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Reviews for Acquiescence

By : KusamaKun
  • From Penelope on August 18, 2011
    I don't want to bash your story, but i must state a dey things.

    Im honestly displeased with your story, i can't find a more pleasant word to use so sorry.
    I just can't see how you will make this story work, no matter what you think, hurting someone as bad as allen did to kanda is unforgiveable, so it is impossible for kanda to feel anything for allen other than pure hatred.

    I must say i am unimpressed with it, but of course i am not in control of what comes to your mind.
    But before i go please think about it, how would you feel if you were raped that brutally?
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  • From nikita005 on January 01, 2011
    Hello there!

    Well, I just finished the final chapter, and I have to say I really enjoyed your story. I'm anxious to see how things play out in the sequel now that Alan is... not himself, to say the least. Wouldn't want to spoil it for anyone who might read this before the fic, now would I? Lol

    That being said, I did want to mention that I found it a little distracting to read the unedited/unbeta'd versions of the chapters. Typos can actually take away from the story after a point. If you don't have a beta, then maybe a few extra read-throughs before posting might help? ^_^

    Anyways, here's hoping for more updates from "Domineering Hearts" soon. Can't wait to see what happens!

    Later!
    nikita :)
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  • From Fizzyology on November 15, 2010
    (growl) You're evil. EVIL I SAY! D< Granted an innocent Allen is fucking adorable but STILL! Evil evil evil! So now I have to wait for another story!? (explodes)

    Be quick with the first Chapter of Domineering Hearts if you know what's good for you~!
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  • From Fizzyology on October 17, 2010
    Gah! (Explodes) Damn it I want the next chapter now! DX You enjoy making me frustrated, don't you? D< lol
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  • From Fizzyology on October 09, 2010
    Oooh you really make me want to kill something! D< I want the next chapters! You're murdering me here! I started reading this last night and I haven't done ANYTHING else since! (flails arms)

    I might have to come after you with explosives if you don't update soon~! ^-^
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  • From HollowedRose on September 06, 2010
    I really can't wait to read the next chapter! I love your fanfiction btw. I often check to see if a new chapter is up. I really can't wait to see how a 'sober' Kanda will react when seeing Lavi.
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  • From MissJixnce on August 11, 2010
    Ooh. Kanda seems like he's starting to get used to Allen.

    xD This is the first sadistic kind of fic I've read. It's interesting.
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  • From kurosturu on June 13, 2010


    I registered JUST to review this wonderfully sadistic fic. There aren't enough like this and they need some love and encouragement.

    Thank you, thank you, for being one of the few writers who can pull of the kind of sadism that makes me oh so happy. Also for adding a Wisely. XD
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