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Reviews for Dominant Nation

By : Florville
  • From ANON - canada-on-top on June 15, 2010
    love this story, hope you update soon!
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  • From dragonpuff on June 02, 2010
    Ah, I'm not used to people updating things so fast! I expected maybe one more chapter, and I got three instead! Happy day!
    So, a couple things I need to special mention. The cute kiss/hug at breakfast the morning after made we feel all warm and fuzzy inside. ^-^ Just so much of a 'thank you for being you' moment! The "affectionate squeeze" part especially makes me happy, though I can't really say why...
    And when Canada does start to take control there? HOT. STUFF.

    And, for the record, I don't think something like this would make a good PWP anyway. Canada and Russia have too much history, individually and together, for a story like this to be simple pornz. I'm glad you are fleshing out a good plot along with the hotness. It makes for better reading. ;)
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  • From Queeny on June 02, 2010
    I really love this story, but then I realized you didn't ever exactly state what tea Ivan did drink. :'D
    I was all 'Since I love Russian Caravan I'll see what this other tea is like'.
    xD;;


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  • From jeazard on May 30, 2010
    Oooh, I certainly did enjoy that! *_*x
    Matthew is such a sweet Dom... and probably the only kind that would really work for Ivan and make him learn something about himself so that in the end the whole thing can make him feel good.

    Much love!
    ~jea
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  • From animekid on May 29, 2010
    moe...russia....moe....russia.

    Holyshitomgmygodmattieisontop!!!!! *faints*

    And Russia is...moe...and....hotdamnthisiskinkyandhotashell *faints again*

    Sorry...two hot mattie stories in a row I read today killed me. Also uke!Russia is...rare and my kink. The biggest nation being moe is like....ohhhh.

    And oh man it's rare to see Mattie on top! I also love the play you use in history, canon, etc.

    ...f5ing this because I don't have author alert.

    Wait is this going to be straight up S&M whips and cuffs and spanking and kinky because then I have official died~

    If you add Russia's voice change and his kolkolkol I think I would die again. It's strange because his normal voice is fake.....*did not know that til recently*

    Still good fic
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  • From EllieRamsey on May 28, 2010
    I am loving this, utterly loving it. It would have been easy to start well and not deliver, but it is just getting better and better. Can't wait for next chapter! And hello from /y/
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  • From Raholea on May 28, 2010
    It was an excellent appatizer! and you're perfectly right, one can write a scene like this well enough, but when you start introducing plot and backgrounds of characters and how it can influence the current situation, sometimes a little build-up is a necesity, not an option. So far you've done pretty well on the build up.. ^^

    and btw, th epolar bear door to the shower makes me laugh. I live in central alaska, so while i haven't personally seen live bear (yet) much less a polar, i can only imagine and sympathize with Canada!! My dog is bad enough, a bear is infinitely worse!!
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  • From Queeny on May 28, 2010
    Love sexually responsible porns.
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  • From Queeny on May 28, 2010
    What if Ivan wants more than seven days??? Heartbreak? D:
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  • From Queeny on May 28, 2010
    Yay!! More seme Canada and uke Russia. Love it already.
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  • From ANON - lomedraug on May 27, 2010
    It's me wopkater! Finally stopping on here to say how much I love this story, and I'm always happy to come home from work and find you've updated it.
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  • From ANON - Ell on May 27, 2010
    I'm really enjoying this! It's hot, but what stands out is that you're including the trust and negotiation involved in BDSM, without it seeming tacked on. Sometimes D/S stories give me the creeps because they really don't make it clear that all parties involved actually want it that way, but you've got that nicely covered, the kink without the creep.
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  • From ANON - JRKio on May 27, 2010
    Wow! Another great chapter to your awesome story! I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From Raholea on May 27, 2010
    *squees*
    ok, so i've been waiting to see how this set of scenes turned out before reviewing, i'm kinda one of those people to ignore the cliffs and wait until the scene is finished to decide if i like it or not.
    and i do! i love the slow build-up, and the way canada makes sure Ivan is OK before continuing, cause really, there IS a difference between rape, sex, and makin love. *sniffles*
    ok, corny stuff out of the way. Can't wait to see what you do for the more dominating stuff.. *grins ferally*
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  • From silentscream on May 27, 2010
    Keep updating! I didn't read the last two chapters, even though you had been talking about them on /y/, and now I'm glad I have. But I am excited for more! Like you said, the dirtiness is just getting started!

    (You favor Matthew and you're Canadian, I favor Alfred and I'm American. In Japan, they love Japan. Do you think we just naturally love our own nation more?)
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