what happened to Riki and Katze? Katze grinned...did we ever see "Katze" and "grin" in the same sentence? I can't recall a time that the elegant ex-Furniture grinned. While Iason was in a foul mood, Raoul seemed to be getting a very tasty night and very yummy Katze. :D
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From UchihaRiddle on June 07, 2011
THAT WAS FUCKING AWSOME!!!!! THE BEST AI NO KUSABI STORY EVER!!! YOU ROCK!!! SO HURRY UP AND UPDATE BEFORE I DIE FROM SUSPENSION!!!!
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From ANON - kay on May 31, 2011
Wow... you really made my day today. And I know that I'd never get enough of your new chapters. Couldn't help but wonder what will happen next, coz with Riki and the gang together there'd always be chaos awaiting.

Please take care of your project first, so that you could focus on your stories better. Really, this is the best Ai no Kusabi fics I've read so far. You did a great job satisfying the fans. ^^
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From Sheleeta on May 31, 2011
I loved the scene at the party, though I was afraid for poor Jade. It's nice to return to your pleasant world, working has really taken a lot out of me. I look forward to your next installment, as always. I can't wait to see what happens with Iason losing the bet.
-Sheleeta
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From alexxgalaxy on May 30, 2011
haha, how come Niko always ended up with compromising situation and got caught up by his Blondie? Damn! You're an evil! :D I felt a little bad for him though. It's so embarrassing and awkward to have to attend the party as a pet. He used to be a furniture being low profile and now he had to subject to the scrutinizing of the others.

Jesus! I thought Jade was going to be taken away by Jerico. Thank god Riki caught them in time. wow, Riki was really strong now, even strong enough to tackle a Elite.

During this party, I bet Aisha got to see some of the real color of his sweet obedient mongrel.

"If he did then he would get the truth of what his time has been like with the Blondie this whole time� It was too embarrassing�"

Okay, you gotta to spill and clarify what things that Gideon did to make Jade feel good and embarrassing all at the same time. :p

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From Sparrowhawk on May 30, 2011
Loved the new chapter! I was waiting for Fidget, Sky, and V to do something, lol. Oh, and the way Riki confronted Jerico ... perfect. It's great that Jade's being treated so well now, and he's starting to trust Gideon. Kinda wonder what's gonna happen to Riki's boys after they've drunk so much of those drinks he warned them not to, though. Sky seems prepared for it, but I'm excited to find out what goes on with Fidget and V. Thanks so much for updating! I'm sad you won't be able to update this next week, but so goes life, right? I can totally sympathize. Can't wait for your next chapter!! Best of luck (:
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From alexxgalaxy on May 29, 2011
ummm...it seems that you didn't post the update sucessfully...?
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