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By : peterschell
  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2010
    This is one of the stories I'd go back to regularly to reread the thread, both because it's so hot, and in the hopes that material had been added. Pleasepleaseplease keep adding to it!
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  • From ANON - Hinoron on July 02, 2010
    Excellent! It was a hot and facination thread on Addventure, I'm eager to see the rest of it cleaned up, polished, and presented in a more linear story format. Glad you took up this project T.H.T. ^_^
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  • From Imsadistic on June 28, 2010
    What a fun idea, can't wait what you're going to do to this new gal.

    You're the champ!

    Sid
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  • From JLucPitard on June 20, 2010
    I never would've imagined this combo, but it works and there are so many scenarios the three of them could manage...
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  • From Imsadistic on June 14, 2010
    Really loving your story. Where can I find your other ones? You can send me a message through the forum if you're a member. Btw, I not sure if you know, I kind of played on your role playing idea to create my new series. Not trying to promote myself, just wanted you to know and hope you don't mind. It's vastly different.

    You have a real talent for writing romantic lemons and can't wait for more.

    Sorry I suck at reviewing, but still, keep up the good work.

    Sid
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  • From anss123 on June 13, 2010
    Heh, "Mikado is waiting"!

    Sort of like the premise that Ryouga and Ranma's fights have all been faked. It could explain a lot; like how Ryouga could be "tricked" into thinking he had a sister. Behind the scenes I'm now imagining the two having a good laugh that the others think their games are serious and discussing just how much they can get away with.

    Could for instance put the traditional Ranma archs in the backdrop and give them a new perspective. The koi rod of love was no longer an accident, the braking pint training has other uses, etc. However that would only work if the rest of the cast wasn't blatantly OOC, 'course.

    Anyway, liked how you contrasted Ryouga's behavior with how he really should have acted. E.g. "Out in public maybe he'd have roared with rage and set off on a mad charge, but this was in private." And that his home is a fortress, would have liked it better if Ranma had been surprised by this – I.e. having fully expected to be able to break out – and perhaps making this their first time going "that" far, then Nabiki pops in to help Ranma not realizing it was all a game (this would of course give Nabiki a heart, unlike canon Nabiki, but hey!) but when she does she suddenly wants to participate too – even if not all the way for now – which could explain Nabiki's change in behavior as the series progressed. (Come to think of it Nabiki got cold after the ice skating mach… hmm.)

    Well anyway again, enjoyed the story. Thanks.

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  • From ANON - Yue Ryong on June 11, 2010
    Yay! Faking it is back! And being tightened up and all! If this is a success, is there any chance of Ranma Does Nerima & even *gasp* Akane-kun getting some love?
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  • From Imsadistic on June 08, 2010
    Loving this can't wait for more, you're quite the writer. I like that is not only a well written lemon but a love story too.

    More please!

    Sid
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  • From ANON - Dai on June 08, 2010
    Great story! it's cute and yet it makes me wish Ranma could love Ryoga in the sense Ryoga wants.

    You have a few errors here and there, but this is a sexy story. So, it's understandable.
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  • From ANON - Fareden46 on June 08, 2010
    Wow this is getting interesting I can't wait to see what else you do.
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  • From ANON - Nanya on June 06, 2010
    Huh, interesting, didn't realize that you posted this here. So... Please update, this is pretty good.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2010
    This was always one of my favorite story arcs. Glad to see it getting a new life.
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