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Reviews for \'Hey Shinji, you wanna...\'

By : Markusthe3rd
  • From GuiltyDevilGearSolid on November 24, 2010
    I take it now that this fanfic is now completed right? The party was fun while it lasted. Thanks for providing us with a fabulous lemon.
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  • From GuiltyDevilGearSolid on November 24, 2010
    Now that's what I call a vast improvement over the previous chapter. Asuka is a kinky lady. Snowballing isn't exactly my kind of party,but hey I sure Shinji didn't mind it. And Misato got horny listening to the threesome going at it. I can't blame her. She must be quite jealous they're bonding with one another very passionately.

    I salute you on providing us readers with a Asuka/Rei/Shinji threesome lemon. Great job.
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  • From theklvkid2 on October 04, 2010
    I like the way you portray the characters. Rei especially, but also Shinji and Asuka as well as Ritsuko. I got to see these four people in a light that I don't usually see them in concerning their emotions and characteristics. Thanks for the treat!
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  • From thmanwithnoname on October 03, 2010
    Great little story. I'm sorry that you'll be stopping next chapter, there really isn't enough with Shinji, Asuka, _and_ Rei together.
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  • From GuiltyDevilGearSolid on September 07, 2010
    Decent but too short. You clearly rushed this one out.
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  • From GuiltyDevilGearSolid on August 08, 2010
    Nah it would be better for all parties to keep to their own threesome you know to not interfere with the harmony and balance especially considering Asuka use to adore Kaji and I heavily doubt Shinji would want to see such a thing play out in front of him watching Kaji fuck Asuka. Asuka might be fine sharing Shinji with Rei but that is far as she is willing to go.

    Who can also forget the massive age difference between the teens and adults. They could have an orgy but not for experimenting; simply to observe and learn new sexual techniques.

    You should also have Ritusko stick it to Gendo somehow by showing him a DVD of how much she is having without him. That would make my day.

    Kindof disappointed Asuka didn't announce to either Rei or Shinji that she loved them but I guess you're saving that for last.

    Great work you're ding here.





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  • From Ancalador on August 07, 2010
    Nice! There is so little good straight (or female-bi) stories on this site, please keep writing this one!!
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  • From GuiltyDevilGearSolid on July 25, 2010
    Well Well Well. It's been far too long since somebody posted a Rei/Asuka/Shinji threesome lemon pairing. And with doujin artists focusing too much on Rei/Shinji,Asuka/Shinji, and Mari/Shinji lately there's isn't that many quality doujins of them either nor has there been hints of anyone willing to provide more fap material of them together.

    But hey this lemon is turning out quite fine I must say. You are taking it step by step but I do want to have it end up having all 3 pleasuring each other. The three pilots are not too drastically different characterization wise and far from acting oddly.

    My pet peeve I am having though is you are using the wrong kind of quotation marks to indicate speech. " " That's the correct ones to be using

    ' ' This is for thoughts.

    Thought I point it out.

    I also hope you keep Misato out of this except as a spectator.



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  • From diodarko on July 17, 2010
    Hope you get into the 'meat' of the story next chapter.
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