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By : Savagehunger47

From Sparrowhawk on May 23, 2011
Great new chapter! I was so excited to read it, and not disappointed in the least. Fidget is so funny! Love the part in the very beginning when he's comparing the pets who are performing to hummingbirds and rabbits and such. Oh, and the part when Riki flips off the other Blondies, haha! Utterly brilliant. Riki and Iason are as sexy as ever. Can't wait to hear what happens next!! Please update soon (:
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From ANON - kay on May 21, 2011
It's good to see Fidget reunited with Sky again... I really thought for a second that there'd be request for them to perform on the stage, with them so totally into each other. That attracted quite an audience, of course ^^

It's really gonna end in another chapter? I love this story too much that I hope it'd go on forever... Are you considering in making the sequels after this?

Wish you'd write ai no kusabi fics forever... lols
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From alexxgalaxy on May 21, 2011
Can't believe it reached an end (for this chapter) already. We hadn't got to see what Katze wore.
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From Sparrowhawk on May 09, 2011
Ooooh, Chaz ... that sounds so forboding. Trained to kill. Not good, not good. Can't wait to read what happens with this guy. Jerico is stupid, though, obviously this is going to come back to bite him in the butt even if he does manage to accomplish something with it. Hope he doesn't get his hands on Jade again. Poor kid. I think Sir Gideon is a good match for him, though ... I'm just waiting to see what he decides to do with the kid.
Man, Fidget has got it coming to him. How much can Marcus take before he snaps? I'm excited to see how the bet between Riki and Iason goes, lol. Please update soon!! I am seriously Forever Caged deprived when I have nothing new to read from your story *whines* which means I'm gonna go back and read earlier stuff. Love that stuff, too, but I am seriously sitting on pins and needles waiting to see how the rest of the story developes. Thanks so much, again, for posting this story! Keep up the good work! (: (:
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From alexxgalaxy on May 09, 2011
Okay, I don't really understand the stakes of the bet either. Let's see how it plays out.

I was surprised that Iason took away Riki's cock ring this soon. I know he planned to do it but man, he acted really fast.

Loved the Riki flushed. It's quite adorable. It's very rare to see Riki and "flushed" in the same sentence when he's not in bed with Iason. ;p
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From Sheleeta on May 03, 2011
Awesome three chapters... I've been so busy, but I really do feel sorry for Lily, he goes through so much shit. And Niko... love it. Really do.
-Sheleeta
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From Sparrowhawk on May 02, 2011
Awesome new chapter! I've been rereading the rest of it while waiting, and I was not disappointed (: Great development between Mikhale and Lilly. I'm so glad Mikhale finally kept his promise to let Lilly see his parents. I must say, I find it hilarious that Gabriel keeps finding Niko in a compromising position with his other pets and Niko just keeps telling him that it's "not what it looks like" lol. Classic!! Loved the new chapter, and can't wait for the next (: (: Keep up the good work!
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From alexxgalaxy on May 01, 2011
I guess it will take years for Lilly to forgive what Mikhale had done to him. Despit his love for Mikhale, it seemed that fear still took up most of his thought and feeling towards Mikhale.

For what he said to Sir Gabriel, Niko got ball. I doubt Sir Gabriel will hurt him but who knows. The boy needed some time to get used to his new status. Raoul will not be behind him anymore and might not be able to take him under his wing even if he wants to. His shether now was his new master, Sir Gabriel.
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From Sparrowhawk on April 25, 2011
Hey there, just wanted to give my praises for your story. I absolutely adore it! I read all forty-nine chapters in two days cause I just couldn't put it down (figuratively speaking, lol). I just read the latest chapter, and of course, loved that, too. Can't wait for more!! Riki and Iason have always been my favorite out of all yaoi couples, and they still are in this story, but I'm finding I'm coming to love the relationship between Fidget (currently acting as Sky) and Marcus almost equally as much. I can say with the utmost conviction that this is THE BEST Ai no Kusabi fanfiction I have ever read! The plot is Amazing, the descriptions of places and people are easy to understand and imagine, the interaction between characters draws me in, the sex scenes are HOT, the characters themselves are so believable I almost find myself expecting them to come into the OVAs as I watch them, and I love the humor that's sprinkled inbetween the serious scenes. Have you ever considered writing an original novel and getting it published? If you haven't you should definitely consider it. If you do, I can guarantee I'd be one of your Biggest fans. Awesome job! Keep up the good work (: Thanks so much for posting this story, I enjoy it immensely!!
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From ANON - chikilicki on April 25, 2011
besides the usual grammatical/spelling errors(which soon became savagehungunese to me, which i'm proud to say i'm almost fluent in now :P) this is the shizzzzzzzz!! I can truly say my Easter 4 day holiday was VERY well spent I'm impatiently awaiting more...just when i think i've got this figured out more mysterious stuff pops up and kudos to you on writing multiple character pairings and not confusing the general reading public.

I only ever saw the first ova but it was enough to fall in love with Iason and Riki, i HATE Guy,(haven't been able to get my hands on the updated oav and i've never had the chance to read the novels) your writing is consuming...I felt like i fell in love with Iason and Riki all over again with the generous addition of the rest of the super 7 and gabriel and their other halves. Can't wait to see the devs between the twins and v and their blondies, in particular when aisha figures out how keito has been deceiving him and when orphe finds out valen is really violet...i can't wait lol i started rationing chapters as i realized i was approaching the end of what's posted, funnily enough i will now be perusing the AnK section here for more treats such as yours. I stumbled onto your AnK fiction because of your Naruto fiction which also your original which is absolutely scrumptious as well, a bookmark has been laid and i will be checking backk periodically for updates. My Hat is off to you!! ;) (this review was not meant to be this long but hey after 50 chapters it seems rather more appropriate)
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From alexxgalaxy on April 25, 2011
Okay I didn't like Raoul forbidding Niko's "contact" with Sir Gabriel but since I like Raoul, I felt bad for him to have to let go Niko go like that. Niko would be happy to finally get to be with his blondie but I doubt he would be happy to leave his master. Will Raoul take it out on Katze? That gives me a little chill.

Despite his mischief, Fidget remined some innocence. I can't imagine Riki, Sky or V doing the same thing. If they did let out some information to their blondies, they would most likely did it for reasons other than just their fondness towards their man. It's about time for Aisha for get suspicious. I look forward to his reaction when Sky's true self is revealed to him, especially he had always thought he got the innocent one of the twins.
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From alexxgalaxy on April 16, 2011
Daryl never appeared in this story. That's okay. I'm not a fan of him but learning what Iason did to him, it gave me a little chill. >_
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From Sheleeta on April 12, 2011
Oh wow, I see even more trouble brewing on the horizon, coming from many different directions, I don't know when I'll be cringing and saying "Oh god..." as alwasy, I'm enjoying your story immensely and look forward to the next installment.
-Sheleeta
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From alexxgalaxy on April 10, 2011
Yeah, chapter 47 was back! I can't believe V screwed up that big. It cracked me up that he put the bracelet on the wrong wrist. And Fidget, was he not aware of Iason's presence or being too rush, he didn't have time to care who was around to eardrop what he said to Riki?

Although Iason was a sadistic bastard, I felt sorry for him for not being able to steal some time to be with his beloved. Riki must have also wanted more time with him after being apart from him for weeks.
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From alexxgalaxy on April 09, 2011
well, shouldn't the latest chapter be 47? How come it's 48? Or it's indeed 48 that 47 was not uploaded sucessfully?

Gabriel did act fast. Iason is going to need his support and as much support as he could get from the blondies. What is Raoul going to do? He must not be pleased if he has to turn his "son" over.

So Riki did remember Niko. Thinking back, the boy somehow left out the fact that how much he had changed over the years. Still, Fidget recognized him immediately.

I hope Kirin wouldn't be stupid enough to assassinate a Blondie. Or shall we worry for Gideon? Nah, if he was so easy to be taken down, he wouldn't be one of the seven Blondies and be entrusted with the millitary.

While Iason can't wait and drill everything out from Riki, I'm curious about what the seven and Gabriel had discussed in their meeting except Gabriel's claim on Niko.

Please update soon.
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